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PostSubject: Farron 'Uchiha', Claire [Konoha Genin] Wed 27 Jun 2012, 10:54 pm

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Uchiha Claire

THE INFO.

Name: Claire Farron (born Claire Uchiha)
Nickname: N/A
Age:14
Gender:F
Appearance:

-Height: 5’5” (164cm)
-Weight: 113lbs (51.3kg)
-Hair: Pink (Dyed, natural color is Black)
-Eyes: Blue (Wears colored contacts, natural color is Dark Grey)
-Handedness: Left

Although Claire is an Uchiha, few could tell by looking her, even fewer could tell she’s a shinboi seeing as her forehead protector is tied around her left thigh under her skirt. She chooses to dye her hair a light pink to differentiate herself from her family. She refuses to wear the Uchiha crest on her clothing because she doesn’t like the way it looks. Like many Uchiha she has naturally dark eyes however, she wears contacts over them to make them appear blue.

While she doesn’t specialize in physical combat, that doesn’t mean she doesn’t keep herself in shape, born an Uchiha she is naturally athletic. This doesn’t mean she is physically superior to anyone it just means she needs less maintenance to maintain her good form and conditioning.

Claire instead of wearing traditional ninja garb wears clothing that she feels looks nice, is comfortable, and allows her to move freely; of course this works for shinobi work it is just not traditional. She wears a button up sleeveless shirt that has a v-neck cut along with a see through pink vest as outer wear, this does little other than look nice. On the bottom she wears a short plaid red skirt with black lace at the bottom. Her long black socks fit tightly to her form and reach her mid-thigh. The strangest article of clothing she wears is most likely her high top shoes, she keeps them tied tightly so they do not come untied while she is running around however she likes them because they provide good ankle support to help keep her ankles from bending at bad angles. Midway down her right thigh she has a small carrier for weapons it has a pouch that can hold four shuriken and compartment that can hold 5 senbon and two explosive notes. On her right side just below her hip she has a kunai holster that can hold a single kunai. Claire wears a sweet smelling perfume at almost all times. Around her neck she wears a pendant. (image below)
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Forehead Protector:Claire wears her Forehead protector around her left thigh under her skirt.

Personality:

Social:
“Just because I’m nice to you doesn’t mean I like you.”
Claire is generally very friendly to everyone she talks to, whether she likes them or not. She can be quite mysterious in this regard as it would be difficult to tell if behind her back she has flowers, or if she has a knife ready to stab you in the back. She tends to say what she feels about someone to anyone other than that person. However, should someone insult her she will become irritated, should someone insult her appearance in a way she doesn’t like she will come down with the fury of a badger.

Training/Combat:
“Hey, wanna do something later?”
While Claire seems to be just some girl on the outside, on the inside she strives to become the best she can be at everything she does, partly because of her Uchiha blood, partly because she thinks it’s fun to get better and better all the time. When she is training she prefers a partner so that she can have someone to talk to and to measure herself against. She is fairly talkative during training and as such it can appear that she isn’t really trying. However, she takes it seriously she just doesn’t show it like most people do.

Likes:
“Oh, you don’t have to say that.”
One of Claire’s favorite things is compliments; while she tries to mask her love for them she does a bad job in that she will commonly fish for them. Compliments are the fast track to her good side.

“It’s soooo cute!”
Claire has a deep love for furry creatures, especially cats. She tries to pet every furry creature that’s tame enough to let her. However she doesn’t try to get one of her own as she doesn’t know if she could take care of it.

“How can you not like something that smells so good?”
Claire loves sweet smelling flowers, above all she adores roses. Claire maintains some of her own at her home. Giving her a rose is another fast way to earn her approval.

“I wish I could live here…”
Claire’s favorite scenery is coastlines if she could have her way she would live on a beach somewhere in a small low maintenance home with a fluffy and friendly kitty. She has many pictures of coastlines in her home.


Dislikes/Fears:
“HELP!!! MAKE IT GO AWAY!”
Above all else, Claire fears bees there is no real explanation for this, she is just dead scared of them. She would hide behind her worst enemy to save herself from bees. She also strongly dislikes other things with stingers, but she only fears bees.

“Hey, you come with me now!”
Second on Claire’s list of fears is being alone, not alone in the sense of no one being around, alone in the sense of having no friends or people she can trust. As a result she tries to make as many friends as possible.

“That wasn’t very nice!”
Insults are one of Claire’s strong dislikes, they will irritate her easily. Insults about her appearance, those will anger her nearly instantly. It will occasionally bring about a violent response, but nothing beyond a slap or the occasional punch. However she will hold a grudge over the event and will be passive aggressive towards the individual in question.

“How about we talk about something else…”
Claire doesn’t like the topic of her family, when she introduces herself she tends to neglect her family name, she doesn’t want people to know nor does she think it’s important. Only her close friends are privy to that information.

Clan:Uchiha
Nindō: “Do whatever it takes to survive.”

THE NINJA.

