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PostSubject: Ryach, Turai. [Kiri Genin] Wed 29 Dec 2010, 3:30 am

Basic Information:

Name: Ryach, Turai.

Secondary Title: -

Age: 14

Gender: Male.

Physical Appearance:


Turai is a lightweight and speedy young little man at forty-five kilograms. Standing at five feet and nine inches, he is obviously quite tall for his age. A nice but simple shade of blonde-brown hair rests upon his head, but is usually unnoticed because it is covered by his white hood.

An innocent pair of blue ocean eyes shine brilliantly from the young man, much to the delight of female kunoichi everywhere. However, he doesn't appear to like the attention that is given to him and doesn't mind being labeled with 'hot', 'gorgeous', and 'sexy', but doesn't like it every time a girl who likes him see's him. He is overall a fair ninja. Under his sleeves are pouches of kunai, hidden from the examining eyes of the public. In his leg pouch is concealment bombs like smoke or ember grenades, along with makabishi spikes in the back pouch.

Under his headband, he keeps a concealed little seal scroll for his puppets which are of course for summoning. He will activate this seal by stabbing a kunai into it.
The young man doesn't care much about his body, having some bruises and cuts unhealed lately, he knows that they'll heal on their own.

His face barely has any freckles, and is probably the only place on his whole body that doesn't have any cuts or scars. Thanks to this, the major looks of his face leaves him looking probably good looking to most girls, but not to himself. His favourite clothing is a white hoodie and torn or broken jeans.

Personality:

Turai is a young and solemn young man. Deciding at a young age that he would be both a swordsman and a 'footfighter', he ensured throughout his training career he would focus solely on on speed when he was kicking and power when he decided to use his sword. Through this, Minoichi has still maintained a balance between speed and power, leaving both his slashes and kicks just as quick and strong as the other.

Although he is a powerful ninja, even for his age, he hates fighting, strongly. He won't fight unless he has to, leaving him somewhat of a pacifist. Out of the goodness of his heart, he talks nice and calmly to people and finds their side of the story out.

Hidden away from the world, Turai has a secret, double identity that is ruthless and merciless, though it only appears as a last resort. It doesn't affect anything besides his behavior, and can somewhat appear intimidating to timid or scared enemies. Sad to say, people don't give him a second chance to prove he is quite the nice and calm male.

On a day to day basis, Turai remains quiet unless in a lively conversation. He's not emotionally challenged in anyway, he just doesn't like talking. Happy originally in nature, Turai is and always will be a nice, calm and happy young male, entertaining to talk with and quite funny overall.

Catch Phrase: -

Clan: -

Rank Information:

Rank: Genin.

Village Affiliation: Kirigakure no Sato.

Skill Information:

Character Speciality:
Main: Puppetry
Sub: Genjutsu
Elemental Affinity:
Main: -
Sub: -
Special Characteristics: -

Background Information

History: Displayed Lower.

Role-Play Sample:

He sighed quietly, his breathe came out in a mist. It was obviously quite cold, and he sighed as he shivered, trying to keep some warmth by making his body move.He heard footsteps, coming towards him. He looked around quickly, trying to make sure he was ready if something happened away. The emerged from the shadows with an evil grin, and he sighed. It was just them, he could deal with them.

Turai woke up in a cold sweat, remembering what just happened in his dream like it was something that was happening now, as he spoke. He got up, walking into his bathroom and getting a towel to wipe the sweat off his face. It was quiet, obviously his parents had already left for work around the village. He put on a shirt and headed outside, hoping for an eventful and fun day.

As he walked outside, the usual happened. The sun glared at his eyes, makin the blue in them stand out. Even he could tell it. He walked into protection of shadows from the trees, today was not a day he was wanting to get slammed around by comments on his looks. He walked quietly down the sidewalk, keeping his head up and saying hello to the everyday people that walked down next to him. He smiled, as his friend walked out from his house just as he pulled up to get him. "Right on time, as always" the friend said, Turai just nodded and moved over a little to make room for them to walk.

As they walked further down the street, his friend spoke up to break the silence. "Turai, how am I ever going to be a ninja? I have no specialty and no clan control over elements.." To this Turai stopped. His friend was normally so happy, something must be bugging him. He looked over to him and grabbed his shoulders. "Come. We're going to find your specialty." His friend looked up at him with a light smile as Turai pulled out the small seal his puppets were sealed in and ran to the training dome. His friend followed happily, his sword strapped to his back sheathe.

