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PostSubject: Tamashii Gin [Konoha Genin] Fri 11 Jul 2014, 7:02 am



Tamashii, Gin.

THE INFO.

Name: Tamashii, Gin
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Age: 13
Gender: Male
Appearance: A boy with a slim build from viewed while clothed; slightly muscular, in reality, he has a lightly tanned skin complexion. His brown hair is cut short and allowed to spike out similar to a spiky-mop haircut. His eyes are a brown color which match his hair color perfectly. His eyes only draw in attention from onlookers when they seem to narrow and glare in seriousness.

Gin usually wears a blue robe that drapes down on the back. His robe is tied at the waist by a red sash. He wears white linen pants with blue shoes to match his robes. He wears a holster for equipment and weapons around his waist, beneath the red sash he wears as a belt. Usually in this standard attire of his posture is straight for this is what he considers his everyday wear. He would wear his forehead protector high on his arm.

When wearing all black attire; black robe with a cowl, long black linen pants and black shoes to match. He prefers this combination when on what he calls “Serious Business”. While wearing this, his posture is crouched low, or any form of attention avoidance. This is his battle wear for when he is out on personal business or missions, whether they require battle or not. He would wear his forehead protector on his head only when wearing this attire.

Forehead Protector: Gin’s forehead protector is in the form of a bandana that covers the entire top of the head.
Personality: Gin is a determined boy when it comes to his goals whether short or long term. Kind at heart and considerate to those who he believes deserves such treatment. He states he has two alignments; neutral-good, he is open minded when it comes to doing the right thing for those who can’t defend themselves and who hold goodness in their heart, it is his ‘soft spot’.

His second alignment would be a mix between chaotic and lawful neutral for those who are evil, commit crimes and don’t regret their ill indented decisions. He is able to hold his himself, but when it comes down to dealing with a sinful menace, Gin wouldn’t take simple but quick steps in dealing with the problem and bringing the evil-doer to justice either alive or dead. He admits his decisions on dealing with bad people are moved by his feelings, mainly anger, but he does not regret it nor what he does to the person, such as a swift punch to the face.

Gin enjoys company from others, mainly friends and those who have good intentions. He prefers peace and quiet rather than loud noises that block out every other sound, which he calls a large distraction. His temper quickly rises whenever defenseless people are picked on physically or verbally. It bothers him to see the innocent harmed in anyway, and he believes a solution to such a problem would be one of two things, diplomacy or force. If it is impossible to talk to someone who is committing a crime, then he strongly believes a swift punch to the face would be the only solution.

Clan: N/A
Nindo: “There are those who are good, there are those who are bad, and there are those like me that use a little bad to fight for the good”

THE NINJA.

Origin: Hi no Kuni
Affiliation: Konoha
Rank: Genin
Specialities: Weaponry [Main: Long Range; Secondary: Close Range], Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinities: Fuuton, Katon
Combat Style: Gin is patient to strike like a predator, but once within the battle, he is quick to strike, believing every second spent allows the table to turn towards the opponent. Even though he would use lethal moves and equipment to dispatch his opponent, he would prefer to bring down the opponent to a near death state rather than waste a life. He uses the area around him to his advantage while keeping his opponent in his sight, which he sees as the center of the battle field. Out of sight or constant movement in battle is his strategy. Because he prefers quick strikes and concealment, basically 'Hit and Run', what he lacks is consistent heavy damage, whether it's hand to hand, jutsus, or weaponry, it isn't a way he prefers, but that of precision. Close range is close to last resort, as for long range, it allows him a chance to keep distance and concealment, and sure way to his 'Hit and Run' strategy.
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THE BACKGROUND.

History: Tamashii Gin was born to farmers who cared more about their work, cattle, and their family rather than anything else in the world. Being in the country side, life was peaceful and sort of boring which was wonderful for Gin. He enjoyed working with his father on the field, whatever the job/chore was. For his free time, Gin would bird-watch, mainly owls in the middle of the night. He always found them interesting. Unique to the rest of the avians, silent hunters of the night.

One day, a neighbor of theirs had come running, bloodied, asking for help. She was in panic while saying there were ninjas hunting her family down. Gin’s father ordered the mother, the neighbor and his son to keep within the house while he tend to the problem. He had equipped himself with a pitchfork and fought against a rogue ninja that had snuck onto his farm. With tactical knowledge, Gin’s father used his surroundings to his advantage and ended up trapping the rogue ninja under a mountain of corn from the silo, suffocating him and ending the threat.

The family soon realized that the ninja had killed the neighbor woman’s family; her husband and daughter that Gin had once played with. Feeling distraught and depressed for months, Gin decided to travel to Konoha, the country’s ninja village and learn the way of the shin obi in order to strengthen himself and protect those who can’t do so for themselves. His father and mother accepted his decision. After packing his clothing, Gin was driven by horse carriage by his dad to Konoha which had taken a few days.

