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PostSubject: Senju, Kyran [Konoha Genin] Fri 02 Mar 2012, 11:01 pm



Senju, Kyran.

THE INFO.

Name:Senju, Kyran
Nickname: N/A
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Appearance:

Standing at 5'9 Kyran is at the same height that many other genin are at, only a few genin tower over him but that is a rarity to find. He naturally has the hair colour black which he puts some gel in but only shakes it around to make it look messy and naturally make it look like that. Kyran represents his village with the Konoha village symbol on his forehead protector, which the material on it is a blue colour which stands out from his black hair. Having the eye colour black, his eyes pop out compared to his blue headband and quite pale skin tone, people have said that his eyes sparkle in the sun which also attracts women.

Kyran wears a blue top which the sleeves hand a little bit over his elbows, the collar comes up to his chin which covers most of his neck. Imprinted on the back is the Senju Clan symbol. He then wears black joggers which are quite baggy as they allow him to move more freely and not feel tied down. Around his right thigh he has bandages wrapped to keep his kunai pouch on, he then has the shuriken pouch on his belt at the back right of him. Like every other ninja he wears the basic ninja sandals which are the colour black also.

Due to the baggy clothes Kyran looks skinny and feeble which is the expression he wants to give off hoping other ninja's will under-estimate him and make his fights easier. But if you take off the clothes you will find that he is quite muscular and is more then capable of protecting himself from any shot a ninja has to give him.

Forehead Protector:
Kyran wears his protector on his forehead.

Personality:

Kyran is quite a forgiving person, he does not hold grudges of any kind as people have different moods every day and many people make the wrong decisions which they come to regret, this is why he doesnt hold grudges against people. Like every other person in the world Kyran likes to have a laugh with his class mates as he is young and believes that he shouldnt think that the whole world is on his back. This doesnt mean that he doesnt take a mission seriously because he does when he puts his mind to it.

Kyran also never under-estimates any opponent he faces as they may be more powerful then they seem, this means that he gets ready before every fight he has, hoping that this gives him the edge he needs to win the fight. Being the way he is many people respect him because he always talks to people who speak to him first and always uses his manners. Also because his ancestors created Konoha he also gets some respect for that too.

When out and about Kyran likes to collect different types of flowers and sticks them to a piece of paper in his scrapbook at home. He does this because he believes that flowers are beautiful and every single one is unique like humans. Kyran respects people in what they do and what path they take, but that does not mean he won't fight for what path he takes and what that path will require him to do. He doesn't really know what he want's at the moment, he is just going with the flow and trying to make a living.

He also likes swords, he doesn't use them but he just likes the way they are made, the different hilts, blade patterns. Kyran is thinking of collecting them to put on his wall, he is not too sure yet as he does not have the money to keep buying them.
Clan: Senju
Nindō: 'Meh, live life'

THE NINJA.

Origin: Konohagakure
Affiliation: Konoha
Rank: Genin [C-Rank]
Specialties: Main: Ninjust | Sub: Fuuinjutsu
Elemental Affinities: Main: Doton [Earth] | Sub: Suiton [Water] | Clan: Mokuton [Wood]
Combat Style: Kyran tries to stay far range as much as possible as thats where his strengths lie, but if needed he can get into close combat but isn't really good at it. Also due to him being able to do one handed seals he can mutli-task meaning that he normally sets traps for his opponents then when the time is right he will lure them in and strike. Also to do this more effectively, he will try to stay out the line of sight of his enemy by moving around and not stopping in one place.

Kyran uses his mokuton to help hide himself, this doesn't always work as there are different land types out there. He will only use it to hide himself if he is surrounded by tree's and can blend in with them. Also he likes to throw shuriken and kunai at his enemy to keep them on their feet so it is easier for Kyran to attack and them not to know what's coming next.
Special Characteristics:
One-Handed Seals
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Navigator
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Lie Detection
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THE BACKGROUND.

History:
- Was brought into the world by his mother and father. They were very proud to have their first child and named him Kyram after his granddad who passed away while fighting for Konoha.
- Learnt his first senju jutsu, while under intense training with his dad. This made his father very proud of him and that was the day that he got a shirt with the senju clan symbol sewed onto it.
- Enrolled into the academy. This also made his parents proud, as he was following what his granddad did. Kyran never got too see his granddad so this was the closest he would get to knowing him.
- Learnt all the basic academy jutsu, very fast and became very well known in the academy as a smart person. Also his class mates began to look up at him.
- Passed the Genin test with his flying colours, this made most people proud of him. Even the teachers congratulated his as he was doing very good through the time he was at the academy.
- Got his headband, which he then wrapped around his forehead as it was the most comfortable place which it could be in.
- His first mission as a genin was too help an old citizen of Konoha with their washing, which was a bore but he still got paid for it,
- Kyran then treated his parents to something nice with the yen he got from the mission. It was nothing big but it helped him understand what it was like to be on his own.
Roleplay Sample:
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THE ARSENAL.

