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PostSubject: Ama, Ryozan [Konoha Genin] Tue 19 Jul 2011, 11:57 pm



Ama, Ryozan.

THE INFO.

Name: Ryozan Ama
Nickname: Shadow
Age: 14
Gender: male
Appearance: Ryozan wears his hair down to his shoulders in a very shaggy and messy mannor. His eyes are constantly hid behind his hair when they are able to be seen they are blue almost saphire. He is about 5'10 in height and is slender yet muscular in build. He is often found wearing a black coat and long black pants or shorts that ct off at his knees. He wears chainmail under his coat he tends to keep his coat some what unzipped where one could see his chainmail.

Ryozans coat is completely black, it is also ripped up on the bottom of the jacket showing its age. He has a small scar over his right eye from what seems to be a cut from a bladed weapon possibly a kunai or shuriken. When it suits him he may comb over his hair and tie it back in a small ponytail but he perfers his hair being wild and unruly. He sometimes wears a white shirt under his coat and over his chainmail and puts on some dog tags with his name on them and lets them hang from his neck.

Personality:
Ryozan is very tenacious, he loves to fight and cause trouble. His overconfidence in his own capabilities is his strength. When he finds someone whom is stronger he pushes himself to excell past them in order to acheive greater heights. He can be kind when it suits him but it doesnt happen very often, if he is nice to you he respects you. He has a twisted way of thinking he belives that letting an opponent live is worthless. He seems to think that if an opponent survives they will eventually cross your path again and this time they will finish you.

He usually is rather quiet unless angered which is easy to do. He is very cruel in his ways of battle. He uses dual swords passed down to him by his late father and he is very skilled in their use. He is called shadow because of his swordmanships great speed. His speed with his swords are hard to match. Not impossible but hard to match. He leaves no room for errors if he can help it, the downside to his way of fighting if you know the weakness to his dual sword style it is easy to counter.

He cares little about the affairs of Konohagakure he only cares about his own strength. He has an amazing amount of pride if he thinks you are insulting him he does not care who you are he attack with all of his power.

Clan: N/A
Nindō: "Mercy is a hindrance"

THE NINJA.

Origin: Konohagakure
Affiliation: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin
Specialties: Kenjutsu, Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinities: Katon (Fire), Fuuton (Wind)
Combat Style: He perfers the indirect style of combat. Attacking from the shadows he tries to strike down his opponents or atleast wound them so as to not use much of his chakra incase he needs it. He uses Katon and Fuuton style jutsu. The Fuuton jutsu is used to increase the power of the Katon style jutsu. The wind from the Fuuton ninjutsu causes the flames from the Katon style jutsu to increase in size and in power.

When forced into close quaters combat he uses a special dual sword style taught by his fatgher. He trained since he was around six years old to master this special style. Now he uses it to take out all his opponents. He has not yet mastered it enough to combine Ninjutsu with the blades but it is enough to push back his opponents. He rarely uses Fuuton jutsu outside of increasing his flames but on occasion if the situation demands it he will.
Special Characteristics:
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THE BACKGROUND.

History:
In the beginning Ryozan was just as normal as all the other kids at the academy, until the day his father died. His father was everything to him he learned to battle with dual sword handed style under his father. He returned home to nothing and no one when he tried to find out where everybody was Ryozan was informed that his beloved father was taken out on a mission. It was heart breaking to him, some beleive he never truely got over that loss. Ryozan grew bitter and cold some people have even called him cruel. He concentrated on his training practicing the dual sword style of close combat his father handed down to him.

He went to the academy for his final test after about two years of study. He was regarded as extremely skilled and possibly a genious in the art of combat. He trained his speed especially to be able to do more damage with his blades. He trains once a day when not on a mission to perfect his speed and his sword strikes. He hopes that sooner or later he can train himself to be able to unleash ninjutsu through the blades of his swords but currently he is unable to do so. He was once found by some people from his class in the middle of his training session they were extremely surprised at the way he trains with heavy weights attached to his legs and tree climbing exercises to increase his overall speed. Now at days as a Genin he has become fast and strong due to his rigorous training and he is ready for a powerful opponent to show himself.
Roleplay Sample:
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THE ARSENAL.

Jutsu, Weaponry, Items etc.

Academy Jutsu
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Katon
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Fuuton
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Other Jutsu
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Weaponry
Name: Dual Dragon Blades
Rank: C
Type: Swords
Appearance:
Quantity: 2
Storage: The sheaths are at all times strapped to his back.
Special Abilities: These swords have no specific ability except that they are customly made to be used by Ryozan only no one else can use these swords if they are to be taken then small spikes will come out of the hilt forcing the person to drop the blades. This happens because Ryozan has it pressure measured if someone grabs the swords too hard or too light the booby trap will go off. It took alot of training his grip to get the swords just right scars can be found on his hands where the booby trap was set off against him.

Name: Genin Kit
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Quantity: 1
Contents: 10 Kunai, 8 Shuriken, 5 Senbon, 2 Exploding Notes, 1 Exploding Pouch, Five Metres of wire/string, File, 10 Makibishi, 1 Windmill Shuriken, 2 blank small scrolls.






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PostSubject: Re: Ama, Ryozan [Konoha Genin] Thu 21 Jul 2011, 3:47 am

Is there anything I need to edit?
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PostSubject: Re: Ama, Ryozan [Konoha Genin] Thu 21 Jul 2011, 4:15 am


Hello Ryozan, your character is looking great so far but before it's acceptable there's just a couple of things that need tweaking.

    Please include a given rank for your character, I've noticed you placed 'Konoha Genin' for affiliation so I'm assuming it was a small mistake you missed.
    You've only given nine techniques and you are in fact allowed to have fifteen to start with.
    I believe you cannot have your swords include infused chakra I'm afraid, as only Craftsmen are able to make such weapons and you do not match their requirements.

If you just get these fixed up, I'll be able to help with the approval, thanks.

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PostSubject: Re: Ama, Ryozan [Konoha Genin] Thu 21 Jul 2011, 8:33 pm

Ok edited, I beleive thats what you were looking for if I misunderstood or didnt edit something right please let me know.
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PostSubject: Re: Ama, Ryozan [Konoha Genin] Thu 21 Jul 2011, 8:39 pm


All appears fine now apart from one small error, you've listed two Genjutsu techniques when you do not specialize in it. Please remove these and I'll be able to give my approval.

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PostSubject: Re: Ama, Ryozan [Konoha Genin] Thu 21 Jul 2011, 8:43 pm

Edited to your specifications if theres anything else let me know and ill fix it.
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PostSubject: Re: Ama, Ryozan [Konoha Genin] Thu 21 Jul 2011, 8:50 pm


You have thirteen out of fifteen techniques right now, however, after a talk in the chatbox I find it acceptable that you do not wish to fill up to the maximum amount of techniques, thus my approval is given.

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PostSubject: Re: Ama, Ryozan [Konoha Genin] Sat 23 Jul 2011, 2:06 am

I don't see any mistakes, so 2/2 approved. Have fun. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Ama, Ryozan [Konoha Genin] Sun 25 Sep 2011, 12:56 pm

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