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PostSubject: Uchiha, Ranmaru [Kiri Genin] Sun 18 Apr 2010, 2:50 pm

Basic Information:

    Name:Uchiha, Ranmaru (1 Tomoe)
    Secondary Title:Sin,
    Age:12
    Gender:Male
    Physical Appearance:
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    Personality:
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    Catch Phrase:
    Prepare to meet your maker!
    Do you Fear the Reaper?
    Its getting cold isn't it


Clan Information:

Clan Name: Uchiha
Clan Location: Konoha
Clan Traits:

The Uchiha have a number of traits which set them apart from the normal ninja. First off being that they all seem to have black hair. Also, every one in this clan has a main element of fire. They seem to be very proficient in the three basic jutsu arts of Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, and Taijutsu (This does not mean Uchiha characters can have three specialties), and are usually known as the elite brand of shinobi. Uchiha generally seem to work with their speed rather then raw brute strength and are very agile and quick.

* Must have Fire as main element and either Ninjutsu or Genjutsu as a specialty

Kekkei Genkai:

Sharingan is the blood inheritance limit of the Uchiha Clan. The Uchiha are said to be descendants of the Hyuuga, with the Byakugan changing into the Sharingan over time. This doujutsu (eye skill) gives one the ability to read Genjutsu, Taijutsu and Ninjutsu and then defeat it. As such, the clan member can view a technique being performed and almost instantly memorize the movements required to be able to complete it, including the needed chakra moldings and seals used. However the clan member cannot copy techniques that are unique to another bloodline and the clan member must have a body capable of meeting the chakra and physical requirements to do the jutsu. This rarely stops the clan member though, as such stressful situations often push their limits farther and allow them to harness their full potential.

The Uchiha clan member is not granted the Sharingan at birth; it is only activated later in life, typically during a time of emotional stress in the heat of battle. The Sharingan itself can be transferred to another non-Uchiha by a medical ninja, such as happened with Leaf ninja Uchiha Obito to his teammate Hatake Kakashi. Because his body was not born to carry the Sharingan, the eye is always activated and it burns Kakashi's chakra when used. To lessen the impact of the Sharingan on Kakashi's body, he normally keeps the eye hidden and out of use. Also of note, is the fact Kakashi, a non-Uchiha, was able to advance the Sharingan from two tomoe to three tomoe after gaining the eye.

The Sharingan itself contains three tomoe (comma). A higher mastery of the Sharingan can be seen in the creation of a new tomoe in the eye, with three tomoe being the typical highest form of the eye. The rare Mangekyou form is a unique evolution of the Sharingan beyond the three tomoe form, please see its entry for more information. An eye possessing two tomoe can allow the Uchiha clan member to track the movement of an opponent and do some minor copying of an opponents attack. For avoiding incoming attacks, the Uchiha's speed and agility will greatly control whether they can move to avoid it. However, three tomoe will greatly help in this area.

Two tomoe will also allow the ninja to pierce Genjutsu and see the surrounding reality for what it really is. It can also allow the member to pierce another’s body and see their chakra. While the eye is not refined enough to see the tenketsu and chakra circulatory system like the Byakugan, it can view the movement and flow of chakra. This can help them tell if a person is trapped in a Genjutsu, or if an attacker is a real threat or merely a bunshin.

An eye containing three tomoe will allow the ninja to see the image of an attacker’s next move from the slightest muscle tension in their body. This prevents wasteful movement and allows the Uchiha clan member to conserve much needed chakra in battle. It allows them to synchronize their movement to strike at an area moments before their opponent is even in that spot, essentially allowing them to strike out and hit their opponent before they're even there.

Three tomoe also grants the Uchiha the ability to do Genjutsu and hypnosis after locking eyes with an enemy. This can be used to cause their opponent to do an attack of the Uchiha's choosing. This hypnosis can also be used as a Genjutsu counter, which is the ability to turn a Genjutsu spell back upon the original caster without the requirement of forming any handseals.