As they got the the training dome, Turai stopped. Nobody was here, that was a good thing. He told his friend to move back a little as he pulled out a kunai and stabbed it into the scroll, summoning Ryalia, his puppet. "Kugutsu no Jutsu" he spoke normally as the chakra strings extended from his fingers and into the wire slots in the doll-puppet. "Take your blade out, and prepare to try and defeat my puppet. Don't destroy it, I do need to fix it if you hit it." he smiled enviably as his friend pulled the sword out and wielded it like in a normal fight. He stopped the chakra flow immediately and let the puppet drop down quietly. "Stop. You're stance isn't right." He walked over to him and moved him around a little, before he stood back. His stance was fixed, and as Turai smiled he noticed his friend looked a lot more confident in himself.



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PostSubject: Re: Ryach, Turai. [Kiri Genin] Fri 07 Jan 2011, 7:41 am

Name: Kugutsu Ryalia ; Puppet Ryalia
Rank: D
Description: The best way to describe Ryalia is like a shovanistic schoolgirl/theatre puppet. Her short and fluffy dress makes her look almost like a happy and excited model but beneath all the clothing is a secret and deadly hidden compartment of weapons. To be detailed, her face is primmed and propped to make the enemy almost like her before being attacked by Kunai.
Body Slots:
Slot 1: Kunai Shooter. This slot is located in her middle stomach/bellybutton. It is hidden under the skin but when activated, will remove the bellybutton into the stomach and replace it with the Kunai shooter. The Kunai shooter holds a total of 10 Kunai before needing reloading.
Slot 2: Heavy Battleaxe. This weapon is located in the hand. It is heavy and slow to use but deals incredible damage when connecting with an enemy.
History: Turai was given Ryalia by his grandfather, actually, all his puppets were from his grandfather. He was told that Ryalia was the doll his sister had in her hand when she died, and that he wanted her to be with him at all times. He enhanced the size of it by using Chakra and pointed out what he could to make it useful for him. Since then, Turai has treasured this and made it one of his most favourite puppets.

When he turned 8, his parents gave him the option of Kunai, Senbon or Shuriken shooters. He chose all of them, through his parents advised fight, he eventually got all of them along with side-weapons like battlaxes, spears and specialized Katanas. Throughout the years he has developed areas and ways of protection so that they are both useful and hard to destroy.

Name: Juzuliac (Heavy Battleaxe)
Rank: D
Element: -
Description: Juzuliac is a strong and heavy double-sided battleaxe. By pulling Turai's right hand backward, he can make Ryalia swing the blade backward and by pushing it forward can make it swing forward. The harder he pushes either way the stronger the hit and the more damage it can potentially do.

The blade cannot be dipped in any form of poison because if he were to slip he could potentially kill himself.

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Name: Kugutsu Alariz ; Puppet Alariz
Rank: D
Description: The honest and probably most direct way to describe Alariz is a highly experienced puppet-mage. He wears robes, has a fake spellbook in his upper robe pocket and can't use experienced elemental attacks yet, but has a high look into the future. His weapon of choice is a spear and shuriken.
Body Slots:
Slot 1: Shuriken Shooter. This slot is located in the stomach area also. As Ryalia, the bellybutton is descended down into the inner part of him, and replaced with a weapon shooter. Because Shurikens are thinner and smaller than Kunai, this weapon shooter holds 25 shuriken before needing reloading.
Slot 2: Light Spear. This is located in a sheathe connected to his back. Because spears are thinner, they are more lightweight and therefore are quicker to hit with, but are prone to dealing less damage.
History: Turai was given Alariz by his grandfather, actually, all his puppets were from his grandfather. He was told that Alariz was the physical form of his fathers chakra, but in a small, doll form. He enhanced the size of it by using Chakra and pointed out what he could to make it useful for him. Since then, Turai has customized it and added his own chakra to make it especially powerful.

When he turned 8, his parents gave him the option of Kunai, Senbon or Shuriken shooters. He chose all of them, through his parents advised fight, he eventually got all of them along with side-weapons like battlaxes, spears and specialized Katanas. Throughout the years he has developed areas and ways of protection so that they are both useful and hard to destroy.

Name: Ryuzika
Rank: D
Element: -
Description: Ryuzika is a short and subtle spear from first look, but through Turai's command, can make Alariz press a hidden button and enlarge it a maximum of 5 feet. Because the weapon is a pole, it can be stabbed not swung at the enemy from both ways. Turai is trying to learn how to channel elemental chakra into this weapon to make it better in a fight.

This weapon is dipped in a mild poison that, when comes in contact, burns the skin and puts the user through some pain. If the poison gets far enough into the blood stream it can partly nullify some parts of the nerve system.