Academy Jutsu
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Non Elemental Ninjutsu
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Senju Jutsu
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Doton Jutsu
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Suiton Jutsu
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Fuuinjutsu
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Equipment
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Doggy Summon wrote:
Name: Desutoroiya [Desu]
Rank: C
Appearance:
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Desu is a considered a pup in her own world as much as how big she is in the shinobi world. She is has mostly black hair on her body, the colour covers the top half of her body and a lighter brown colour covers some of her belly and legs. The light brown also goes under her muzzle in the shape of half a moon, kind of. The top of her ears are a dark brown and also the fur between her eyes are dark brown.

Her teeth are quite vicious when she wants to use them and also her bark is very terrifying to other animals, obviously not to her own kind that are older then herself and also older animals. Desu is considered royalty to her kind, she is princess of the German Shepherd's. Desu is 5ft tall, she is not exactly small but she is not the biggest either. Desu wears the Konohagakure headband around the top of her left leg, this is too show her loyalty to the Konoha village. She also has a backpack on her back that she has steak in so she can eat and also other equipment if needed.
Personality:

Desu has quite the temper when it comes to combat, she favours one side and doesn't want to hear the other side's story. This can lead her to make the wrong decision and feel quite guilty, but she knows that she will always be loyal to that one person and that makes her feel better. During combat she thinks about her moves, tactics and what she is going to do next, she will always try to help her team mate and protect them as much as she possibly can, even if that means giving up her own life.

Due to her species she has a very keen sense of smell and has trained it very well to latch on to specific things, this helps her and her team mater to find what they are looking for if it is a specific person. As everyone has a different type of smell, if she meets a person and then she has to find say person, she knows what their scent is so he can find them easier then it would be normally.

Desu enjoys eating, quite a lot actually. Her favourite food is steak which she often carries in a rucksack that is on her back.
Contract Type: Formal Contract
Species: German Shepherd
Specialty: Taijutsu
Elemental Affinity: Suiton [Water]
Summons Jutsu:

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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Kyran [Konoha Genin] Sat 03 Mar 2012, 4:42 am

Nice job on this app. Extend on your combat style a little bit and you should be good.
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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Kyran [Konoha Genin] Sat 03 Mar 2012, 8:59 am

Done.
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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Kyran [Konoha Genin] Sat 03 Mar 2012, 10:39 am

Alright, you have 16 jutsu instead of 15; one needs to removed.

Regarding your history, I'm kind of floored by the fact that he went on a mission without his sensei or team, which was essentially outside of the village. What also gets me is that a GENIN, a tiny, inexperienced ninja on his first mission, was capable of killing another shinobi.

Can we please alter this to make it realistic?
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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Kyran [Konoha Genin] Sat 03 Mar 2012, 10:44 am

Done.
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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Kyran [Konoha Genin] Sat 03 Mar 2012, 3:26 pm

Thanks!

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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Kyran [Konoha Genin] Sat 03 Mar 2012, 3:31 pm


Jolly good show!
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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Kyran [Konoha Genin] Sun 26 Aug 2012, 10:14 pm

Unarchived.

Right off the bat, I would like you to expand on your Personality and Combat Style a little.

Also, could you please double check all of your Jutsu? We have recently edited the encyclopedia, so your techniques might be outdated.

And lastly, would it be possible for you to change your History into paragraphs? I'm not too keen on the way you did it. 3 or 4 decent paragraphs would be great.

EDIT BY ADAM: As much as we encourage Paragraph Histories we allow Bullet-Point Histories because we don't think applications should be hindered by big paragraphs if the member doesn't wish. You don't need to expand on your history if you don't wish, Drew.
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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Kyran [Konoha Genin] Tue 28 Aug 2012, 3:02 pm

Done!
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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Kyran [Konoha Genin] Tue 28 Aug 2012, 3:08 pm


Hello, Drew! Certain sections have been updated that are related to your character application. We now include a Forehead Protector section below Appearance and above Personality, it should be coded properly using the [b] tags. Secondly, we have also updated and changed the kits meaning yours is currently outdated. Be sure to update on these two things and your application should be ready to go!
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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Kyran [Konoha Genin] Tue 28 Aug 2012, 3:16 pm

Done! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Kyran [Konoha Genin] Wed 29 Aug 2012, 3:11 pm


Thanks for making the edits, I'll be giving the full approval since there wasn't much to change.
Be sure to make an account topic to ensure you gain your colour and rank.

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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Kyran [Konoha Genin] Sat 03 Nov 2012, 1:18 pm

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Due to user inactivity.

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