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PostSubject: Amber Kimojo (Complete) Wed 10 Mar 2010, 3:49 pm

Basic Information:
    Name: Amber Kimojo
    Secondary Title: N/A
    Age: 13
    Gender: Female

    Physical Appearance:
    Amber is a small cute little girl. She weighs 97 pounds and is 5'3". Her skin is a light tan, with deep hues of dark. In the summer her skin seems to be a golden crisp color, useally from the dark pigments in her skin. Her hair is dark brown with little hints of blonde here and there. Not like a untidy blonde but it blends in with her brown. It is always brushed and hangs down to her mid back. She takes pride in her hair. Ambers eyes are bright blue, like crystal water. Most say they can she there own face in her eyes.

    She loves the color white and blue, which is why most of her wardrobe is colored as such. She loves to wear robes adn kimonos, to cover up the netting she wears under her robe. This is for light weight running and mobility. Her head band rest above her eyes on her forhead, but i shidden by her hair that extends over her face. She loves to cover her face with her hair for she thinks she is ugly, which is oppsite of what everyone else claims. Her shoes are most of the time padded shinobi shoes, or comfortable running shoes. As long as it is comfortable.


    Personality:
    The best way to describe amber is a sweet fun loving girl who has no fears or worries. She is the type to always smile even when to worst of things has just happened, sadness is not something she finds a custom to. In fact when it gets down to it she actually hates to be around people with sour and hateful attitudes. Amber is always out playing and having a good time, trying to find ways to get stronger but have a little fun also. She enjoys humor and often is seen around the village pulling pranks and messing with other people, but all in a good manner.

    In actually combat sh ekeeps the same personality, with a slight adjustment due to she knows oh to well that life is on the line in combat. Amber will back her friends up and stay by there side, even if it means death for her. Betrayle is one thing she can not stand, not matter who it is from. She will never back down from a fight unless she knows there is no other choice, and will always find the best situation to make sure everyone comes out safe. Death is not an option in many cases fo rher, and could be a majior downfall for her. She will hinder a enemey and often let them go except for cases in which her own life is hanging by the line.

    Overall amber is a kind gentle person with a wild imagination and act for fun. Her favorite past time is swimming, finding it relaxing to lay in a nice hotspring and just glide under its surface. She enjoyes company and tried to keep people around her at all times, and if they are in a bad mood she would be happy to cheer them up. Most see her as the life of the party, the girl you will never forget.


Clan Information:

    Clan Name: N/A
    Clan Location: N/A
    Clan Traits: N/A
    Kekkei Genkai: N/A
    Secret Clan Jutsu: N/A
    History: N/A


Rank Information:

    Rank:Genin
    Village Affiliation:Konoha


Special Information:

    Character Speciality:
    Main:Ninjutsu
    Sub:Medical
    Elemental Affinity:
    Main: Wind
    Sub: Fire
    Special Characteristics:Amber has a unique act for telling if people are lyeing or not, she can sense when something is told to her and if the intentions of what was said are bad or good. This helps when dealing with hostiles for she can tell if they are trying to tell her something that is not true. Also Amber is adept in the medical feild, so she can tell when someone is poisoned and most of the time what kind it is. She has a slightly larger immunity to basic poisons, like she never gets poison ivy and can breath is posoinus gas and smoke.


Skill Information:


    Jutsu Template:

    Basic ninjutsu
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    Cannon Fire
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    Cannon wind
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    Custom Medical
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    Custom Non-elemental
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    custom wind
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    Custom fire
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    Weapon Template:

    Name: Duel Kantamaru Fans
    Quantity: two
    Rank: D
    Appearance:
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    The frame is made out of light weight steel to make it stronger. The cover is made from animal hide and does not tear easily.
    Special Abilities/Characteristics: Two mid sized fans that can close up and be conceal under her robes. Can be used to disarm or block a weapon, but is ultimatly used in conjunction with her wind style ninjutsu, used to blow gust fo wind.
    Origin: Both fans belonged to her mother, were used also in battle. They were given to her by her grand mother, which in turn got them from one of the leaders of tea country. her grandmother was sent on a mission to the tea country and completed it well. As a reward the fans were given to her as a gift. As they got older the fans were reworked on and past down to amber.

    Item Template:

    Name: Med kit
    Rank: D
    Type: Supplment
    Natural Abilities: A small bag of knives scaples and scissors used to work on a sick or infected person. Can not used to attack fo rthey are small and easy to break. Can however be used in battle if time and situation permit.

    Name: Antidote for numbing venom
    Rank: C
    Type: Medicine
    Natural Abilities: Can cure and heal effects from the numbing venom before the intended time for it to have worn off.

    Poison Name: Numbing Venom
    Rank: C
    Poison Description:Is a light greenish pale color that is slightly gloopy. Its a liquid in the sense that it is free forming and moves as gravity permits, but its not a clean as water, having a slimy texture to it. It is in a clear container with a seal closed lid, no holes in the top. Amber keeps it in her weapon pouch with her kuni and shurkin.
    Liquid State:
    Poison Effect(s):The Numbing venom is used how its name describes. It is used to numb small parts of th ebody, killing any feeling and/ or control to that part. This can both be used in working on someone to cut them or remove smoething, or used in battle to disarm someone from useing a weapon or completed a attack. The area is only a hale a foot that can be affected. So if the hand is cut and the venom is exposed to the cut, the hand will go numb.
    [ Post 0 / Turn of Infection/Injection]
    [ Post 1 /Feeling is lost to that are, but can still be moved and used ]
    [ Post 2 / Feeling is completly gone and the area cant not be moved or used]
    [ Post 3 / The poison is entered the blood stream, the part is completly useless to the target]
    [ Post 4 / poison has wore off]