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Name: Kugutsu Dyanier ; Puppet Daniel
Rank: D
Description: Dyanier is a taller, more muscular figure, and of the three secondary puppets made, seems to be the more balanced and therefore leader of them. Unlike the rest, he holds a more detailed weapon, an Adamantite or green Katana. His jaw is held tightly and his stomach is thin and bodily right with the rest of it. His stomach is very much detailed and is the holding point of the strongest shooter of the three, the multi-Senbon shooter.
Body Slots:
Slot 1: Multi-Senbon shooter. The slot is located in the stomach area as well. As the other two puppets, the bellybutton is removed into the inner part of the puppet and replaced with a weapon shooter. What's different about this puppet is that the senbon is shot out like a revolving bullet holders, a lot like a machinegun. The Senbon is shot 4 senbon in each revolving round. Overall, the shooter hold 36 Senbon before needing reloading.
Slot 2: Adamantite Katana. This is located in the hand. Unlike normal swords that have a normal silver blade, this blade is made by a rare green mineral that was handcrafted into a Katana.
History: Turai was given Dyanier by his grandfather, actually, all his puppets were from his grandfather. He was told that Dyanier was the toy figure he held above his bed when he was young, showing strength against the darkness. He enhanced the size of it by using Chakra and pointed out what he could to make it useful for him. Since then, Turai has customized this to the brink of where it could cause some critical damage if it hits the correct spot.

When he turned 8, his parents gave him the option of Kunai, Senbon or Shuriken shooters. He chose all of them, through his parents advised fight, he eventually got all of them along with side-weapons like battlaxes, spears and specialized Katanas. Throughout the years he has developed areas and ways of protection so that they are both useful and hard to destroy.

Name: Adyulia
Rank: D
Element: -
Description: Adyulia is a specifically strong and favourited weapon by Turai because the blade end of the blade is kept at a concentrated rust, because if rust gets into the blood stream it can potentially kill the ninja. The Katana is a straight, one-way weapon and hence cannot be used both ways, but because of it's light weight and the shape, can be turned extremely quickly to block the other opponent in a multiple fight.

Not only is the tip rusted specifically, the blade is dipped in a concentrated liquid that causes the user to continue to bleed unless healed, basically making them into a Hemophiliac. For this to be executed properly, though, it must pierce the skin relatively deep.

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Name: Kugutsu Kiyuki ; Puppet Kiyuki
Rank: C
Description: Kiyuki is a more shadowed figure than the rest of the puppets, and hence looks more like a lone wolf than anything else. He has white hair that drapes down the sides to make him look more like a warlock than anything. He hides most of his body under a ripped and torn cloak, which resembles the rouge look in him in battle.
Body Slots:
Slot 1: Makabishi Spikes dropper. The Makabishi Spikes Dropper was a machine Turai made himself using what knowledge on customization on puppetry and mechanics he could find. This holds 100 Makabishi spikes before it needs reloading, and drops the makabishi spikes in bouts of 20. It is located in his left shoulderblade on his back.
Slot 2: Rope Shooter. This rope shooter shoots out a rope / lasso, and entangles the enemy. Because it is slow charge up, it is easily noticeable before it shoots, though the shot is rather fast. The Rope Shooter is located as a turret coming from Kiyuki's chest.
Slot 3: Retractable Halberd on Chain. The Halberd on a chain is a weapon that reaches great lengths while being able to do great damage, it is Turai's favourite weapon and was the reason he made it on his strongest puppet. This weapon is not dipped in poison for the fact that poison could tip off when the halberd is jerked back using the chain. Quite obviously, this blade is located in his hand.
History: Turai was given Kiyuki by his grandfather, actually, all his puppets were from his grandfather. He was told that Kiyuki was the hero of all his grandfathers dreams, which he turned into a doll. He then enhanced the size of it by using Chakra and pointed out what he could to make it useful for him. Since then, Turai has customized this to the brink of where it could cause some critical damage if it hits the correct spot.

When he turned 8, his parents gave him the option of Kunai, Senbon or Shuriken shooters. He chose all of them, through his parents advised fight, he eventually got all of them along with side-weapons like battlaxes, spears and specialized Katanas. Throughout the years he has developed areas and ways of protection so that they are both useful and hard to destroy.