The Mangekyō Sharingan ( Literally meaning Kaleidoscope Copy Wheel Eye) is a heightened form of Sharingan. The Mangekyō Sharingan gives the user access to powerful and forbidden techniques. The Mangekyō Sharingan is distinguished from a normal Sharingan through its appearance, which changes the form of the tomoe seal. Unlike in the case of the Sharingan, the appearance of the Mangekyō Sharingan differs from user to user. The Mangekyō Sharingan gives the user access to several powerful techniques, and erodes the eyesight of its users, eventually causing blindness, which can be alleviated by obtaining another pair of Mangekyō Sharingan from a sibling. The new Sharingan is dubbed the Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan. The techniques used by this eye vary from person to person and is limited to one technique per eye. It can be achieved by the killing of someone who is very close to the user as a display of being willing to sacrifice anything for power. This can not be fooled and be a fake friend. It must be a real and true strong connection so it takes a certain kind of individual to be able to get it. It can also be gotten by extremely brutal and long training, taking many many many years to obtain of constant hard work and dedication, though the person can not be aiming for it and it actually just happens at random. Even with the hardest work, it is possible for an Uchiha to never achieve this level of eye mastery.

Secret Clan Jutsu:

Name: Demonic Illusion - Mirror Heaven and Earth Change
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: A
Element: -
Description: A Genjutsu technique unique to the Uchiha bloodline Sharingan holders. Using the copy and counter functions of the Sharingan eye, the Uchiha clan member can stop the sensory spell cast on their body and reverse it back on their opponent. This technique requires the user to have three tomoe in each eye to use it.

Name: Sharingan Windmill Triple Blade
Type: Weaponry
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: A Weaponry technique utilized by the Uchiha clan. Using the developed vision of the Sharingan eye, the clan member hurls three Windmill Shuriken which have wire attached. While in the air the clan member can manipulate wire to make the blades circle the target, which results in the attached wire binding them.

Name: Ephemeral
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: A
Element: -
Description: A Genjutsu technique utilized by Uchiha clan members. They will start this technique by using only one finger on their right hand. The target does not have to look into his eyes, a glance at the hand itself will be enough. Once inside the illusion, they can control the visions the ninja sees. This illusion can also be used to play on the fears of the target, causing them to see and hear those who they care about degrade them.

History:

The Uchiha clan was descended from the elder of the two boys entrusted by the Sage of the Six Paths with the power and will of the way of the ninja. The elder believed that might would bring peace. The Sage chose the younger as more fitting to be his successor, causing the elder to be vengeful. From the younger boy descended the Senju clan who would be the eternal rivals of the Uchiha. Before the founding of the ninja villages, the Uchiha were one of the many mercenary clans for hire. Because of their Sharingan, the Uchiha clan came to be known as one of the two strongest clans, the second being the Senju clan. Madara Uchiha was particularly powerful, and, upon attaining the Mangekyō Sharingan, he took control of the clan. Under his leadership the Uchiha grew stronger, conquering whatever clans they came upon, such that, whenever the Uchiha clan was hired for a job, the opposing side would hire the Senju.

Hashirama Senju, the leader of the Senju clan, grew tired of the endless fighting, and approached the Uchiha clan with a peace treaty. Madara feared that an alliance would lead the Uchiha to ruin, but his clan disagreed, and he was forced to accept. The two clans came together to form Konoha, with Hashirama being selected as Hokage. Madara believed that this was proof that the Uchiha would be made subservient to the Senju, but his clan saw this only as his attempt to rekindle the flames of war. They turned their backs on him, and he defected. Following Madara's betrayal, the Second Hokage gave the Uchiha control of the Konoha Military Police Force as a sign of trust. According to Madara, this was really just a way of keeping the Uchiha in check and out of Konoha's governing affairs. Over the years, some Uchiha have figured out this motive's true meaning, and tried to rebel against the village as Madara did, but they found that it was too little, too late to make a difference, as the Senju had already completely suppressed the Uchiha. Eventually a revolt was attempted by a select few Uchiha members, but this was crushed quickly and they were thrown in jail or put to death based on their role in the uprising. The Uchiha who did not partake in it, were not held accountable and after that the relations between the Uchiha and the rest of the village grew stronger and trust was finally instilled.


