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PostSubject: Yuki, Arimi [Kiri Genin] Sun 19 May 2013, 6:13 am

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Yuki, Arimi

THE INFO.

Name:Yuki,Arimi
Nickname:Ari
Age:17
Gender:Male
Appearance:Arimi is lean and standing at 70 inches tall (5’10”) he weighs 110 lbs. His thin frame allows him to be as agile as he his. Low muscle definition due to his fighting style. Arimi has the skin of the Yuki clan. His skin is as white as the purest ice without a crater, freckle, or blemish. His long silky black hair is usually tied up in a long pony tail that goes down to his waist. His hair is thick, but he makes sure not to get it caught on surrounding objects. Arimi’s brooding dark brown eyes have an alluring charm to them and often help him make his points. Arimi’s face is also quite attractive being as flawless as it is.

Arimi tends to differ from the usual attire of the Yuki clan. This is due to his upbringing by people outside the clan. On his head he wears a black straw hat that has his forehead protector sewn into it. This hat also has small glass chimes on the left side of the front of the hat. The outer most chimes have 4 glass spheres, the middle has 6 and the closest to his face has 8 spheres. These spheres reflect the images from slightly behind him so he may see from behind somewhat. The first layer of his clothing is a skin-tight black unitard that helps him keep from being impaired from the prohibiting movement off other clothing. This garment goes from his nose to his ankles and cover all in between, even his hands. The next layer is a black cloak. At the collar it goes up to each ear then converges down at the bottom of his neck and gently cascades down to his shoulders. The sleeves are longer than his arm and hands; the purpose of this is to conceal his hands. The bottom of this cloak goes to his mid-calf. His shoes are dark black like the rest of the attire and are light weight as to not prohibit his speed.

Forehead Protector: Forehead protector is sewed into his black straw hat he wears on his head.

Personality:
Arimi does not talk much outside combat. He is not fond of casual conversations and avoids people most of the time. He talks mostly with awkward nods and hand gestures when needs to. This causes people to see Arimi as an outsider without a lot of friends, but in fact he makes friends. He is kind in his actions and gestures. People who know Arimi know that he has a gentle heart. He does a lot of meditating, this is speculated to be for forgetting his past.. He was raised by violent people so he has a lot of pent up anger that can sometimes get the best of him, but hardly ever does this happen. Armimi loves to play games. He focuses his time outside training to casual games and tends to stay away from the more competitive ones. When he is in competitive situations he can lose control and overdo it.

Arimi is a cold fighter in more ways than one. He is unforgiving and will take any chance he has to finish the battle.  He lets out all of his anger in battles and in sparring as to channel that negative energy into something more useful.  He actually talks more in combat than he does outside of it. This is to confuse the enemy and get in his head. People say that he is a completely different person than he is just walking around. This characteristic makes a lot of people classify him as bipolar, but he shrugs this off as just a silly notion people made up. Arimi can flip from gentle heart to life taker in a moment if needed. His pain and inner sorrow allow him the animosity and hatred against people he dislikes to do so. This often wins the fight for it catches people off guard.

Arimi is the kind of person who doesn't socialize much when he doesn't need to. He tends to stay at home and meditate until he has to work. People see him this as anti-social behavior, which it is sometimes. However, this contributes greatly on how nice he is to be on a given day. On a day without meditation he is like a drunk with no wine or a coffee drinker without their cup of joe. He is grouchy and irritable and even downright pissed off. He meditates for the sake of other people. The thought of his family's betrayal on him still angers and saddens him a lot. He usually thinks about things other than his family while meditating, he focuses on the positives. This boosts his spirit and personal moral and get him ready for whatever he may face during the rest of his day.  

Clan:Yuki

Nindō:”Just because you can’t see me doesn't mean I’m not there.”

THE NINJA.