Origin: The Land of Fire
Affiliation: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin
Specialties:
-Genjutsu
-Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinities:
-Katon (Fire)
-Fuuton (Wind)
Combat Style:
“You call it cowardice, I call it survival.”

During battle, instead of focusing on killing or maiming her opponent she thinks about what she can do to stay alive. In some ways this is an advantage in combat as it keeps her from making silly mistakes that will put herself in danger it is a disadvantage (to some) in that she doesn’t really have a killer instinct as a result she isn’t as effective without a partner for a fight. Her first goal is survival, her second is winning.

Some of her tactics are considered underhand by a lot of people, she will throw sand in the eyes, or even attack a civilian or set a building on fire in order to create a diversion. She will beg and plead for mercy, she will bribe – sometimes with more … physical, things than money – some of her darker tendencies include the willingness to sacrifice a comrade or friend for her sake, or even selling out secrets for her own wellbeing. If it keeps her alive she is willing to do it, she would rather run and be called a coward than die and be called a hero.

Special Characteristics:
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THE BACKGROUND.

History:

Birth and Early Childhood:
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Academy Days:
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Roleplay Sample.


THE ARSENAL.

Academy Ninjutsu
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Katon Ninjutsu
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Fuuton Ninjutsu
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Genjutsu
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Sharingan
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Weapons
Name: Genin Kit
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Quantity: 1
Contents: 10 Kunai, 8 Shuriken, 5 Senbon, 2 Exploding Notes, 1 Exploding Pouch, Five Metres of wire/string, File, 10 Makibishi, 1 Windmill Shuriken, 2 blank small scrolls.
(As laid out in the appearance she only carries certain things from this Kit)

FACE CLAIM.

Character Claim: Serah Farron
Source: FF XIII
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PostSubject: Re: Farron 'Uchiha', Claire [Konoha Genin] Sat 30 Jun 2012, 3:00 am

Have you received approval for UCHIHA?
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PostSubject: Re: Farron 'Uchiha', Claire [Konoha Genin] Sat 30 Jun 2012, 3:37 am

Yes I can give you a screen if you want.
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PostSubject: Re: Farron 'Uchiha', Claire [Konoha Genin] Sat 30 Jun 2012, 3:58 am

That's no problem - it's been clarified! Posts will be deleted upon approval.
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PostSubject: Re: Farron 'Uchiha', Claire [Konoha Genin] Mon 02 Jul 2012, 7:18 am

Okay, sounds good.
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PostSubject: Re: Farron 'Uchiha', Claire [Konoha Genin] Mon 02 Jul 2012, 3:27 pm

Alright, for the most part this app is fine, just a few things to change/edit.

Personality


Nothing big here I just noticed that in your personality you use a paragraph that is repeated in your combat style.

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“You call it cowardice, I call it survival.”
During battle, instead of focusing on killing or maiming her opponent Claire thinks about what she can do to stay alive. In some ways this is an advantage in combat as it keeps her from making silly mistakes that will put herself in danger it is a disadvantage (to some) in that she doesn’t really have a killer instinct as a result she isn’t as effective without a partner for a fight. Her first goal is survival, her second is winning.

You don't need the same paragraph twice in your application so just remove it from personality as it fits more in line with your combat style section.

Clan

Again nothing big but you need to provide the link to the clan page so that it can be quickly referenced by anyone looking at your profile.

As an Uchiha your clan page is here.

Jutsu

Jutsu are fine, just wanted to let you know that you have one slot left. I also wanted to let you know that as an Uchiha you have the option to start off with your one tomoe sharingan at creation. So since you have a slot left I might suggest you fill that slot with your sharingan, unless you want to get the sharingan at a later time.

Just make the changes I listed here and let me know what you want to do about the jutsu, if you are changing them or if you want to leave everything as is. Other than that I find no real issue with your application.

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PostSubject: Re: Farron 'Uchiha', Claire [Konoha Genin] Mon 02 Jul 2012, 4:25 pm

Please, scale down your character's image. It's huge. It takes half of the whole page's space.

Or at least put it into a spoiler, I don't know.

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PostSubject: Re: Farron 'Uchiha', Claire [Konoha Genin] Mon 02 Jul 2012, 9:01 pm

Done andddd Done.
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PostSubject: Re: Farron 'Uchiha', Claire [Konoha Genin] Mon 02 Jul 2012, 9:07 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Farron 'Uchiha', Claire [Konoha Genin] Mon 02 Jul 2012, 9:08 pm

Your academy jutsu is merged with your Academy days arc and roleplay sample. Would you mind fixing that?
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PostSubject: Re: Farron 'Uchiha', Claire [Konoha Genin] Mon 02 Jul 2012, 9:10 pm

Done.
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PostSubject: Re: Farron 'Uchiha', Claire [Konoha Genin] Mon 02 Jul 2012, 9:38 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Farron 'Uchiha', Claire [Konoha Genin] Wed 10 Oct 2012, 9:06 pm

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