Clan Details: Open

Rank Information:

Rank:
Genin
Village Affiliation:
kirigakure

Special Information:

Character Speciality:
You may pick 2 skills:
Main:Ninjutsui
Sub:genjutsu
Elemental Affinity:
Main:lightning
Sub:fire

Jutsu Template:
Genjutsu
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katon
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Academy
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Background Information

History:
Birth Arc
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Academy Arc
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Role-Play Sample:
US 2.0
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This as well
US 1.0
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha, Ranmaru [Kiri Genin] Sun 18 Apr 2010, 6:47 pm

As I have been informed, and checked, all of your Academy jutsu have been taken from someone elses application, Sage's without permission. Remove them. As it stands this is plagarism issue and will not be dealt with lightly. We provide a template for all Canon Academy jutsu, so there was no reason to go and copy all of these.
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha, Ranmaru [Kiri Genin] Sun 18 Apr 2010, 9:35 pm

tbh it was an accident...was looking over his app as he got it done with a day and was wandering how and as i had to do my char i jus copied them cos i thought they were the normal...Im sorry if it wasn't it was just a careless mistake of me not reading them...
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha, Ranmaru [Kiri Genin] Sat 24 Apr 2010, 4:38 pm

Completion bump
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha, Ranmaru [Kiri Genin] Sat 24 Apr 2010, 5:21 pm

Your history needs ATLEAST 3 more paragraphs. Birth through the academy, make it work.

Shadow leaf taijutsu techniques is konoha only, Shishi rendan is too i believe. Not only that, but it is your definition, use the description on leaf ninja atleast.

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Kekkei Genkai:Ice

Remove that.

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Name: Lariat
Type: taijutsu
Rank: C
Element: Lightning
Description:The user first puts lightning natured chakra through there arm .The user then charges at his opponent, striking them with a Lariat move. This strike is powerful enough to blow away the target's entire chest. The attack is straightforward, though, and can be easily seen through with the Sharingan.

Define blow away the opponents chest. As it stands to utilize the move you are talking abou with the chakra and the power shown in the manga, its atleast B-Rank.
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha, Ranmaru [Kiri Genin] Sat 24 Apr 2010, 6:08 pm

edited.

Also as i wish to cause no trouble again, i didn't ask todd for this clan i jutsu realised when checking my pms as i thought i had. Is that still okay as the clan says open...not Open with my permission?
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha, Ranmaru [Kiri Genin] Sat 24 Apr 2010, 9:06 pm

You're not in trouble for that, but you will need to get his permission.
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha, Ranmaru [Kiri Genin] Sat 24 Apr 2010, 11:49 pm

is there anyway i could get hold of Todd o.o cos he's went somewhere for 4 weeks and his activity isn't good (if i remember right heck he might be back Razz) so...
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha, Ranmaru [Kiri Genin] Sat 24 Apr 2010, 11:56 pm

hes back, if you havent noticed the 'Who's Online' section, or jutsu creations, etc where he has been commenting. Theres also the PM function.
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha, Ranmaru [Kiri Genin] Fri 21 May 2010, 5:42 am

Todd bump
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha, Ranmaru [Kiri Genin] Fri 21 May 2010, 4:30 pm

he said no so im thinking of another clan to join...
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha, Ranmaru [Kiri Genin] Fri 21 May 2010, 6:55 pm

All right, jst ring me when your ready for another check Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha, Ranmaru [Kiri Genin] Fri 21 May 2010, 10:16 pm

is kiri uchiha still open?
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha, Ranmaru [Kiri Genin] Fri 21 May 2010, 10:48 pm

I believe its still open, but don't quote me on this.
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha, Ranmaru [Kiri Genin] Sat 22 May 2010, 2:42 pm

Alright im done, finally. ready for checking
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha, Ranmaru [Kiri Genin] Sat 22 May 2010, 5:54 pm

Clean up all of the misplaced coding on the app and I'll approve it Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha, Ranmaru [Kiri Genin] Sat 22 May 2010, 5:59 pm

done
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha, Ranmaru [Kiri Genin] Sat 22 May 2010, 6:05 pm

You still have a [list] next to rank Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha, Ranmaru [Kiri Genin] Sun 23 May 2010, 8:17 pm

done
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha, Ranmaru [Kiri Genin] Sun 23 May 2010, 8:21 pm

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