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PostSubject: Itou, Mardoc [Konoha Genin] Sun 16 Dec 2012, 7:35 pm



Itou, Mardoc.

THE INFO.

Name: Mardoc Itou
Nickname: Doc
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Appearance: Mardoc stands at 5’8 and weighs only roughly 120 pounds. His black straight hair falls on his face and reaches just below his chin. Mardoc’s eyes are a deep shade of sapphire blue, he usually appears wide eyes he hates when people squint their eyes so he tries to make sure he doesn’t. He has an average sized nose, Mardoc never thinks about his facial features other than his eyes which he remarks on from time to time. He shares and thin chin and round face with his deceased father. Mardoc has rather pale skin for an average shinobi, due to the fact that he spends his time outside when the sun is setting to night. Mardoc wears dark top attire. He wears a tight black sleeve less shirt. Above that he wears a black leather vest that he shines every night and morning, he takes pride in his vest. His leather gloves are mostly black, both bearing the symbol of Konoha, the gloves themselves are thin enough not to cause bad sweating and thick to grab hotter objects without burning himself. His off-white pants seem a tight fit buy are actually very breathable. He hold his pants yo with a brown leather belt, on the belt Mardoc had three pouches that he uses for his ninja tools, Mardoc keeps his Ninjato on the right side of his belt. He places the sheathe between his belt and himself. He wears the usual type of open toed sandals that have become popular among ninja.
Forehead Protector: Mardoc only wears his forhead protecter during a fight, he normally keeps the head stored in his left read pouch.
Personality:Mardoc’s always tries to make sure that any given task given to him is done completely and quickly, his second objectives are personal safety. He wants to put the mission before his own life but holds life in general before all else. Mardoc is very self-critical when it comes to correcting himself in any way. Mardoc is very caring about people and life. He is also gentle and may appear timid when addressing someone older or at a higher point in authority over himself. When addressing a peer he is more confident and sterner. Mardoc believes nothing should be set and stone, that there is always a more effective way to do any task, and wants things to remain orderly and is highly against anarchy views. If Mardoc believes he is right he won’t budge an inch on his position, but if he is unsure he is not unreasonable. Mardoc possess a form of OCD, he hates seeing messes and can’t help himself then to tidy up any given situation. When talking to someone Mardoc gets a “feeling” about that person, and whatever feeling in his gut he gets he usually goes with. Mardoc is very loyal to his friends and allies, especially his home village of Konohagakure. He hates the feeling of betrayal, he feels that betrayal is one of the worse things a person can do. Mardoc puts a lot of his faith in his instincts and intuitive. MArdoc is Patient when it comes to stressful situations, devoted to protect his friends and protective of his village. He is also light hearted and doesn’t think he could make a kill but loves the thrill of the fight. In jams Mardoc looks for creative ways to solve the problems. Mardoc prefers detailed tasks over broad tasks and also prefers having someone to have his back.

Clan: NA
Nindō: Always try to save everyone, life needs saving. Period.

THE NINJA.

Origin: Hi no Kuni
Affiliation: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin
Specialties: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu
Elemental Affinities: Fire, Wind
Combat Style:
Mardoc uses both taijutsu and ninjutsu, his preference is to use Taijutsu. Mardoc uses kicks above punches in fights, doing so has resulted him to have more balance on his feet. He studied a type of fighting style known as Chāquán. Chāquán is a martial art stlye that features graceful movements and some acrobatic aerial maneuvers. Upon studying this form of fighting mardoc has come to rely on his kicks far more than his punches. A major advantage to this form of fighting style is all the leg control a person can get from it. Mardoc is slightly faster than some of his peers and more agile. Chāquán is more focused on fast accurate movements over slow powerful ones. One disadvantage to this type of fighting style is the lack of work on the arms. Mardoc prefers to keep his ninjutsu at a range, primarily focusing in the fire element and using the wind element as a secondary to amplify his fire.

Special Characteristics:
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THE ARSENAL.

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Academy Jutsu

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Ninjutsu
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FACE CLAIM.

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Source: Deviant Art
Image URL: http://fazzeagle.deviantart.com/gallery/?q=fighter&offset=72#/d1oa3fq


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PostSubject: Re: Itou, Mardoc [Konoha Genin] Sun 16 Dec 2012, 10:09 pm

You are missing your face claim section.
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PostSubject: Re: Itou, Mardoc [Konoha Genin] Mon 17 Dec 2012, 3:20 am

Edits made
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PostSubject: Re: Itou, Mardoc [Konoha Genin] Mon 17 Dec 2012, 3:37 am

You need more.


  • Appearance
  • Personality
  • Combat Style
  • History.


You need to edit/remove

  • Typos in your combat style.


You need to elaborate on why your nickname is Doc.
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PostSubject: Re: Itou, Mardoc [Konoha Genin] Tue 18 Dec 2012, 4:06 am

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PostSubject: Re: Itou, Mardoc [Konoha Genin] Tue 18 Dec 2012, 4:21 am

You aren't a medical ninja so your doc nickname makes no sense as it currently stands. You can easily just get it as a childhood nickname for always playing doctor or something. You also need to remove the part about being a medical ninja in your history.
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PostSubject: Re: Itou, Mardoc [Konoha Genin] Tue 18 Dec 2012, 4:24 am

My character's uncle was a Medical Ninja and gave the nickname to Mardoc because he wants to protect and help people, like a passion a doctor would have, plus it's short for Mardoc.

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His uncle was a medical jutsu specialist and worked at the hospital, he started to call Mardoc “Doc” due to his desire to make sure everything was completed fully and right, him being protective over his village, and his will to help all of his fellow villagers.
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PostSubject: Re: Itou, Mardoc [Konoha Genin] Tue 18 Dec 2012, 4:30 am

http://gyazo.com/c99bab7a9f5f25d6cbf4559f4797d9ad

Says right there you went into the field of medical ninja in the winter. You aren't medical ninja. Remove it.
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PostSubject: Re: Itou, Mardoc [Konoha Genin] Tue 18 Dec 2012, 4:34 am

I said my Uncle was called into action and left in the winter.
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As the winter months approached Mardoc’s uncle received a letter stating that medical ninja were needed in the field and he had been called to duty.
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PostSubject: Re: Itou, Mardoc [Konoha Genin] Tue 18 Dec 2012, 4:38 am

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PostSubject: Re: Itou, Mardoc [Konoha Genin] Tue 18 Dec 2012, 1:46 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Itou, Mardoc [Konoha Genin] Sun 14 Apr 2013, 4:13 pm


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