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PostSubject: Kesshuu Muei [Kumo Genin] Fri 23 Apr 2010, 11:57 pm

Basic Information:

    Name:
    Kesshuu Muei (血秋 無影)
    Secondary Title:
    As a member of the Kesshuu clan, she is known as one of the butchers of Kumogakure.
    Age:
    14
    Gender:
    Female
    Physical Appearance:
    (Image linked rather than posted for copyright reasons. I'm working on getting permission to post it, and will change that if and when I obtain said permission.)

    If one were to pick a single word to describe Kesshuu Muei, it would have to be "creepy." Dressed in all black, she moves with a dark, sultry gaunt, her cold grey eyes staring down anyone who nears her with a malicious, sinister glare from behind the high collar of her leather trench coat, which comes up above her nose. From there, the coat falls down, nearly skin-tight against her torso, cleanly fitting her body shape, while the sleeves, which seem slightly too long, hang loose over a pair of hands in fingerless gloves in a manner not unlike a traditional kimono. The coat is zipped up in the front, but flares out at the waist, with a large opening in the front, through which one can see a pair of black leather pants tucked into a pair heavy, buckle-clad combat boots.

    Underneath the coat, almost hidden from view, one can make out a number of accessories, most of them fairly standard as ninja gear goes. On each of her hips, a pair of summoning scrolls is clipped to a studded leather belt. Even further back, almost completely hidden from view beneath the tail of her coat, she wears two ordinary all-purpose tool pouches, filled with kunai, sealing tags, and more scrolls. In addition, she also carries a large scroll on her back, slung diagonally over one shoulder.

    Even after taking all of this in, probably the most striking feature that one almost can't help but return to is her steely grey eyes, staring out from below deep black hair, which frames the symbol of Kumogakure on her black hitai-ate. Outlined in thick black eyeliner, which extends both above and below as if she'd had both slashed out in a previous battle, they seem to look at the world with a sadistic elitism, as if searching through a field of rodents to find the one most ripe for killing.

    Personality:

    Cruel, sadistic, and ruthless, Kesshuu Muei is anything but your average 14-year-old ninja. Muei loves to watch - nay, cause - the suffering of others. Indeed, if asked her ultimate goal in life, it would not be out of character at all for her to respond "to cause and witness as much human suffering as possible." Truly, much like the rest of her clan, Muei lives up to her name as one of the Butchers of Kumogakure - she has an incredible lust for blood, and when in combat, she prefers by far to make her opponent bleed to death, rather than striking a killing blow on her own. Even when this is infeasible, after any battle that involves Muei, it can be expected that the battlegrounds will be left in a grim and bloody state.

    This doesn't preclude her having alliances and loyalties, however. She is fiercely loyal to her village, her clan, and her team, especially during times of war. As long as she has the opportunity to kill, Muei finds herself satisfied, and will do most anything her kage asks of her. If there's one thing she despises, however, it's helping people; nevertheless, she will begrudgingly take these low-rank missions if asked.

    During times of peace, Muei is the type to torture puppies. Her home - along with many other homes in the Kesshuu section of Kumogakure - is littered with blood stains... along with other things... from the many horrible things that have been done to innocent creatures within it. Muei can, however, be a potential liability to the clan (and potentially herself) if not kept in check, as she's prone to attempt to kill any non-Kumo ninja she comes in contact with on sight.

    Catch Phrase:
    N/A


Clan Information:

    Spoiler:
     


Rank Information:

    Rank:
    Genin
    Village Affiliation:
    Kumogakure


Special Information:

    Character Speciality:
    Main: Fuuinjutsu
    Sub: Ninjutsu
    Elemental Affinity:
    Main: N/A (Kesshuu clan have no natural elemental affinity)
    Sub: N/A
    Special Characteristics:

    Element Sensing
    Unlike most Ninja, Muei has experienced all five types of chakra as both main and sub natures. Because of this, she's learned the difference in the feeling of each, and can sense any person's chakra nature by absorbing it using gogyou kyuuin ketsuin (five elements absorption blood seal). This enables her to pick the proper elemental jutsu immediately upon absorbing a chakra nature without having to go through trial and error or watch the type of element her enemy is using.

    High Intelligence
    Despite her sadistic nature and dark appearance, Muei is actually incredibly intelligent, has an excellent tactical awareness, and is capable of analyzing situations with a high degree of accuracy, such as being able to determine a general idea of what has happened recently in an area by examining the signs of activity. Her intelligence also allows her to learn any technique more quickly than normal, granting a 25% reduction in post length requirement for training.

    Awareness
    Muei is incredibly alert to her surroundings, giving her a higher chance of detecting the presence enemy ninja and traps, especially if the traps use seals.