Origin:Mizu no Kuni

Affiliation:Kirigakure

Rank:Genin

Specialties:
Main::Ninjutsu
Sub::Weaponry (Main;Short)

Elemental Affinities:
Main::Suiton[Water]
Sub::Fuuton[Wind]
Special:: Hyōton [Ice]

Combat Style:
At the beginning of the battle Arimi uses his Ice techniques to tire out his enemy from afar, removing himself from any danger. He forces them to use up a lot of their chakra and exhaust them. This is so the next stage of his fighting style can be safer than it would be if they weren’t tired. Next he come a bit closer and uses small weapons like shuriken and kunai to keep the enemy moving so they don’t get any rest. The next phase varies a bit depending on how the battle is going. If it is going well them Arimi will get in close with a kunai and use his speed to make decisive jabs at the enemy causing them terrible injuries. If, however, he is on the losing side then he will use water techniques to keep the enemy dancing while he can wait to spot an opening to use a wind type Justus to turn the tides of the battle.

At the end of either of those situations if the battle is still going on then he will once again put himself at a distance  and attack with ice if he has any chakra left. If he doesn’t then his get in close and goes for hand to hand combat. He hopes for an opening so he may jab with another kunai. Arimi's weakness in battle is his inability to work with team mates. This is because of his past of untrustworthy family members. He tends to put all the weight on his shoulders and never asks for much help.

Special Characteristics:
Speed
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THE BACKGROUND.

History:
Early:
When Ashirimi was born everyone thought that he would be a weakling. They gave up on him and had even considered giving him away for a period of time. The lack of training he received later because of this would not help him either. At a young age Ashirimi was abused by his parents and by other family members on a daily basis because he “would never become anyone”. This led to a tormented pre-teen phase that also had to do with abuse. This time he was doing it to his friends and elders. Ashirimi was a trouble child and caused a lot of trouble for all who surrounded him. At age 12 he decided to run away from home because he was tired of what was going on. He didn’t want to be abused anymore and he didn’t like the person he was becoming. After a week of being out of the village he met a couple of ninja who were training near a small hut. He walked over to them and begged them for training because he wanted to become stronger to impress him family. They agreed and Ashirimi was exuberant, but to his surprise he didn’t train himself physically at all at first. Shei, the elder of the two trainers, trained Ashirimi in the art of meditating. This bored Ashirimi out of his mind at first, but eventually he came to understand the necessity for it in a ninja’s life and adapted well. Nikomu, a younger but equally wise trainer, trained Ashirimi in the art of self-control. This was a tougher concept for Ashirimi to handle because he had so much pent up anger and resentment towards human beings. Later he had come close to mastering that as well. Now Ashirimi was ready for physical training. He would practice walking on water for hours and then immediately go to work on taijutsu. He would go for long runs with heavy clothing to work on his speed. Then after all that he would spar with one trainer or the other. Learning how to pick apart a fighting style and the fighter themselves in the meantime. His training went on for about 2 years before he was ready to return to the village.

Returning:
Ashirimi decided that he wanted to start fresh, as a new person. He dropped the name “Ashirimi” for a shorter name, “Arimi”. He was partly excited to get back to the village, but also quite scared. He wanted to impress his family with his new found abilities like his Ice techniques and his skills in close combat. Though if they were to remember what he used to be they would still treat him the same. He contemplated this for a long time on his way back. While thinking he remembered that no one had ever come looking for him. This thought made Arimi stop walking almost instantly. He broke down, he cried for a short time, and then continued walking. “How could then not care? We are flesh and blood.” He thought to himself. That is when he decided that he wouldn’t tell his family that it was him. Instead he would try to become the best ninja anyone could be just to spite them. Arimi filled himself with that resentment all the way home. Arimi lived on the street for a couple months before he decided to reenter the ninja academy. Arimi passed within a year and was a Kirigakure ninja. This was the first step on his road to becoming a great ninja. The next step would have to be to find a place to live. To do that he would need to get a job. Arimi got a job as a “maid” in a small store that paid him in food and board. He had a place to live and he could eat. This was great. Arimi continued to train and practice just like his two trainers had taught him. He became more of a calm and gentle person and was loved by all the stores regular customers

