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PostSubject: Toku - Konohagakure Genin Thu 01 Sep 2011, 5:34 pm



Toku

THE INFO.

Name: Toku Yamashiro
Nickname: The human wall
Nickname: Mujin [Non person]
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Appearance: Toku is an enigma, and he honors the word even more by wearing bandages that completely cover his tall, slender body, showing only a small piece of his face. Wearing a brown headband and brown pants, the rest of his body is completely covered in bandages, something he also uses as a means to attack and defend himself. Next to the bandages, the headband and the trousers, he has a pair of swords on his back that resemble scimitars with the handle covered in bandages. Being very tall for his age, Toku is 168 centimeters in size and weighs about 55 kilos. Other then that, there really is not much to say about Toku, since he is never shown wearing anything other then this outfit, and it is said that he even bathes with his bandages wrapped around him.

Toku is quite muscular, thought this is not shown much due to the fact that he is quite tall. His 55 kilos come from his muscles, since there is no visible ounce of fat on his body. When he is punched, he almost does not feel a thing due to his great stamina and muscular body. Sometimes Toku is called Mujin, because of the fact that he looks like a mummy, only part of his face is shown, nobody knows a single thing about him and he rarely speaks, giving him the nickname "Mujin", meaning Non person. The only part of his face that is shown is his nose and his eyes.
Personality: Like no one knows what he looks like, or knows what his last name and origin are, there is not a single person that truly knows what Toku is really like. When one would see him, they would think that he is as cold as stone. Toku never speaks, though this is not because he is afraid to speak, but because he does not feel like he has something to say that is worth saying. In fact, the only time when he does speak is when he proves someone wrong or to give them a proper warning, spending most of his time simply listening to what others have to say. Toku is not beyond killing someone when he feels threatened, or when he thinks someone deserves to be killed. Though he is not a violent person, he knows that sometimes, it is neccesary to take someones like so they can not live to kill someone else.

Next to his extremely calm and cool temper, he is extremely observant, being able to see through attacks when he witnessed them more then once, and capable of deducing one's weaknesses and using them in his advantage. Being able to quickly switch between attack and defense, close combat and ranged combat, he is a very overall fighter that can fight almost any opponent on equal footing, something that is quite incredibly, being that he has received nearly no training beside the one he gave himself. Though his skills outside of Ninjutsu and Taijutsu are lacking, he does well enough without the use of anything out of his field of specialties.
Clan: -
Nindō: "Beat me all you want, I won't be the first to fall"

THE NINJA.

Origin: Mizu no kuni
Affiliation: Konohagakure no Sato
Rank: Genin [C rank]
Specialties:
Main: Taijutsu
Sub: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinities:
Main: Wind [Fuuton]
Sub: Earth [Doton]
Combat Style: Toku's fighting style is simply, yet brilliant. He fights using his toughened body in a combination with powerful Taijutsu moves. These are mostly used to kick an opponent of his feet or to land a devastating punch that can take an opponent out in one blow. Next to that, he uses a lethal combination of Wind and Earth in collaboration with the Bandages that are wrapped tightly around his body. His accuracy at Taijutsu is just as high as his accuracy at slicing people up with sharpened tendrils of bandaging, and his rock hard armor of bandages.
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THE BACKGROUND.

History:
As a Child, Toku was the kind of boy no one would ever play with, and didnt get to know who his parents where. He never knew why no one did not want to play, so he started covering his body in bandages since he was still a very young boy. When other boys would go into the mountains to play games, Toku went into the mountains simply to watch the other kids play, wondering what it would be like to have friends. It was around his seventh year that he developed his quiet and cold attitude towards the world, simply listening to others and watching how they spent their time playing with others and wasting their time. When the other kids went to bed, Toku went into the mountains, simply pounding the rocks with his fists in order to get stronger. Spending hours and hours just pounding the rocks around him, he built up his stamina, learning to not fear pain and use it as a stepping stone.

When Toku was eight, he passed the Academy with the highest grades in class, having already mastered Earth ninjutsu when the other kids where still learning how to walk on water. Upon becoming a Genin, things did not change much regarding his social life. While all the other kids got assigned to Jounin and squads, Toku was left out due to the fact that the kids did not like being around him, and the teachers feared him, and what he might become. Thanks to the actions of his former village, Toku left by hiding in the sewers, running all the way to the sea and walking all the way from the Water country to the fire country, not stopping for four solid days and nights, showing his great stamina until he finally collapsed on the borders of the Leaf village. Being brought in by guards that found him, he spent a week in the hospital while a background check was done, not being able to find out a single thing about the boy, no place of origin, no family, nothing.

Though the former Hokage granted the boy permission to stay, he has been living in Konoha ever since, though he has learned not to rely on others or show signs of weakness anymore, especially after the way he was treated during his short life in the Water country. Having increased his power even further by training in solitude, he now wanders around the Fire country, looking for strong people who he deems worthy to fight him. If he does not think someone is worthy of fighting him, he will just avoid meeting them or simply walk away when approached.
Roleplay Sample:
A long, long time ago in a town called farmville, a happy piglet was taking a walk until he met a sickly gazelle sitting on a chair just outside of town. When he walked over to him, the happy piglet asked "What is wrong little gazelle, do you not want to go to the playground and play with your other gazelle friends". "I can't" said the sickly gazelle as he sighed deeply. "I can't play today, for I have become ill. My head hurts, and so does my stomach" he said, letting a second sigh escape his lips. "That's so sad" said the happy piglet as it gave the sickly gazelle a pat on his back. "I however, am going to have fun now. Bye bye". And with that, the happy piglet went to meet his little piglet friends and had a great day until the sun went down.