    Bloodlust
    Muei has been trained in special techniques for kunai and shuriken to maximize the amount of blood spilled. Any direct hit with a weapon from Muei will result in a more superficially grievous injury than would normally be suffered, causing twice as much blood loss, but having no other practical difference in terms of amount of actual damage dealt.

    Circulatory System Knowledge
    In a further attempt to maximize blood loss in her enemies, Muei has studied in depth the human circulatory system, and is able to fairly accurately target major blood vessels with thrown weapons. Thrown weapons have a high chance of hitting a major blood vessel if they make contact with the target, causing a very large amount of blood loss.

    Sadist
    Muei, being the sadist that she is, has trained herself to make her attacks as painful as possible, without regards to actual damage dealt. Every attack dealt by Muei will be twice as painful as it would be from someone else, though the actual damage dealt is unchanged.


Skill Information:

    Jutsus:

    Ninjutsu:
    Spoiler:
     

    Fuuinjutsu:

    Spoiler:
     

    Weapons:

    Spoiler:
     

    Items:
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Background Information

    History:
    Birth arc:

    From the very day she was born, Muei was raised in an atmosphere of darkness and sadism, surrounded by blood. As was the custom of the Kesshuu, her birth was celebrated with the application of her first blood seal, gogyou kyuui ketsuin, sealing the blood of her mother and father into her body.

    Growing up in the Kesshuu clan, Muei's early years were... unorthodox, to say the least. When other parents sang lullabies to their children, Muei was put to sleep by the screams and yelps of poor dying animals as her parents trained and expanded their ketsuinjutsu. When other parents gave their children toys, Muei's parents gave her knives.

    As early as age 3, Muei began preparing to learn the Kesshuu's sadistic techniques. Her attitude even at that age was unhealthily sadistic, bringing her great joy from such inhumane acts as setting fire to anthills, and her parents did nothing to dissuade this attitude; to the contrary, they, in fact, encouraged it, teaching her techniques for throwing kunai and shuriken to affect the maximum bloodshed against her enemies. Blood was, as they constantly remind her, the single most important requirement for their clan's techniques, and their enemies' blood even more so.

    An unfortunately dark child, Muei lived a lonely childhood. Alone amongst all of the children of Kumogakure, Muei didn't have a single friend. The children turned their backs on her, refusing to allow her to join in their games, constantly casting her to the sidelines, and often mocking her. Many of the children despised her entirely. Of course, this could have had something to do with the fact that she frequently passed her time by cutting them, but who knows? She didn't really mind, anyway.

    Academy arc:

    Early on in her academy days, she met up with fellow student Sado Wanizame, who, as she quickly found, shared her sadistic tendencies, and together, the two of them began a reign of terror on the poor little creatures of Kumogakure, torturing and killing them in increasively "creative" ways, and then dissecting them (often alive), a process Muei enjoyed solely for the sadistic pleasure she gained out of doing so.

    Muei proved herself to be quite gifted in her studies at the academy, initially graduating at the age of 8 with flying colors on her test. Upon taking the second test to become a Genin, however, her Jounin sensei vehemently declined to pass her on account of her being an "evil, sadistic, heartless bitch who had no right to be a ninja." The Jounin suggested that she be expelled from the academy entirely, but against his recommendation, she was simply sent back to the academy, where, it was hoped, she would learn to "play nice" with her teammates, with the Chuunin sensei given clear instructions not to pass her again until her personality had "mellowed." At the very least, he was told, she had to learn that her teammates were not scratching posts for her viscious claws.

    Unfortunately, Muei was far more interested in enjoying herself than in graduating. She and Wanizame continued to pass the time after school together in their old sadistic games, while year after year, she was held back. Finally, after five years, her sensei approved her to take the genin test one more time. Fortunately, she had matured in this time, and had learn to value her teammates, and she was able to pass.

    Genin arc:

    Muei's first months as a Genin were nigh unbearable. Over the course of a full year, she was given two missions to get cats out of a trees, one to help an old lady across the street, three to assist with ordinary household chores, and one to literally find a needle in a haystack. To make matters worse, she had been assigned to a different team from the one person she considered a friend, and his missions had kept the two of them apart, leaving her with a sudden emptiness as her former partner was torn away from her. With so few missions being given to her team, Muei was forced instead to focus all of her efforts on training, which, thanks to the help of her teammates, her jounin sensei, and two other jounin, gave her the time she needed to learn five C-rank elemental jutsus, one for each element, as well as several other ninjutsu and a large list of fuuinjutsu. Nevertheless, boredom and the sheer lack of battle began to eat at Muei. She needed blood, and she needed it soon.

