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PostSubject: Hamasaki, Katomi [WIP] Sat 16 May 2015, 8:55 am



HAMASAKI, KATOMI.

THE INFO.

Name:Katomi Hamasaki
Nickname:Wolf girl
Age:17
Gender:Female
Appearance:
Hair: Katomi has long deep purplish blue hair that relates to her chakra in color. It is about 2 and a half feet long in length, reaching just beyond her midriff. She enjoys having it long as she loves the way it sways in the wind, becoming almost one with the earth.

Build: Katomi is a mildly chested girl and stands to be a petite 5 feet tall and weighs around 100lbs. Her frame is that of a small hourglass shape due to her size and petite-ness. She is decently muscular, showing enough to be toned, yet not overly muscular; in order to keep her feminine look. She acquired this body-type through her desire to constantly train.

Eyes: Her eyes are white, yet they have a slight tinge of purple also mimicking her chakra's color. She often is happy so the happiness shows through. Her eyes are generally more soft and warming while she is in this state, allowing other to feel comfortable around her. Yet, when she is saddened- though it is rare- they seem to cloud over and appear to be more purplish. This is generally the case until she is angered by someone then her normal warm, soft eyes can feel as cold and electric as lightning.

Expressions: Katomi is generally an open book when it comes to her expressiveness. She loves to smile and is quite animated. This makes up, however, for her stern and hard to read face in combat. Any time she is not in combat, she is easily read and bubbly. Once angered, however, her mouth will turn downward into a scowl, and her eyes will narrow slightly. If she is in a playful mood, she will wear a smirk and her eyes will mimic that of her combat expression; focused.

Clothing: Katomi often likes things that look more expensive than they really are. She generally wears a dark, sleeveless, partially backless shirt that is somewhat form fitting. She generally wears a white skirt with some sort of shorts in case she needs to remove the skirt for swiftness. She bears an armband on her left arm a few inches above her elbow. On her right arm, she bears the forehead band of the village of Kumogakure due to her problem of not being able to keep it securely on her head.

Tattoos and Scars: Katomi trains hard and because of that she will often end up with scratches and bruises. However, one scar surpasses the rest with its age. That is, she has a small but somewhat long scar on her right cheek. She barely remembers even getting it and unless pointed out to her, she doesn't remember it's there since she can't see it.

Forehead Protector:Right arm, a few inches above her elbow as an armband

Personality:
Observant: Katori is often perceived as being shy, though she opens up quickly to those around her. She just prefers to observe her surroundings first before engaging in them. She found this to be useful in learning things that were important for her to know such as an opponent's weakness or strength.

Caring: Katori grew up not being like everyone else in the village, her difference made her more caring rather than causing her to feel like an outcast. She will do most things for those she cares about most whether they are hurt, or in need of her aid.

Loneliness:Katomi never knew her family, as she was found as an orphan when she was very young. She had nearly collapsed and the last conscious moment she could see, she was alone. It wasn't until she closed her eyes she had heard foot steps, but by then she was too tired to reopen them. To this day, she fears closing her eyes and hearing no one come for her.

Strength: Katomi is pretty strong, as she grows older, her strength only grows. She used to cry a little when she was younger if she felt any sort of pain or sadness. Now, she is able to suppress it until she is alone in order to cry without anyone witnessing it. She also tries not to let her foes know when something is wrong.

Wolves: Katomi is obsessed with wolves, sometimes, she likes to draw red lines across her face to pretend she is some sort of wold, such as the mask types she had seen as a child. She sometimes likes to pretend she's a wolf in her dreams.

Clan:Hyuuga

Nindō:"Not everything is as it seems."

THE NINJA.

Origin:Her origin is unknown, but as far as she is aware, she has always been with the cloud village.
Affiliation:Kumogakure
Rank:C
Specialities:
Main:Ninjitsu
Sub:Taijustsu

Elemental Affinities:
Main:Doton/Earth
Sub: Raiton/Lightning

Combat Style:
Katomi is a fast thinker and quick on her feet. She prefers paying attention to her surroundings over fighting. She is an outside of the box thinker and often tries to find creative ways of fighting. She enjoys a fight unless it is for the wrong reason. Her first tactic would be to parry and evade from attacks while trying to figure out her opponent. She likes to hide her weaponry in her clothing and use it at the last possible second.

She is best at hand to hand combat though she has some spells for ranged. She is generally a pacifist and will try to stay out of combat if it is not necessary. Another weakness is her caring for others. If someone she cares about is hurt, she tends to be a little more reckless in an effort to be able to save them.

Special Characteristics:

Physical Based:
 

Chakra Based:
 

Mental Based:
 

Social Based:
 

Skill Based:
 

THE BACKGROUND.

History:
Birth & Early Childhood:
 

Academy:
 

Village Life & Childhood:
 

Roleplay Sample:
My Sample from Bleach:
 

THE ARSENAL.

Hyuuga Clan Jutsu
Spoiler:
 

Fighting Style

Spoiler:
 

Academy:
Spoiler:
 

Village:
Spoiler:
 

Taijutsu

Spoiler:
 

Doton Ninjitsu:

Spoiler:
 

Raiton:

Spoiler:
 

Kits:
Spoiler:
 

FACE CLAIM.

Character Claim:Hinata
Source:Naruto (Canon)
Image URL:Click Me


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PostSubject: Re: Hamasaki, Katomi [WIP] Sun 17 May 2015, 4:02 am

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PostSubject: Re: Hamasaki, Katomi [WIP] Sun 17 May 2015, 4:02 am

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Hiruzen

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PostSubject: Re: Hamasaki, Katomi [WIP] Sun 17 May 2015, 5:48 pm

Hello there,
Before I start fully sweeping your app, you might be interested in doing the following:


Katomi wrote:
Specialities:Ninjitsu, Taijustsu
Elemental Affinities:Doton/Earth and Raiton/Lightning


That is what you have now, though you could change it to this as it is what most of the site does:

Specialties:
Main: Ninjutsu
Sub: Taijutsu
Elemental Affinities:
Main: Doton/Earth
Sub: Raiton/Lightning

As for the Special Characteristics,
When you rank up, RP more around the site and become stronger as a character, you will be getting a wide array of characteristics which may make your Character Profile a bit bulky. That is why I suggest putting them in spoilers. Most people on the site including myself do it like this.

Physical based:
 
Chakra based:
 
Mental based:
 
Skill based:
 
Social based:
 

The spoilers are given these names because these are the kinds of SC we have.
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PostSubject: Re: Hamasaki, Katomi [WIP] Sun 17 May 2015, 7:27 pm

Hiruzen wrote:

Thank you very much for the pointer! I'm happy that you pointed that out to me. It does look much nicer now ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Hamasaki, Katomi [WIP] Sun 17 May 2015, 8:14 pm

You managed to add quite a bit to the Appearance and Personality sections, good job on that. That said, I would like it if you would try to put an equally large amount of effort into the Combat Style section of the application. It is rather small compared to the rest of the personality things you filled out.

Some pointers could be how her moods affect her fighting, how she fights when the Byakugan is active, how she fights when the Byakugan is not active, how she fights people who specialize in close, mid or long ranges, etc etc.

Also, do you think you could elaborate a bit more on her History? There is often quite a lot to tell about a person and what happened to them between their birth and their 17th birthday.
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PostSubject: Re: Hamasaki, Katomi [WIP] Sun 17 May 2015, 8:31 pm

I'll certainly do my best ^_^
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