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Yazu
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PostSubject: Beez - Third Mission Completed Mon 20 Dec 2010, 9:35 pm

Character Name: Kaguya Beez
Rank: Genin
Village: Kiri
Mission Bulletin: Kiri Village Bulletin
Mission Link: Library Duties
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PostSubject: Re: Beez - Third Mission Completed Tue 21 Dec 2010, 5:38 am

Official Grading: 4/5 + 1/5 (D-Rank) = 5/10
Unofficial Grading: 15/20
Comments: Overall it was a well written Mission. The mission itself was a sedentery one so it mainly focussed on your social role-playing ability. The mission had good length and the quality with your writing was sound. The grammar and spelling was in "tip-top" shape and this is why you were awarded highly in your official grade with a four. An area in which you could improve on would be an aspect of spontaneity in your writing to make it more exciting and appealing. Other than that you did a really good job, great work! Smile

5 Mission Points Awarded.
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