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PostSubject: Kaitou, Kiero [Kiri Genin] Fri 09 Apr 2010, 2:33 pm

Basic Information:

    Name:
    Kiero Kaitou
    Secondary Title: Boy of a Hundred Blades - Tempest
    Age: 14
    Gender: Male
    Physical Appearance:
    Kiero appears to be a cool looking guy. Having a snow colored hair, and a lightly build body, which happens to show a weak looking guy. His eyes is colored green. Kiero's height is just average while his weight is lower than average, yet it doesnt mean that he doesnt have any force at all. His hair looking just like Gaara's brick hair, except his is white plus two long strands that run along his face. While his legs looked long and showed a little hind that can give fast movements as an outcome. And one significant looks is the smile that is always plastered on his face, giving off an impression that Kiero is friendly. Kiero's skin also has a light color comparable to Sasuke's Skin color. While he usually wears his headband along his neck. Even with this appearance, his look was not the most intimidating at all except his eyes that carries intensity.

    About his clothing, Kiero loves to wear cloaks. While his favorite one carries has a red color with black flames the end, and as a design in the back is the Kaitou clan's symbol printed at a very large size, while having the symbol of Konohagakure on its patch. Yet he still has many cloaks than this, its just his favorite. While inside the cloak he wears a loose shirt. A necklace that seems to look like the first Hokage's necklace with its green color, swings around the neck of Kiero. It may seem normal but its a special item to him and its the reason why he always wears it along his neck. He dislikes wearing gloves even if its the metal or the cloth one. But he does wear metal wristbands along his wrist (obvious), it looks normal but again acts as defensive weapons. Small pouches run along his belt, each and one of them tied with him. Plus some different sized scrolls, which are very essential due to Kiero being a weaponary user, ( as seen on the picture ). Another significant part that is attached to him is a talisman attached to his belt along with the pouches and scrolls. The talisman itself is believed to hold special powers, that only Kiero knows. His pants looked normal that lengths as far as his feet, but a bandage is wrapped around the right leg. And his footwear consists only of a pair of sandals.
    Personality:

    As a Genin Kiero Kaitou was seen as a very enthusiatic child, often seen thinking and playing with his friends. Although he had many friends he acted mysteriously and it seemed like his emotions we're fake and untrue. Yet his a very compassionate friend only unseen by those he cared for. Kiero possessed complete emotion control, he once stated that " Emotions will just slow me down..." For him emotions are nothing but trouble, its better to let those emotions out than to keep them and perish. He isnt really surprised at all times unless his opponent shows unbelievable abilities and often comments on them. Kiero didnt showed any arrogance at all throught his life, he likes to be humble and seem to be weaker than he looks although he carries a heritage that can be feared. Even though seen as a careless guy in his team, he often showed commitment by trying to protect his comrades no matter what the cost is. Besides being a powerful shinobi, Kiero showed impressive intelligence, although not as intelligent as Shikamaru, but is almost as wise by the likes of Uchiha Itachi. Often seen looking at his opponent deeply, the reason is Kiero slowly and surely reads the weakness and strengths of his opponents to measure and weigh them correctly. He is rarely surprised or even shocked by things around him, only on special occassions. He sometimes like to battle, but not because his a war-hunger shinobi but only to test his abilities. Yet he likes to end the battle as soon as possible to avoid more violence. A very respectful guy, Kiero respects everyone around him including his own enemies, knowing that everything in this world is balance. He carefully analyzes the situation, not allowing any loops holes, and to protect himself from being caught off-guard. Yet his courteousness is rarely returned to him, due to his weak appearance.

    One of his distinct personality is anger issues, normally his a very compassionate person, even with that facade he really just wants to hide his anger issues for fear on hurting others with his temper. Although very wise, he is usually lured into traps because of getting angered, yet able to awaken himself just in time to avoid such traps. Ironic as it is, he was emotionally stable but his self control had a flaw. Yet he relies on people around him to stop Kiero incase of a sign of the anger issues. He deeply believed in the next generations, thus getting fond of training students that seems to endlessly come. A brave one, Kiero is considered a fearless hunter, he had never back downed from a challenge. This anger issues created two personality Kiero that revolves around the people he moves. The first Kiero being the wise and calm one, and has the ability to take on the situation lightly without panicking while the other one being the ill-tempered, unwise Kiero, usually easily provoked by words. Although this two distinct personality often collide, the wise and calm one seems to take over most of the times, the ill-tempered one shows only in tough situations which rarely happens at all. Yet Kiero strives to eliminate the negative side is personality everyday, as seen when he breaths heavily to stop the other personality on overcoming his good side. He can sometimes be stubborn, at least he isnt overconfident. If only he can keep the calm Kiero around, he could use the calmness as an advantage, by being able to notice everything around him. And keep himself keen and ahead of his opponent all the time.

