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PostSubject: Kurayami Clan Wed 15 Dec 2010, 4:48 am

Name: Kurayami Clan
Clan Location: Kumogakure
Clan Traits: Palm Formation - All clan members are inscribed with two diamond like marks on each palm for use in the clan specialized jutsu.
Kekkei Genkai: Meiton [Dark Release]
Dark Release is a Yang based, or physical, release form utilizing fuuinjutsu. The original 'darkness release' on its own creates voids, or creases in which 'negative space' exists, thus being countered with actual chakra. Assuming all chakra is positive, Dark Release creates a negative to cancel it out. It is thus mainly a defensive agent. Though often used on a 1 to 1 basis creating a negative space to nullify jutsu, it can also be used to form waves of negative destabilizing energy that causes a user or users to lose control of any ninjutsu they are using when the energy hits it. This causes the release of any lingering jutsu including clones, but does not effect genjutsu in any way.

The members of the clan have focused this via fuuinjutsu in that they can use the darkness as a medium for storage and containment of chakra. They can thus 'absorb' any and all ninjutsu or chakra that physically manifests itself (does not effect genjutsu) they are with in range of into the fuuinjutsu on their palm. They can then expel this chakra as a pure chakra based attack; breaking a technique down into its bare minimum and storing it. This bloodline limit, or the negative spaces it creates have a capacity, so if one absorbs too much it could be heavily destructive to their own body, causing many and perhaps deadly wounds if they absorb chakra over their limit. However, the user otherwise maintains a steady 'immunity' to chakra based techniques that they absorb with their techniques. Each created void has a limit of storing as a rank higher than the amount of chakra used to open the void. Thus a C ranked void could hold a B rank equivalent of chakra before destabilizing and causing an explosion of chakra

The chakra absorbed can only be released as a blast of pure chakra, or manipulated into another ninjutsu or genjutsu. It cannot be used in any other special ways. Also, in the same way as the voids, the fuuinjutsu version that absorbs chakra in the palm can only take one rank higher chakra without causing internal damage.

For All Absorption Techniques -

S ranked = 2 S ranks/4 A ranks/6 B ranks/8 C ranks/10 D ranks
A ranked = 1 S rank/2 A ranks/ 3 B ranks/4 C ranks/5 D ranks
B ranked = 1 A rank/2 B ranks/3 C ranks/4 D ranks
C ranked = 1 C rank/2 D ranks/


Secret Clan Jutsu:
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Name: Meiton: Kyuuketsuko - Darkness Release: Inhaling Maw
Rank: C-S
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Element: Darkness [Meiton]
Description: The shinobi uses the Dark Release Kekkei Genkai to perform a technique superficially similar to the Chakra Absorption Technique, in order to forcibly extract the physical and spiritual energy of another ninja's jutsu and absorb it through the upper square of the mark on his left hand. The user can absorb up to a rank above the amount of chakra used for this jutsu. After using this ability, the user is able to detect their natural elemental affinity, and then manipulate the victim's chakra and perform ninjutsu.

Name: Meiton: Judgement - Darkness Release: Judgement
Rank: C-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Darkness [Meiton]
Description: The user converts the chakra absorbed with Dark Release: Inhaling Maw into raw chakra taking the form of explosively powerful light blue flames, turning it back on his enemies with amplified strength to blow them away. The flames are expelled through the lower square of the mark on the user's left hand.

Name: Meiton: Houmen Zenkai - Darkness Release: Destruction Field
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Darkness [Meiton]
Description: The user taps into their darkness element to create an expanding field of darkness chakra that destabilizes all chakra in its 35 meter radius. All jutsu in that area are destabilized, causing clones of all kinds to disperse and any ninjutsu in use lose their shape or cohesion and either fail, or become uncontrollable. This effect is instant, and ceases to be effective as soon as it is completed.

Name: Meiton: Kyoukusei Tenzuru - Darkness Release: Polarity Shift
Rank: C-S
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Element: Darkness [Meiton]
Description: Using the darkness element, the user is able to steal the chakra of a jutsu and maintain its form, stealing its abilities until the jutsu is completed. This requires chakra equal to the jutsu being stolen to absorb the jutsu into the clan members usage. When the jutsu runs out of stolen chakra, the jutsu ends because the chakra used was not the clan member's.

History: This clans ability wasn't always in Kumogakure. In fact, they originated in a minor village and was adopted into Lightning Country during their involvement in a past war. While at the time they were seen as a cursed clan whose chakra and release form was made for death and ill omen. Because the made it impossible for others to use ninjutsu with their chakra, they were considered devils and demons, stifling human creation and ability. However, with fuuinjutsu becoming more and more popular within those places with the economy worthy of experimentation, this seemed as though something that could be used in a more universal way. Kumogakure thus bought the clan and they were happy to leave their old country that thought them more of a burden.

Upon arriving in Kumogakure, their abilities were experimented with and augmented with via fuuinjutsu to form a near perfect ninjutsu defense. While they are still considered a minor clan among many others because of how specific their use of technique is, they are quickly becoming known in the hidden village, and by it's many rivals as the secret ninjutsu stopping weapon of the hidden cloud become more and more known and rumored about. With Dark release being tapped into still, it's universal use is still to be discovered; even with so much already known.

Clan Details: Closed


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PostSubject: Re: Kurayami Clan Wed 15 Dec 2010, 4:52 am

I believe there is already a clan on this site with that Kekkei Genkai
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PostSubject: Re: Kurayami Clan Wed 15 Dec 2010, 6:13 am

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I believe there is already a clan on this site with that Kekkei Genkai
Not that I know of Ree. Link?

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Dark Release is a Yang Element form based on fuuinjutsu.
You would need to explain what "Yang Element" is. Yang is more of a release than an element in my opinion. Isn't Yang the physical energy of chakra that gives energy form? you will need to describe how this relates to Dark Release and fuuinjutsu more.

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The original 'darkness release' on its own creates voids, or creases in which 'negative space' exists, thus being countered with actual chakra
Does this mean you are able to do this?

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Assuming chakra is positive, Dark Release creates a negative to cancel it out. It is thus mainly a defensive agent.
Though basic, you will still need to point out what would have if chakra is negative, and what positive/negative actually mean in accordance to your techniques. How is someone to know whether their technique is based off of positive chakra?

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Though often used on a 1 to 1 basis, meaning that an A-ranked chakra technique could be countered by using the same amount of chakra thus creating no real advantage.
This is written as a run-on sentence but it isn't so it kind of confuses things, please edit. Also, is this definite? does it always cost the same amount of chakra to cancel a technique to what that technique costs to produce? and how would the user know?

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They can thus 'absorb' any and all ninjutsu form they are with in range of into the fuuinjutsu on their palm.
Does this only mean ninjutsu? or all chakra based techniques?

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They can then expel this chakra as a pure chakra based attack; breaking a technique down into its bare minimum and storing it.
Seeing as chakra is internally manipulated would this mean that you can only expel it in a kind of pure chakra blast, or can you shape this into weapons etc? please detail the level.

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This technique has a capacity, so if one absorbs too much it could be heavily destructive
Instead of technique it should be bloodline and/or Kekkei Genkai. How much would ones capacity be? how "destructive"
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PostSubject: Re: Kurayami Clan Wed 15 Dec 2010, 6:51 am

Does this mean you are able to do this?

- Yes, but the specialized version is more useful because it can be stored.

The rest is changed a little toward what you wanted.
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PostSubject: Re: Kurayami Clan Wed 15 Dec 2010, 8:35 am

Approved meh lady. Stay safe!
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