Poisons:

Poison Name: Zuzutsu ; Deathly Poison
Rank: C
Poison Description:
Solid State: -
Liquid State: In the liquid state, this poison is kept in a glass vial and put onto the two ends of a spear. The colour of this poison is blue and yellow.
Gaseous State: -
Poison Effect(s):
[ Post 0 / The poison shows no sign of doing any damage to the opponent. ]
[ Post 1 / The poison makes the user slow in reaction, specifically in their arms and legs. ]
[ Post 2 / The poison begins to make the enemy convulse for a little while. ]
[ Post 3 / The poison makes most of the enemies nerve system shut off, only head and arms are able to be moved. ]
[ Post 4 / The poison begins to let up, making the enemies nerve system move but still slowed reaction. ]
[ Post 5 / The poison enables the opponents body to move freely again, slowed reaction continues. ]
[ Post 6 / Poison shows no symptoms of having slowed reaction or disabled movement. ]

Poison Name: Yuyutsu ; Burning Poison
Rank: C
Poison Description:
Solid State: -
Liquid State: In the liquid state of this poison, the poison is kept in a glass vial and put onto the end of a rusted Katana. The colour of this poison is green and purple.
Gaseous State: -
Poison Effect(s):
[ Post 0 / The poison shows no sign of doing any damage, in other words the poison is delayed. ]
[ Post 1 / The poison begins to make a small burning sensation inside the person or on the skin, whichever it comes in contact with first. ]
[ Post 2 / The poison begins to first show symptoms of effect inside the person visibly, along with hot or red skin. ]
[ Post 3 / The poison begins to burn the inside of the person badly, possibly making them topple over in pain depending if they're well built or not well built. ]
[ Post 4 / The poison begins to die down, still leaving the person in pain but reducing pain rapidly ]
[ Post 5 / The poison shows almost no symptoms of pain, just a hot sensation in the cheeks. ]
[ Post 6 / Poison is gone from body. ]

[ The vials holds 200mls of poison each, and x times it is applied it loses 50mls of poison. Refilled after every topic. Damage does not increase if double the poison is applied. ]


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PostSubject: Re: Ryach, Turai. [Kiri Genin] Sat 08 Jan 2011, 11:38 am

Genjutsu Techniques.

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Basic Academy Jutsu

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PostSubject: Re: Ryach, Turai. [Kiri Genin] Sun 09 Jan 2011, 9:36 am

Birth Arc/Academy Arc

Turai always showed a good control over his chakra, and over puppets his father gave him when he was younger. He was a big baby, not in weight but in height. He wasn’t crying when he was born, in fact, he wasn’t breathing. He lived and nothing happened to his body, mind, or anything negative actually. He showed positive signs of having exquisite control over channeling his chakra even from a young age, and so his parents enrolled him into the Academy as soon as possible.

He grew up quickly, but shocked his parents when he said he wasn’t interested in doing normal ninjutsu. He wanted to learn puppetry and began to train himself until a Jounin in the village noticed him. The Jounin walked over and told him how he was a puppeteer also, and that Turai had a lot of potential and skill with his puppets. This day changed his life, because this Jounin also knew Genjutsu, another trusty decision Turai had decided to make was to also learn Genjutsu. He wanted to be an individual, not one of those people who did the same thing.

He soon looked into mechanics to learn to make his own machines for his puppets, and ended up having enough knowledge to make a Makabishi Spike planter. He trained with the Jounin everyday and soon learnt that he could make his puppets use elemental machines like a flamethrower and a water machine, but he would need a much more sturdy puppet then the ones he had at the moment.

The day he finished training puppetry, he moved immediately onto Genjutsu. Still not an easy topic and very testy on the mind, Genjutsu proved to be a particularly hard topic for Turai to learn. He had a good control over chakra but that wasn’t enough, he needed to focus especially on making the doll shake first, which he did easily. It wasn’t long before he made the doll look like it was on fire.

Turai proved to both himself and the Jounin that he could be different, and so far it’s all working out for him.

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( I only added History in another post because it wouldn't fit in the beginning one. )
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PostSubject: Re: Ryach, Turai. [Kiri Genin] Sun 09 Jan 2011, 2:35 pm

- With all your puppets weapons, you need to state where on the puppet's body they reside.

Mino. wrote:
Gaseous State: In the gaseous state of this poison, the poison is steamed by fire and turns into a gas that can burn or melt some parts of the skin and if it gets into the eyes, it can turn the person blind if not immediately removed.

Which weapon uses the poison is gaseous state?

- Try to make the description of all of your jutsu at least three lines long.

Mino. wrote:
Name: Nodono Kawaki [Thirst]
Type: Supplementary
Rank: D
Difficulty: C
Element: -
Description: The opponent is overcome by a sudden thirst and will be unable to concentrate fully because of this urge to find food; those who are weak against Genjutsu may even find themselves in a condition where they feel like they are lethargic due to this.