    Kiero appears to be very compulsive, yet this is only an outcome of being a quick-thinker, being able to think out of situations easily. His care for those he love seems to be endless, as he isnt bother to risk his own life just to protect them, and he does it without any hesitation at all. Kiero was never a fan of " fatalism " the belief that " fate is something decided at birth and that no matter what one does, people cannot escape their destiny " He believed that everybody has a same path, but we are given the chance to take the same direction or abandon it and be free. He himself never thought that he can never be stronger than his clanmates by the likes of his sister. Kiero was a hardworking shinobi, due to extensive training he was able to be worth on carrying a heritage. One of Kiero's habit is to spin kunai's on his point finger, he feels relaxed whenever does that. Also he loves to lie down on soft grasslands and watch the clouds move along the sky. He may look lazy while doing this habit, but he only does this whenever there's peace or at least when trouble isnt around. Kiero also values peace a lot, he often questions why should someone start a war against another country. With his wise words he is able to compromise with anybody easily without any further problems. He seems to be another Uchiha Itachi just like a reincarnation. Just like him, Kiero's loyalty still lies within Kirigakure. For the fast few years Kiero developed bonds with his remaining clansmate. For example was his sister Ryu Kaitou, even with the age gap, Kiero always looks up to his sister. Yet his years of war around him, made Kiero very far from Uchiha Itachi. As Itachi was a pacifist, and hates war, Kiero believes that war is the only way to attain peace.
    Catch Phrase:
    " Checkmate..."
    " Emotions?, ...."
    " If I die protecting my teamates... nothing unusual with that. "
    " Uhm... what does that mean? ..."




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PostSubject: Re: Kaitou, Kiero [Kiri Genin] Fri 09 Apr 2010, 2:43 pm

Clan Information:

    Clan Name:
    Kaitou
    Clan Location:
    Sound Village (Originated) Present: Scattered
    Clan Traits:Special Attunement to Oto(Sound) element. Acute hearing.
    Kekkei Genkai:

    Founding of Bloodline
    The bloodline was founded by the founders whose name is unknown trained for days at a time. She placed herself in dangerous situations to test her ability controlling sound. She would infiltrate villages at night and sneak into high security areas. On one of these little missions she encountered a man under interrogation in Konoha. She watched from a distance as the man blew them away by unleashing sound chakra. She was amazed by his strength and confronted the man. The man startled shot another blast at the founder. She managed to avoid this and a fight continued. Eventually they both tied from lack of chakra and after much silence spoke to each other…some years later after this they were married and the bloodline was established from the union of two very powerful sound users.

    Abilities for users of the Bloodline

    Ninjutsu Users: The users of Ninjutsu are considered one of the most powerful in the clan; they manipulate the bloodline to the greatest extent. They can eliminate all sounds or make sounds, imitate people’s voices and shoot large amounts of sound chakra from their mouths or hands. These users receive the most training and attention due to the fact that they could be one of the most powerful tools to the country and clan. There have been exceptions to this if the parent had betrayed the village the child will receive even more attention then others and be taught forbidden Jutsu of the clan to avenge the honor of his immediate family

    Taijutsu users: The Taijutsu users are the other powerful bloodline application. The Taijutsu users of the clan are taught to focus of power of their bloodline into their feet and fists to cause more damage upon impact, they are also taught to some extent how to mask the sounds of their attacks and sounds they make. There are some very unique and inventive Jutsu made for Taijutsu users of this clan with the bloodline ability.

    Genjutsu users: Genjutsu users are so rare and few to the clan that there is almost no training regiment for them what so ever. The Genjutsu users are often left to their own training and told to make the clan proud and invent Jutsu and training regiments for themselves, the council hopes after many years of this they will have the Genjutsu area of their clan developed from learning from the regiments and Jutsu from them.