Gin applied for the academy soon after making a home of Konoha. He was eager in learning combat and after the first few days of lessons, Gin realized when it came to being a ninja, it was much more than fighting, and even in fighting, there was more to it than striking at the opponent head on. It didn't discourage him, but furthered his interest. He wanted to be a strong protector like his father is and more so.

Roleplay Sample: Tamashii Gin peered through the shrub. He watched the lone wolf that has been roaming the foresting, scaring the locals and eating the sheep. The young genin slowly drew threw shuriken. He waited until the wolf looked in the complete opposite direction before jumping out of the shrub and throwing the three shurikens. Two manage to hit before the wolf yelped and turned about to view his foe.

Gin, lost the element of surprised and seeing that the wolf wasn’t going to try and run, gave him the reason to switch to plan B. He dashed behind a tree and ran up another one to hide himself in the cluster of branches. What he didn’t expect was that the wolf managed to climb the tree trunk with ease. The ninja jumped onto another branch from a neighboring tree. He tossed a smoke bomb at the branch between him and the wolf, covering the line of sight, he then quickly pulled out a windmill shuriken and tossed it. It spun and soared through the smoke, surprising the wolf as he emerged from the smoke on the other end and slicing the beast in half.

Gin landed on the grassy floor below before observing the dead remains of the troublemaker. He let out a breath of air he had held in. Afterwards, he began gathering his shuriken, including the larger one before packing up and returning back to the village. The day was long when it came to tracking the beast, and upon fighting against it, it was over in a minute or so. The climax to a goal is always the quickest.

THE ARSENAL.

Academy Jutsu
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Konoha Specific Jutsu
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Weaponry Jutsu
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Katon Elemental Jutsu
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Fuuton Elemental Jutsu
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FACE CLAIM.

Character Claim: Lon’Qu
Source: Fire Emblem Awakening
Image URL:http://moe.animecharactersdatabase.com/uploads/chars/5092-1182261032.png


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PostSubject: Re: Tamashii Gin [Konoha Genin] Fri 11 Jul 2014, 11:01 pm

Hello there!

Your app is looking promising so far, but I'd like you to review the following things:

General:

  • Please add [Konoha Genin] to the topic title
  • At the very top, you forgot to replace the large "LAST NAME, FIRST NAME" with your character's name.
  • Please fix your paragraph spacing in your appearance personality (add another hard return between the first and second paragraphs).
  • Your roleplay sample is 10 words below the minimum word count requirement for genin, so please add more.
  • Your history is a decent length, but I feel you should talk about Gin's academy experience since he's a genin. It doesn't need to be much, but please include it.


Appearance & Personality:

  • While they both include a good amount of information, I would rather you try and expand a bit more on these two sections. A good rule of thumb is to have two solid paragraphs. Since your first paragraphs for both are already good, try expanding the second to include a bit more information. If you're having trouble, perhaps think of explaining his attire choices (for appearance), for example.


The Ninja:

  • For weaponry, please specify which two ranges you'd like in the format of [Main; Sub]. The first is the range you'll be able to choose a weapon for that will be equal to your rank, the second you'll only be able to keep weaponry that is one below. It also determines the types of techniques you're able to use based on the weapon ranges and types of weapons you have.
  • Sound release is not an elemental release of its own that you start with. The elements you include here are two of the main five (Katon, Suiton, Doton, Fuuton, Raiton) since you're not part of an advanced release clan. Sound release is a sub-element that becomes available to you as a wind user once you reach B rank, but isn't required to be listed on your app.
  • Your combat style could use a bit more. What are his weak points, and/or how does he deal with/cover for his weaknesses in combat?


Arsenal:

  • You have two genjutsu in your app but don't have genjutsu as a specialty. At C rank you're unable to have techniques outside of your specialties (not counting academy techniques), so please remove these from your app.
  • Excluding the genjutsu, I counted 10 jutsu - you're able to add 5 more. It's not mandatory, just recommended since you'll have to earn funds through roleplaying in order to purchase any jutsu you want after being approved.
  • The purchasing part also goes for weapons. You'll have to include the weapons you want to use in your app, so please make sure to include them, following the appropriate limitations and guidelines for them.


That's all that I see for now. As long as you fix these, I can give you your first approval.
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PostSubject: Re: Tamashii Gin [Konoha Genin] Sat 12 Jul 2014, 2:28 am

Edited. As for the weaponry, haven't decided yet, I want to see how it goes from here.
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PostSubject: Re: Tamashii Gin [Konoha Genin] Sat 12 Jul 2014, 3:51 am

Well, it looks like you added in ranges anyway. Everything looks good to me, so:

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PostSubject: Re: Tamashii Gin [Konoha Genin] Sat 12 Jul 2014, 7:35 am

2/2 Approved

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PostSubject: Re: Tamashii Gin [Konoha Genin] Sun 09 Nov 2014, 5:09 am

Archived due to failure to respond to activity check. Please message staff to have your character unarchived.
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