Background Information

    History:
    Birth-Amber was born to Masikoto, her father, and kimoko her mother. They lived in a one story house just outside the main part of the village. In the small little community of living space where many middle class ninja lived and worked. Her dad was a former anbu black ops member, but nobody other than amber and her mother knew that. To many people he was a simple black smith that lived in the village and provided many of the shinobi with there weapons. Her mother was a medic ninja who worked with the medic squad in the ninja barracks. She helped to find new cures and help create better poisons for use in the field. Both tried to make the best for their daughter so her mom ended up retiring from being a medic ninja. Her young life was how most middle class childerns were, full of love and company. But her father could see a fire in her eye, one that wanted to be let out and he knew that his baby girl would follow in the foot steps of both him and his wife.

    Childhood-
    As Amber grew up her family began to teach her how to read write and basicaly grow as a kid. she played with many of the local children and watched as the new groups of genin came to train in the local park. She would often climb up a tree with her friends to watch them train and play. She loved it so much that she began to mimic there moves and would go home kicking and jumping. This always made her family laugh and they never got bored around amber. Soon time came where her father started to train her in the art of ninjutsu. He wanted her to join the academy and become a great ninja like him and his wife. So she went on the join the academy and took lessons from both her parents and the teachers.

    Academy-
    Life as a academy student was fun for her. She made many new friends and also impressed alot of people. She grew strong both as a person and a ninja. Altough she was not as skilled in ninjutsu as the other students she showed great potential in the medical field. Being trained by her mother she learned how to heal wounds and find the basic structure of the body. The exams were soon to come and her parents wanted to make sure she passed the first time. All of her grades were top notch and her skills were way better than what they needed to be to pass. So as she took the test and showed what she had learned she eventually became a genin, earning the right to wear the head band and be called a shinobi of konoha.

    Genin-
    (in process)

    Role-Play Sample:
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PostSubject: Re: Amber Kimojo (Complete) Thu 11 Mar 2010, 3:53 pm

completed Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Amber Kimojo (Complete) Fri 12 Mar 2010, 3:33 am

Personally I would put all fire jutsu under one spoiler, wind under another, etc. This way you just have like four spoilers instead of so many.

The medical jutsu Im going to need Hage or Z to look over as Im not that proficient with medical jutsu myself.
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PostSubject: Re: Amber Kimojo (Complete) Fri 12 Mar 2010, 4:20 am

High Rise : I really don't see why this would have to be medical when you even stated that it uses fire chakra. Besides that there are some grammatical errors that need fixing.

Thin Cutter: 3 inches would be what I consider a small dagger rather then a small spike. How long do these claws last? Does it use it on both hands? Also, bone is not an easy to cut object, just thought that needed to be stated.

Rebreath: This would be a wind element cannon jutsu, since there really isn't anything to differentiate that jutsu from this one.

Immune Shut Down : This sounds like a jutsu I have, but thats irrelevant. How does the effectiveness of the technique vary with rank? How long does this immune shut down last?

Deep Darkness Needs a lot more detail for such a technique, since putting someone to sleep is effectively immobilizing them and winning a battle. This would also be higher then C-rank and pain wakes people up, if this jutsu prevents pain along with putting them asleep then it would be even more advanced.

Minor Heal How deep can this heal?
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PostSubject: Re: Amber Kimojo (Complete) Fri 12 Mar 2010, 11:59 pm

Platform lift was applied for as a jutsu by someone else, and I do believe it has been decided that the technique is B-Rank due to the chakra control requirement. And that was only for making one platform, which dissipated immediately after, not for walking on.

Instant wave and Great push are just slightly modified versions of the two canon wind technqiues you already have, in my opinion.

Uplift needs to state that it only effects users in the air, based on its description. If it affects users on the ground by picking them up and putting them in the air, its B-Rank atleast.

Hot spot in my opinion should be B-Rank due to you not actually creating fire, but heating up the surrounding area with the fire chakra. This actually could fall under heat jutsu category, which is claimed by Todd's Magma clan.
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PostSubject: Re: Amber Kimojo (Complete) Mon 15 Mar 2010, 2:16 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Amber Kimojo (Complete) Wed 17 Mar 2010, 2:44 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Amber Kimojo (Complete) Wed 17 Mar 2010, 11:29 pm

Ambience wrote:

Name: Med kit
Rank: C
Type: Supplment
Natural Abilities: A small bag of knives scaples and scissors used to work on a sick or infected person. Can not used to attack fo rthey are small and easy to break. Can however be used in battle if time and situation permit.

If this is only a simple kit of knives, scalpels, and scissors than I believe this can be ranked as 'D'.
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PostSubject: Re: Amber Kimojo (Complete) Thu 18 Mar 2010, 2:15 pm

i agree, fixed
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PostSubject: Re: Amber Kimojo (Complete) Fri 19 Mar 2010, 3:13 pm

so is this approved or what is left to be fixed?
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PostSubject: Re: Amber Kimojo (Complete) Fri 19 Mar 2010, 9:45 pm

Minor Detect and Night Eye are too close to Kekkei Genkai traits and thus should be removed.
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PostSubject: Re: Amber Kimojo (Complete) Thu 06 May 2010, 1:12 am

Archived due to Inactivity
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