    Other: Bloodline users that go into other professions are not well known and is highly doubted they would be of any use to them.
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    Secret Clan Jutsu:
    Name: Immobilizing Blast
    Rank: C
    Range: N/A
    Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
    Elemental Affinity: Sound
    Clan: Keepers
    Description: The user will focus Chakra into their lungs and build it up over a long period of time constantly (1 post). During the time of the charging the user will not be able to speak or the Chakra will be unleashed. Only so much chakra can be focused into the lungs into it involuntarily is let out of the lungs and will come out of the mouth of the user no matter what is going on. This does not cause anything more then temporary Deafness, Extreme head aches. But it will cause extreme pain to those with sensitive hearing. This is commonly used with Genin of the Keepers.

    Name: Minor Sound Manipulation
    Rank: C
    Range: Medium (Within ten meters)
    Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
    Elemental Affinity: Sound
    Clan: Keepers

    Description: The user will perform the needed hand seals, then using his/her bloodline will control the air particles around an object and eliminate the sound by controlling the movement of said particles. This Jutsu is such a low level that it cannot eliminate anymore than the sounds of creaking floors or heavy breathing any louder than those and the Jutsu will be ineffective not doing anything at all to dull the sound.

    Name: Sounds of the Wild
    Rank: C
    Range: N/A
    Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
    Elemental Affinity: Sound
    Clan: Keepers

    Description: The user will perform the needed hand seal, then using his/her bloodline will control the air particles around his/her mouth in a specific way. They will then make soft noises or then manipulate them as they are made and will change the sound into maybe a cat meowing or a dog barking. This is very useful when a guard is suspicious of something and wonders what is around. Genin will not and I repeat will not be able to manipulate the air particles around their mouths well enough to impersonate some ones voice.

    Taijutsu Rank C

    Name: Sound Barrage
    Rank: C
    Range: Punching and Kicking Distance.
    Jutsu type: Taijutsu/Bloodline
    Elemental Affinity: Sound
    Clan: Keepers

    Description: The Taijutsu user will send sound chakra into their hands and quickly jab at the opponent sending shock waves around them by vibrating the sound particles with their bloodline so even if they miss they will cause the opponent to be disoriented making it easier for him/her to be hit. The disorientation lasts for a mere 1 post. The shockwave is strong enough to knockback them for a few meters.

    Name: Sound Disruption
    Rank: C
    Range: Punching and kicking distance
    Jutsu type: Bloodline/Taijutsu/Style
    Elemental affinity: Sound
    Clan: Keepers

    Description: This is a style in which the keepers utilize their bloodline by focusing sound Chakra into their hands and feet. After this is done they will attack and create minor disturbances which can cause the opponent to get massive head aches blurred vision and loss of some hearing for a short time. This can be a very effective Style but the downside is it can drain Chakra at a fast rate. The technique itself can be kept as long as the chakra of the user can supply the required chakra. And its effects only lasts for 1 post.

    Taijutsu rank B

    Name: Open Palm blast
    Rank B
    Range: Close (1 to 3 meters)
    Jutsu Type: Taijutsu/bloodline
    Elemental Affinity: Sound
    Clan: Keepers

    Description: The user will focus Sound Chakra into their palm and shoot their palm forward while it faces at the target, The sound will push the target back and possibly cause some minor internal damage (bleeding no organ damage at this level) . The the ninja lands a hit the target will become disoriented for a short time opening him/her up for attack.

    Name: Deafness (Taijutsu)
    Rank: B
    Range: Close ( Within 2 inches of the Targets ears)
    Jutsu type: Taijutsu
    Elemental Affinity: Sound
    Clan: Keepers

    Description: The User will focus sound Chakra into their fists and throw punches at the sides of the targets head, when the fist comes close to the ear the user will release the Chakra in a blast large enough and close enough to the targets ear to rupture the targets ear drum causing intense pain and possible deafness.

    NINJUTSU RANK B

    Name: Deafness
    Rank: B
    Range: Close (within five meters)
    Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
    Elemental Affinity: Sound
    Clan: Keepers

    Description: The user will perform the needed hand seals, then using his/her bloodline will manipulate the air particales in the targets ear. They will manipulate it in a way to block out all sound except very loud sounds at close range. This is achievable because the entrance to the ear is so small that it does not take much to control the particales in such a small area. The downside to this is you must keep the hand seal formed for it to stay in effect, Some have been able to accomplish this with one hand but it has only been achieved by Jounin.

    Name:Voice changing technique
    Rank: B
    Range: N/A
    Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
    Elemental affinity: Sound
    Clan: Keepers

    Description: The user will perform the hand seal, then using his/her bloodline will control the air particles around his/her mouth in a specific way to mimic the voice of a person. The user must have heard this voice before to be able to mimic the sound vibrations. This goes great with Face stealing Jutsu and other under cover Jutsu.