    Fortunately, all was not lost. Just as she was about ready to tear her own hair out, a crystal fell from the sky...

    Role-Play Sample:

    "Welcome, students!"

    His name was Watanabe Jun'ichiro. He was a tall, dark-skinned man with black hair worn in dreads, a powerful and muscular build, and a very conspicuous lack of a shirt. He laughed with a loud, jolly voice as he stood over his new students, one of whom was the 8-year-old Kesshuu Muei, before holding his hand out in a big thumbs-up and winking.

    "Welcome to the Wonderful and Amazing Super-Awesome Watanabe Jun'ichiro Genin Advancement Test!"

    Muei couldn't stand people like him.

    "Let's just get this over with. You're wasting my time."

    With a very distinctly monochromatic color scheme in black, even down to the thick makeup she wore around her eyes, Muei was certainly not the bright and cheery type. People who went on like this idiot made her want to throw up. How did she get stuck in a squad with someone like him as the leader? God - or perhaps Jashin - must have been playing a cruel prank on her. She didn't appreciate it.

    "Well now!" Jun'ichiro chuckled brightly as he laid a hand on her head, ruffling her hair playfully. "Someone's in poor spirits!"

    Another rupturous laugh pourd out of his mouth, his chest shaking as if he were having a seizure. Muei narrowed her eyes, gripping his hand and wresting it off of her head.

    "You're an idiot. Touch me again, I'll kill y-"

    Suddenly, her arm was behind her back, held up against her spine by Jun'ichiro's powerful hand, with a kunai held against her throat. She blinked. When had he moved? She suddenly felt a bead of sweat drip down her head.

    "I propose a new course of action. How about I teach, you learn, and we both have a good time?" He tugged on her arm, sending a twinge of pain through it and eliciting a soft grunt from her mouth. "I'd really prefer it if we can all get along." He leaned down, whispering in softly her ear. "Things can get awfully messy otherwise."

    For a moment they sat in silence. Muei could feel the sweat beading on her face, her body shivering slightly, despite all her attempts to stop it. She couldn't move a muscle. She was afraid. Terrified. He could end her life right here, and she wouldn't be able to do a thing to stop it. Finally, after what seemed to Muei like a near-eternity, she felt the cold blade slide away from her neck. A small drop of blood dripped out from where the kunai had just been, slipping slowly down her bare neck before being absorbed by her ordinary black t-shirt.

    "Now that we understand each other," her sensei continued, "Welcome to your genin test!"

    He laughed loudly again, once again ruffling Muei's hair before walking back to his original spot in front of the group. This guy just didn't know when to quit did he? Muei gritted her teeth. She couldn't do it now, but some day, she swore, she would kill Watanabe Jun'ichiro.

    "Now, I'll explain how this is going to work." Jun'ichiro gestured behind him toward a large mountain, the base of which was surrounded with trees. "I will be waiting at the top of this mountain. The three of you are to race there, but only one of you will pass. Whoever reaches the top of the mountain first will become a genin; the other two of you will go back to the academy."

    Muei glanced at the other two prospective genin who were there with her. They were both older than her, but they both looked weak. Suddenly, she liked Jun'ichiro a little bit more. She had an opportunity now to do what she liked best...

    "There are some animals in the forest, and some of them can be fairly dangerous." He handed each of them a small scroll. "These are summoning scrolls. They've been specially designed to activate instantly when they're unrolled. If any of you get into trouble, open this up, and it will summon me to your location." His expression suddenly turned grim. "Please, please don't play the hero. If you need help, use the scroll. There's no shame in relying on your teammates or asking for help."

    The other two prospective genin nodded solemnly, but Muei didn't bother to acknowledge her sensei. She'd toned out long ago. Her mind was elsewhere, on winning this race, formulating plans for just how to do so.

    "Right then!" Jun'ichiro bellowed. "See you at the top!"

    With the quick formation of a tiger hand seal, Jun'ichiro disappeared in a puff of smoke. As the other two ninja darted into the forest, Muei casually stuffed the scroll into her pouch. She wasn't in any rush. She was going to win this race, and she knew exactly how...

    --------------------

    "What the hell were you thinking?!"

    The ground was covered in blood. Behind Jun'ichiro, a young male ninja - one of Muei's teammates - was dragging himself heavily across the ground, trying to find protection behind his sensei's bulk, a dozen or more serious wounds bleeding heavily. Off to one side, her other teammate sat resting against a tree, nursing a badly-bleeding wound on his arm, a summoning scroll sitting open on the ground in front of him. Jun'ichiro shook his head as he looked down upon the 8-year-old girl, lying on the ground before him, her face drenched in the other ninjas' blood, forming a large seal on her forehead.

