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PostSubject: Phantom, Cielco [Suna Genin] Sun 08 Aug 2010, 2:21 pm

Basic Information:

Name: Cielco Phantom
Secondary Title: Ciel the Phantom, Ciel
Age: Twelve
Gender: Male
Physical Appearance:
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Cielco stands at five feet exactly. He is pretty skinny for his age, only ninety eight pounds. His left eye is a deep and passionate blue color. He has short dark gray with tints of blue. Over his left eye, he has a black eye patch. He doesn't wear it because it is missing, but because he has something to hide. If deemed necessary, he will remove the eye patch in combat. Revealing his left eye (see the below image). Ceil's skin has no trace of darkening what so ever, so he is very pale. Something out of the ordinary you see for a male is a piercing in both ears. Nothing fancy, just a simple dot on each earlobe. It is almost rare that you will see a smile on his face, perhaps a fake one very now and then. But in all honesty, he claims to of forgotten how to smile like he was having fun.

Another unusual thing about him is his attire. What makes it more strange is his age. Ceil usually wears formal clothing. Consisting of a button down shirt that varies in color between black, dark red, and dark green. Over that is a long black jacket. He also wears a blue ribbon tie, and some black shorts. Some black knee-high socks, followed by black boots on his feet. With his attire consisting of black for the most part, and his straight face, most people consider him to be emo, or goth. Though he doesn't care what people say, and it's nearly impossible for him to care any less. On his thumb, he has ring with a blue emrald on it. He wears it almost 24/7, only taking it off when he goes to sleep. Sometimes, as just an extra accessory, he wears white gloves. As for a headband, he keeps that in his jacket pocket on the inside. For safe keeping.
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Personality: Ciel comes across as being a mostly emotionless, cold, intelligent child. He is capable of portraying himself as an engaging, happy, easygoing individual, typically when undercover, but is quick to revert to being callous when he no longer has to hide his true self. Before the loss of his parents, however, he seemed to be a happy and energetic child. He has a habit for slapping and insulting individuals for being too comfortable with touching or speaking to him. Though he does have his times when he could be nice. He is not known for interacting socially with some of the villagers, especially fellow shinobi. More or so if they of higher rank.

There are a lot of things he dislikes, but what he absolutely hates when people call him a "kid." When people call him a child, or anything of the sort he feels that they are judging him by his appearance and not seeing him for who he really is. A smart shinobi. Emphasis on shinobi. Although, because of his rank, he chooses to act the normal type of intelligence that of an average genin. When people decide to tease him about how 'dense' he is, when it is actually an act, he tells them off with his superior intellect. Which usually gets them to shut their mouth. To make things more interesting, he thinks of life as a game of chess. If you mess up just once, it could cost you your king. 'King' in this case, was referring to the kage. Although, if you mess up the kage probably wouldn't be hurt what so ever. You'll just make him look bad for having a fool in his village.

Catch Phrase:
  • “Kids are greedy for games, aren't they?” [Followed by a smirk]

  • “Once something is lost, it can never be restored.”


Rank Information:

Rank: Genin
Village Affiliation: Sunagakure No Sato

Special Information:

Character Speciality:
Main: Genjutsu
Sub: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity:
Main: Raiton - Lighting
Sub: Suiton - Water
Special Characteristics:

Enhanced Genjutsu Eye
His right eye, which is covered by an eye patch, is actually somewhat of an enhancer. When his eye patch is removed, or he lifts it up, his genjutsu effects increase. Making it seem more real then it actually is. Even though the victim wouldn't be hurt physically, just like an average genjutsu would do, the mind has a more chance of making it seem real. Like everything else, it doesn't last forever. It takes up a lot of chakra for Ceil to use - which is why he rarely uses it. He can only use it for 10 posts until he passes out.

Skill Information:
Note: You can find the other templates in the other Creation Areas if your character needs them.