- This description is just copied and pasted from your Hunger Genjutsu; I suggest you edit it.

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Name: Paranoia Wan Shotto [Paranoia One Shot]
Type: Supplementary
Rank: D
Difficulty: C
Element: -
Description: After the user performs this illusion, the opponent is unable to see the user’s hands. Instead, they see a pair of illusionary hands that make it look as if the user was still performing hand seals. This can give a great advantage to the user in hand to hand combat.

- If the opponent can no longer see your hands, this means you can perform different jutsu to what they are expecting and they will not be able to see your hands properly during hand-to-hand combat. This is definately a C-Rank jutsu.

Mino. wrote:
Name: Genkiri [Illusion Blade]
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Difficulty: C
Element: -
Description: A skill used by genjutsu users. They will pump molded chakra from a genjutsu into a weapon. And the second the enemies eyes lock onto the weapon they may be trapped in the genjutsu. Afterwards the genjutsu work like normal. For the weapon to be used for another jutsu to be used with the weapon it require a two post waiting period.

- There don't seem to be any effects to this genjutsu. You just say "they will be trapped in a genjutsu". What genjutsu?

Mino. wrote:
Name: Itami Nai [No Pain]
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Difficulty: C
Element: -
Description: This technique prevents the target from feeling pain.

- I'm afraid this technique will have to be removed, because techniques like this just aren't accepted. To make the victim unaware of pain is OP.

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Name: Mizu Kouzui no Jutsu [Water Flood Technique]
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Difficulty: C
Element: -
Description: This jutsu makes a large bubble of solid water appear around the targets head, making them feel like it's hard to breathe. The jutsu may also cause them to panic as they try to remove the water from their face, to no avail. This jutsu is much more effective around water, where the water appears to jump up around the persons face instead of appearing out of the surrounding air.

- I think this jutsu would be Suiton element.

- You are missing an arc of your history, you need a Genin Arc.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryach, Turai. [Kiri Genin] Sun 09 Jan 2011, 5:48 pm

Quote :
Name: Paranoia Wan Shotto [Paranoia One Shot]
Type: Supplementary
Rank: D
Difficulty: C
Element: -
Description: After the user performs this illusion, the opponent is unable to see the user’s hands. Instead, they see a pair of illusionary hands that make it look as if the user was still performing hand seals. This can give a great advantage to the user in hand to hand combat.

This is from my Genin application, Leon Tavolin:

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Heki Hando Aizu no Jutsu [False Handseal Technique]
Rank: E
Element: N/A
Type: Genjutsu
Description: This is a skill where the user's hands seem to perform a jutsu correctly without the proper handseals. This is intended to deceive opponents, making it impossible to discern what the true jutsu being performed is by handseals alone. It can even be used to make the handseals look like the correct seals for a jutsu of the same rank the user knows. Obviously, the user is still performing the correct seals, but their opponent can't see that. This technique requires no handseals.

I suggest you use the second one, as it has already been approved.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryach, Turai. [Kiri Genin] Sun 09 Jan 2011, 11:56 pm

He's a recently made Genin, he has no history of it..

Other than that, I will fix the rest.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryach, Turai. [Kiri Genin] Mon 10 Jan 2011, 12:04 am

Fixed all the genjutsu, removing, editing and filling in which should.. be edited, removed or filled in? xD

I'll work on the other stuff soon.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryach, Turai. [Kiri Genin] Mon 10 Jan 2011, 12:31 am

Genin's still have a Genin Arc.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryach, Turai. [Kiri Genin] Mon 10 Jan 2011, 1:23 am

Okay. Got rid of the gaseous state, I was told that if it had a liquid state it had a gaseous state. I must have been wrong.

Fixed the jutsu descriptions.

But why do genin need genin history if they haven't had any history to write? It's called living in the present, he hasn't had any genin history so how can I write about it?
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PostSubject: Re: Ryach, Turai. [Kiri Genin] Mon 10 Jan 2011, 1:34 am

I dont have a Genin Arc on my genin either, so its not a problem. If they just became a Genin, which they have at all times unless specified in the history, its not necessary. Dont worry about it Mino
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PostSubject: Re: Ryach, Turai. [Kiri Genin] Mon 10 Jan 2011, 1:46 am

Well, in that case, i'm done.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryach, Turai. [Kiri Genin] Mon 10 Jan 2011, 5:19 am

Unless someone else sees a problem that I missed; approved.
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