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PostSubject: Murayama, Tu [Kumo-Genin] Tue 28 Jan 2014, 10:31 am



Murayama, Tu.

THE INFO.

Name: Tu
Nickname:---
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Appearance:
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Forehead Protector: Left Upper Arm
Personality:
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Clan: ---
Nindō: 'Real living is living for others.' {Bruce Lee}

THE NINJA.

Origin: Lightening Country
Affiliation: Kumogakure
Rank: Genin
Specialities: Weaponry[Long, Short]/Medic
Elemental Affinities: ---
Combat Style:
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Special Characteristics:
-Combat-
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-Social-
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Affliction-
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THE BACKGROUND.

History:
Early Life
   
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Genin
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Roleplay Sample:
Some Previous Work

THE ARSENAL.

Jutsu
[Weaponry]
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[Medic]
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Weaponry
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Items
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FACE CLAIM.

Character Claim: Ashitaka
Source: Princess Mononoke
Image URL: http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_ldrd7si6Ad1qbjpavo1_500.gif


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PostSubject: Re: Murayama, Tu [Kumo-Genin] Tue 28 Jan 2014, 9:46 pm

I think I'm ready to start the process.
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PostSubject: Re: Murayama, Tu [Kumo-Genin] Thu 30 Jan 2014, 1:44 am

  • Your combat style needs to be longer. Try to make it at least 250 words.
  • Your application has a few grammatical errors, so I'd like you to check over those, if you would.
  • Please can you edit your poison to accomodate our poison creation template, which can be found here.
  • I also recommend you give your character a surname, as mononyms aren't really allowed on US. If your character doesn't know their surname, just explain that in your history.
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PostSubject: Re: Murayama, Tu [Kumo-Genin] Thu 30 Jan 2014, 8:22 am

I think I fixed it.

There may still be some grammar stuff. It's not my strong point and my dyslexia doesn't help much lol. I noticed I got several 'd's and 'b's mixed up.
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PostSubject: Re: Murayama, Tu [Kumo-Genin] Thu 30 Jan 2014, 10:40 am

Approved
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PostSubject: Re: Murayama, Tu [Kumo-Genin] Thu 30 Jan 2014, 6:25 pm

I love Ashitaka *wants to watch the movie now*.

2/2 approved.

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PostSubject: Re: Murayama, Tu [Kumo-Genin] Sun 09 Nov 2014, 5:29 am

Archived due to failure to respond to activity check. Please message staff to have your character unarchived.
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