Jutsu:

Genjutsu:
 

Ninjutsu:
 

Raiton:
 

Suiton:
 


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PostSubject: Re: Phantom, Cielco [Suna Genin] Sun 08 Aug 2010, 10:37 pm


Weapons

Name: Kunai
Quantity: 50
Rank: E
Appearance:
Special Abilities/Characteristics: --
Origin: Completion of academy

Name: Shuriken
Quantity: 50
Rank: E
Appearance:
Special Abilities/Characteristics: --
Origin: Completion of Academy

Name: Explosive Tags
Quantity: 15
Rank: D
Appearance:
Special Abilities/Characteristics: --
Origin: Gived from Father


Items

Name: Headband
Rank: --
Type: Other
Natural Abilities: --

Name: Gloves
Rank: --
Type: Other
Natural Abilities: --
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Name: Ring
Rank: --
Type: Other
Natural Abilities: --
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PostSubject: Re: Phantom, Cielco [Suna Genin] Sun 08 Aug 2010, 11:04 pm

Background Information

History:

Birth - Early Childhood Arc

Some people would think that Ceilco wasn't born, but indeed he was. It was only a mere twelve years ago, and it was in a nice calm village. It wasn't one of the hidden village, but one completely separate from the world of shinobi. His parents wanted what was best for him, and for him to live in safety. And for five years, he did. He went out with his older brother to the small forest around the house, but he got lost and separated from his brother. The young child got scared and ran through the forest, looking for an exit. Once he found one, he noticed the scent of smoke. Following it where the source was, he saw his house. On fire! Ceilco wanted to run and see if his parents were okay, but was stopped by people who were putting out the fire. Once that was done with, he was allowed in the house. Everything was in ashes, even his parents. The only thing that survived was his fathers ring. Which Ceil has to the day, and he never plans to lose it. Since then, he hasn't smiled truly.

With nowhere else to go, he traveled to parts unknown to him. When just five years old, he was starving when he came across a village, which was known as the village hidden in the sand. He spent a lot of time there and was able to get a house and everything from his inherited ryo, and when he turned seven he decided that this was were he would spend the rest of his life. When wandering one day, he noticed a place that caught his interest. The ninja academy. He noticed something saying that they were taking new students, so he signed up. Not knowing one thing about a ninja, and what it was. Or this "chakra" they talked about. He was going to find out soon enough, though.

Academy Arc

Once in the academy, it confused him. He was failing all his classes, and this concerned his teachers. So they wanted to see his parents. The nine year old had to explain that he didn't have any, what happened, and everything of that sorts. But they didn't believe him. That night, not knowing what to do. When Ceil was just about to fall asleep, there was a knock at the door. He got up to answer it, and when he did he was shocked to see his parents! But they were in horrible shape, burned to the bone. When he reached out his hand, they dropped to the ground. Behind then was his brother, who he had though died after not seeing him for four years. Turns out, he had become a puppeteer and decided he would fill in for their parents place at the academy. And helped his younger brother learn the way of the ninja.

The next day, the two were able to fool the school system into thinking that Ceilco's elder brother was his father. After the academy classes were over for the day, he would return home to his brother where his real learning would begin. This became a routine, and eventually it was time for the genin exams. Surprisingly, he passed. And to make it official, he received a Suna headband. In the mirror, he tried tieing it around his forehead, his arm, his neck, his waist. And no matter where he put it, it didn't look good. So he decided to keep it hidden in his jacket. If obligatory, he would take it out to prove to people that he was official.

Genin Arc

Ceilco's brother decided to keep him off from training for a few days, and performed a forbidden art on the twelve year old's right eye. He put an eye patch over it, and told him to rest for a few days. Once that was done, he wanted him to fight him without taking off the eye patch, or moving it all. And he did. But lost the battle. Next, he was to fight while lifting up the eye patch. He discovered that when he used genjutsu, it did more damage to his brother. But after doing so, he fell unconscious. It took up a lot of chakra, and he wouldn't wake up until the next day. Of course, depending on how long he keeps it open and in use decides how long it would effect him.

Next will be continued via Roleplay.
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PostSubject: Re: Phantom, Cielco [Suna Genin] Sun 08 Aug 2010, 11:04 pm

Role-Play Sample:
"Horrible" Quality:
 

"Ok" Quality:
 

"High" Quality:
 


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PostSubject: Re: Phantom, Cielco [Suna Genin] Mon 09 Aug 2010, 12:33 pm

Posting minimum for a Genin is 250 words, so your horrible quality post is unacceptable, since it is bellow that limit.


Quote :
Name: Kanashibari no Jutsu - Temporary Body Paralysis Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Element: --
Description: Kanashibari no Jutsu is an advanced Ninjutsu technique used to temporarily bind an individual or animal. With the person frozen in place, the ninja can either take the opportunity to attack or to retreat.