    "This exercize wasn't about winning! It was about teamwork! You were supposed to help each other through the forest, not try to kill each other!"

    Muei spit blood on the ground, refusing to acknowledge her sensei's words. He'd stopped her with a kick to the face. One of her teeth was loose. And he was an idiot. She wasn't in a very talkative mood.

    Jun'ichor shook his head.

    "Kesshuu Muei, you don't deserve to be a ninja. None of your family does. As far as I'm concerned, your whole clan needs to be exiled from Kumogakure. You are a blight on our village."

    "As for you..." he glanced toward the other two ninja, "You came to each others' aid when you were in trouble, and you worked together to stay alive against this..." he grimaced, "...this sadistic bitch. Congratulations, you both pass."

    He walked over to each of the two ninja in turn, hoisting one over each shoulder before turning back toward Muei, shaking his head. "I have to go talk to the Raikage. I'm going to see to it that you never get the opportunity to be a ninja again."

    With another hand seal, he and both of the other two ninja were gone, leaving Muei alone. Wiping off her bleeding lower lip, she pulled herself to her feet. With a disgusted grunt, she kicked the bloody remains of the first ninja's scroll, something she'd made sure to make quick work of. That plan had certainly worked out well.

    With an angry glare at the spot where her former sensei had just been standing, she slowly began making her way back down the mountain.

    Yes... some day, she would kill Watanabe Jun'ichiro. That was a promise.



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PostSubject: Re: Kesshuu Muei [Kumo Genin] Sat 24 Apr 2010, 12:41 am

Has your clan been approved?

Manipulating Blades is Weaponry, remove it.
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PostSubject: Re: Kesshuu Muei [Kumo Genin] Sat 24 Apr 2010, 12:58 am

Yes, the clan has been approved.

Manipulating blades removed.
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PostSubject: Re: Kesshuu Muei [Kumo Genin] Sat 24 Apr 2010, 3:24 am

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High Intelligence
Despite her sadistic nature and dark appearance, Muei is actually incredibly intelligent, has an excellent tactical awareness, and is capable of analyzing situations with a high degree of accuracy, such as being able to determine a general idea of what has happened recently in an area by examining the signs of activity. Her intelligence also allows her to learn any technique more quickly than normal, granting a 25% reduction in post length requirement for training.
With this it would only allow a 25% decrease in training threads, not threads on a whole (i.e when your Rping). To be honest this would mean that your posts should be longer in a sense. ^^

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She is also adept at analyzing techniques, and can accurately copy any skill of D rank or lower that she sees used by another ninja, so long as she has the specialty requirements to use it.
Being able to outright copy a technique like the sharingan does is a KKG based technique, even if you can only copy a D-rank. Please remove.

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Name: Super Amazing Ultimate Secret Technique: Spoiler Revelation (Supaa Sugoi Shuukyoku Hiden Jutsu: Netabare Bakuro!)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: None
Description: The user reveals the ending of the target's favorite book, causing them to cover their ears and close their eyes to avoid hearing it or reading their lips! Excellent technique for stealing bells. Only works on Ecchi readers.
lol. BANNED! for OP reasons!!! Naa kidding. ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Kesshuu Muei [Kumo Genin] Sat 24 Apr 2010, 3:30 am

Todd wrote:
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High Intelligence
Despite her sadistic nature and dark appearance, Muei is actually incredibly intelligent, has an excellent tactical awareness, and is capable of analyzing situations with a high degree of accuracy, such as being able to determine a general idea of what has happened recently in an area by examining the signs of activity. Her intelligence also allows her to learn any technique more quickly than normal, granting a 25% reduction in post length requirement for training.
With this it would only allow a 25% decrease in training threads, not threads on a whole (i.e when your Rping). To be honest this would mean that your posts should be longer in a sense. ^^

Yes, of course. To be quite honest, I don't plan on actually making USE of this, anyway, as I tend to make long posts normally; I just put it in after I saw it on another approved app, cause I thought it did serve as a good "real" effect from having a high intelligence.

Todd wrote:
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She is also adept at analyzing techniques, and can accurately copy any skill of D rank or lower that she sees used by another ninja, so long as she has the specialty requirements to use it.
Being able to outright copy a technique like the sharingan does is a KKG based technique, even if you can only copy a D-rank. Please remove.

Removed.
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PostSubject: Re: Kesshuu Muei [Kumo Genin] Sat 24 Apr 2010, 3:33 am

I see nothing wrong with it, its a very classy app and an interesting one to read.

Congratz! Welcome to the Yellow Army, we have yummy tea and biscuits. ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Kesshuu Muei [Kumo Genin] Fri 02 Jul 2010, 9:45 am

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