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Source: Tsuchikage Mu, Naruto
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PostSubject: Re: Toku - Konohagakure Genin Thu 01 Sep 2011, 5:34 pm

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Name: Genin Kit
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Quantity: 1
Contents: 10 Kunai, 8 Shuriken, 5 Senbon, 2 Exploding Notes, 1 Exploding Pouch, Five Metres of wire/string, File, 10 Makibishi, 1 Windmill Shuriken, 2 blank small scrolls.


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PostSubject: Re: Toku - Konohagakure Genin Thu 01 Sep 2011, 6:34 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Toku - Konohagakure Genin Thu 01 Sep 2011, 7:08 pm


Hello Vergilicous! Just a few things need to be changed first before it can be accepted.

Firstly, you haven't mentioned a surname. Now it's understandable if you want to go for a bit of plot development by not having a surname, but I'd appreciate it if you'd offer one please. If you wish for your character or any other character to not be aware of your name simple have a [strike] placed through the name to signal so. You also haven't supplied an image, everyone has to supply one though as it's a mandatory rule. So please have one edited in.

Both your Appearance and Personality requires two paragraphs worth of detail. Also, in your Appearance section it seems to cut off short perhaps this was an editing mistake. If you're struggling to think about what you could include then try thinking of how your character physically appears, does he have any scars or noticeable marks, what clothes will he normally wear when not on missions, if any. Small things like these can greatly increase the description of your character. For you personality think about friendships, what type of people does he like, dislike or stay neutral with. Does he get angered or upset easily. Always answer your personalities with 'Why', why does he act like this or why does he think this.

You seemed to have missed out your Combat Style, just fill in around three to four lines worth of writing please telling us how you fight, what you use to fight and any special tactics you have etc...

Your History could do with another paragraph worth of information as well please. You've also mentioned how you walked to the Fire Country for four straight days, how exactly is this possible with the great length of the ocean that separates the two countries? For help on another paragraph with the history, try mentioning pre - birth, talk about your parents and what they were like or perhaps mention what life is like within the new village of Konohagakure. Once again, small details prove the most helpful. You also have to submit an original piece of roleplay, that meaning it has to be fresh out of your mind, it's to show that you have the roleplay capabilities that the site requires.

Unfortunately you cannot wield the Saber since you do not possess Weaponry and the Saber is of C - Rank. When you do not have Weaponry as a Special Characteristic, you are limited to D and below rank weapons. For the Houtai no Jutsu, you'll need to explain that it can only block D - Rank and below techniques since that's the equivalent rank, yet Katon and Raiton techniques will be able to fire straight through it. For Yonsude no Jutsu, you'll have to increase the rank of the technique to around C - Rank and lower the range to Close, I understand you have a body full of bandages but for them to create that much at that length, your whole body would have to be exposed. The bandage hands will also be unable to perform hand seals for you. Mayu no Jutsu is fine apart from one thing, simply add in a Chakra Cost per Post please, since it'd require a continuous amount of chakra to keep the Earth element active. Hishou no Jutsu will be denied with the ability of flight, I'd allow it to have a sharper feel to the bandages but unfortunately not for the ability of it being able to give a speed boost and also flight.

Have these changes made and I'm sure it can be approved. Thanks.

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PostSubject: Re: Toku - Konohagakure Genin Thu 01 Sep 2011, 7:13 pm

Yea, I couldnt think of a last name, so I just kept it like this, since I thought it would be cooler without a last name.

For the pictures, it would not allow me to post any pictures, so Enma said he'd add them for me when he got back.

The jutsu will be changed in a sec, and the combat style will be added too.

I kept his history short since I dont want any metagaming about how someone could possibly know about him. Again, this is something that comes from Ingoo, since people Metagame so damn much that I became a bit held back with adding things that can be used against me
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PostSubject: Re: Toku - Konohagakure Genin Thu 01 Sep 2011, 7:29 pm


Thanks for making the changes and it seems that the reason is the seven day limit for when posting links on the forum, sorry about that.

You don't have to worry about metagaming on here, we're strict on members metagaming and or godmodding. It ruins everyone's experience on the forum and is definitely frowned upon, if you fear that someone is breaking the rules then simply tell the Staff and we'll have it sorted out within a jiffy.
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PostSubject: Re: Toku - Konohagakure Genin Fri 02 Sep 2011, 12:17 am

Oke, then expect things to be filled out in 5 minutes =P
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PostSubject: Re: Toku - Konohagakure Genin Fri 02 Sep 2011, 12:58 am

Fixed pretty much everything, ready for another check
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PostSubject: Re: Toku - Konohagakure Genin Fri 02 Sep 2011, 5:40 pm

Approved 1/2
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PostSubject: Re: Toku - Konohagakure Genin Fri 02 Sep 2011, 5:48 pm

Thanks =D
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PostSubject: Re: Toku - Konohagakure Genin Fri 02 Sep 2011, 5:51 pm


Approved.

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PostSubject: Re: Toku - Konohagakure Genin Mon 09 Jan 2012, 4:08 am


Archived.

Due to inactivity.

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