Remove it please, this Jutsu has been banned.

Name: Kyuu no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Raiton
Description: A jutsu on which the user creates a chakra made sphere of lightning energy in his hands, and throws it to the opponent, giving him a strong electric jolt. This lightning ball will be heavy and thrown in a lateral direction.

How large is th sphere of lightning? This electric jolt, what kind of damage can it do?

Other Jutsus seem to be all Canonon, and that other Lightning Custom Jutsu seems ok. I guess, this will approved quite soon.
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PostSubject: Re: Phantom, Cielco [Suna Genin] Mon 09 Aug 2010, 3:33 pm

Light wrote:
Posting minimum for a Genin is 250 words, so your horrible quality post is unacceptable, since it is bellow that limit.

Changed.


Light wrote:
Quote :
Name: Kanashibari no Jutsu - Temporary Body Paralysis Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Element: --
Description: Kanashibari no Jutsu is an advanced Ninjutsu technique used to temporarily bind an individual or animal. With the person frozen in place, the ninja can either take the opportunity to attack or to retreat.

Remove it please, this Jutsu has been banned.

Removed.

Light wrote:
Name: Kyuu no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Raiton
Description: A jutsu on which the user creates a chakra made sphere of lightning energy in his hands, and throws it to the opponent, giving him a strong electric jolt. This lightning ball will be heavy and thrown in a lateral direction.

How large is th sphere of lightning? This electric jolt, what kind of damage can it do?

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PostSubject: Re: Phantom, Cielco [Suna Genin] Mon 09 Aug 2010, 10:21 pm

Quote :
Name: Kyuu no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Raiton
Description: A jutsu on which the user creates a chakra made sphere of lightning energy in his hands about the size of a volleyball, and throws it to the opponent, giving him a strong electric jolt. Which could possibly stub them. This lightning ball will be heavy and thrown in a lateral direction.

This jutsu needs grammatical corrections. Change him to them and stub to stun
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PostSubject: Re: Phantom, Cielco [Suna Genin] Mon 09 Aug 2010, 10:23 pm

Hugh wrote:
Quote :
Name: Kyuu no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Raiton
Description: A jutsu on which the user creates a chakra made sphere of lightning energy in his hands about the size of a volleyball, and throws it to the opponent, giving him a strong electric jolt. Which could possibly stub them. This lightning ball will be heavy and thrown in a lateral direction.

This jutsu needs grammatical corrections. Change him to them and stub to stun

Sorry about that. Razz
I was half asleep when I edited them. Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Phantom, Cielco [Suna Genin] Mon 09 Aug 2010, 10:25 pm

Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Suiton technique.

Those edits are good.

Your special characteristic: How long can you keep that eye activated?

To me it sounds more like a Clan ability, so I am not quite sure about it.
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PostSubject: Re: Phantom, Cielco [Suna Genin] Mon 09 Aug 2010, 10:31 pm

Light wrote:
Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Suiton technique.

Suiton is one of my characters elements...

Light wrote:
Your special characteristic: How long can you keep that eye activated?

To me it sounds more like a Clan ability, so I am not quite sure about it.

Edited that.

And in history, it explains that his brother performed a forbidden art technique on it to make it like that, so wouldn't it be more of special characteristic?
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PostSubject: Re: Phantom, Cielco [Suna Genin] Mon 09 Aug 2010, 10:35 pm

I know that.

But, check the description for Water Clone Jutsu, something is missing.


I guess its fine then, unless some Admin/Mod thinks otherwise.
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PostSubject: Re: Phantom, Cielco [Suna Genin] Wed 11 Aug 2010, 3:34 pm

Bump?
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PostSubject: Re: Phantom, Cielco [Suna Genin] Wed 11 Aug 2010, 3:43 pm

Considering you are not from a clan, you can remove the Clan Information part of your application. :3

You are also missing some fundamental jutsu:

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PostSubject: Re: Phantom, Cielco [Suna Genin] Wed 11 Aug 2010, 3:50 pm

Removed Clan Part, and added the jutsu.
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PostSubject: Re: Phantom, Cielco [Suna Genin] Wed 11 Aug 2010, 3:51 pm

Aapproved. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Phantom, Cielco [Suna Genin] Wed 24 Nov 2010, 7:51 am

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