Roleplay Sample:
Tsuchi saw that coming as he let his sensei hit him in the head. Tsuchi apologized and followed him as instructed Tsuchi walked over to the water and watched his sensei sit on the water and Tsuchi was kind of bored at the moment and he listened to what Kyosuke had to say “Such chakra control is not easily obtained by simply walking on water, but we will get you to this point. I know two of you can already walk on water and as such you will get the more advanced training to start. Mirashi, you will first learn how to run up trees.” Tsuchi was glad that at least the Uchiha could use general ninja skills but he had nothing against Mirashi and he wished him luck. Tsuchi turned to see his sensei go with Marashi to learn to climb trees. Tsuchi walked to the lake and listen to his sensei once again I don’t expect any of you two to learn this any time within the next 4 hours or so, but you will be practicing for just that long, and afterward we will see how you have done. So you two go and train, I want you each to walk to the other end of the lake and back as many times as you can. Tsuchi did so as he himself put on some weights and walked onto the water with Sakro.

Tsuchi's feet were slightly under water so he focused more chakra into his feet and pulled them out on top of the water, only an inch or two was under water Tsuchi smiled and walked slowly across the water. Tsuchi walked to about the half-way point and he put on some more weights on his legs. Tsuchi again sunk a little and then focused more and pulled his feet out of the water Tsuchi looked at Sakro and smiled and though 'this is to easy I’m going to make this more fun. Tsuchi shouted to Sakro "You want to make this a little more interesting by having a race?” Tsuchi smiled and waited for a response from his teammate Sakro. Tsuchi swayed in the wind and he had to again focus and pull his feet out of the water

THE ARSENAL.
Academy Jutsu
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Kirigakure Jutsu
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Suiton[Water]
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Fuuton[Wind]
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Hyōton [Ice]
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Kits and Equipment
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FACE CLAIM.

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PostSubject: Re: Yuki, Arimi [Kiri Genin] Thu 23 May 2013, 8:22 am

Your personality needs to be a little longer. Could you put a line break between your paragraphs as well, please? It just makes your application look neater.

Origin is the country your character comes from, not the village. So, in your case, I assume it would be Mizu no Kuni [Water Country].

Your combat style needs to be longer. At least 250 words. Yours currently stands at 226 words. Try adding in your character's weaknesses in combat.

You have only 11/15 available starting jutsu. You may want to add more, but it's not compulsory.



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PostSubject: Re: Yuki, Arimi [Kiri Genin] Sat 25 May 2013, 5:19 am

Thanks for the feedback

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PostSubject: Re: Yuki, Arimi [Kiri Genin] Sat 25 May 2013, 10:01 am

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PostSubject: Re: Yuki, Arimi [Kiri Genin] Tue 28 May 2013, 4:08 am

    # PERSONALITY
      On a day without meditation he is like a drunk with no whine or a coffee drinker without their cup of joe.
      The correct term here is 'wine' - "whine" is an action similar to crying or bitching.

      Also, while I won't decline the app for this, I would like some more information here. Namely, how do you justify Arimi going from a gentle heart to a merciless killer in half a second (see p.2) on the battlefield while simultaneously being antisocial yet still having a lot of friends (see p.1)? It's just generally confusing, because you seem to be playing both sides of the spectrum at the same time. Re-read through your whole personality and see if you see what I'm noticing, but if you don't see it or like it how it is, I won't decline the app just for that.


    # JUTSU
      You're at 14/15 of your allotted starter jutsu. Not an issue, just letting you know. Also, are any of these custom? :3


    # EQUIPMENT
      You have no equipment listed aside from your kit.. are you sure you want to do that? Getting weapons later will cost funds, so it's better to take at least one type of weapon here.


    # FACECLAIM
      Even if you're using original artwork, you need to fill this section out please. You can take a look at the faceclaim topic to get an idea of what the original artworks look like on the faceclaim.
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PostSubject: Re: Yuki, Arimi [Kiri Genin] Tue 18 Jun 2013, 4:04 am

I believe i have Fixed this.

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PostSubject: Re: Yuki, Arimi [Kiri Genin] Fri 21 Jun 2013, 6:09 pm

Looks good.

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PostSubject: Re: Yuki, Arimi [Kiri Genin] Fri 27 Sep 2013, 11:41 am

What in the hell are you going on about now? Stop wasting my time.
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