    NINJUSTU RANK A & S

    Name: Sound elimination
    Rank: A & S
    Range: (1 to 20 meters)
    Jutsu: Ninjutsu
    Elemental affinity: Sound
    Clan: Keepers

    Description: This is the much more advanced control of the Sound control of the keepers. It requires years of training and Practice but once mastered the user will be able to eliminate all but the loudest of sounds but if the user uses almost all of his Chakra he can eliminate all sound for a short time within a twenty meter radius

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PostSubject: Re: Kaitou, Kiero [Kiri Genin] Fri 09 Apr 2010, 2:50 pm

Rank Information:

    Rank: Genin
    Village Affiliation:
    Kirigakure no Sato


Special Information:

    Character Speciality:
    Ninjutsu/Weaponary
    Main: Ninjutsu
    Sub: Weaponary [Main: Swords Sub: Ranged]
    Elemental Affinity: Oto(Sound) Fuuton(Wind) Katon(Fire)
    Main: Katon
    Sub: Fuuton
    Clan: Oto
    Special Characteristics:

    Strength and Speed:

    Even with his average body mass, his strength is still somewhat above average, strength that only a man with huge muscles can do. Probably is the result of his extensive training. A proportionate of his strength is his speed and agility. With a not so large weight, he is able move very fast and at the same time change direction using his agility. His speed includes the ability to move from one place to another as if his displacing himself. And due to his abnormal strength, Kiero is able to parry with a guy bigger than him without having such troubles. All in all Kiero can be described as above average compared to other genin's in terms of Strength and Speed.

    Chakra Molding/Manipulation:

    Kiero has somewhat better Chakra Manipulation than an average Genin. Which allows him to manipulate chakra through his weapon just for an example (cant use until chuunin).

    Great Strategist and Tactician:

    Kiero has proven to be very adept at noticing and understanding details in an opponent's skills or attack patterns. And also the ability to formulate a plan in such a short time. Kiero has shown to be insightful and crafty, quickly capable of understanding any situation that presents itself and adjust to it effectively. Kiero has shown an innate skill to determine what actions should be taken in battle.

    Keen Intellect:

    Kiero has shown to able in detecting even the smallest details. He also a powerful analyst with great attention to detail, his perception is strong enough to deduce if someone is lying and if his opponent is planning something or not.



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PostSubject: Re: Kaitou, Kiero [Kiri Genin] Fri 09 Apr 2010, 3:05 pm

Skill Information:



    NON-ELEMENTAL:



    Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
    Type: N/A
    Rank: E
    Element: N/A
    Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water

    Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
    Type: N/A
    Rank: E
    Element: N/A
    Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed

    Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: E
    Element: N/A
    Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse

    Name: Explosion Tag: Activate
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: E
    Element: N/A
    Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.

    Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Element:
    Rank: E
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents

    Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: E
    Element: N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

    Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: E
    Element: N/A
    Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.

    Name: Bikou Ninjutsu Shadowing Stealth Technique
    Rank:
    Element: -
    Bikou Ninjutsu is the technique ninjas use to follow their targets covertly. The manner in which the ninja shadows their target can differ, from the basic hiding under a nearby object, to using a jutsu to turn oneself invisible. The skill and length in which one can stay hidden varies by rank and ability.

    Name: Kai (Dispel)
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: D-B
    Element: -
    A jutsu that destroys/cancels out an illusionary jutsu attempted on the user. Only shinobi with strong chakra control can perform this. The user releases a large amount of chakra then quickly halts it. The genjutsu is usually dispelled after that, depending on how strong the skill is.

    Name: Sound Intuition
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: N/A
    Description: This technique is used to detect the movements of another person if they are blocked from visible view. Focusing chakra to the users ears, he are able to slightly inhance their hearing and become more sensitive to vibrations. This will give them a faint second sight ability that allows them to see their target if invsibible threw physical means.

    Name: Shunshin no Jutsu, 瞬身の術, literally "Body Flicker Technique"
    Type: D-rank, Supplementary
    Rank: D
    Element: N/A
    Description:This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily boost the user's reflexes. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance between the user and their intended destination. Shisui Uchiha, one of the most talented Uchiha, was feared as "Shisui of the Body Flicker" (瞬身のシスイ, Shunshin no Shisui?) , likely referring to this technique.

    Katon:

    Katon - Katon Ya [ Fire Arrows ]
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: Katon
    Description: A very simple Katon jutsu of Kiero. The jutsu doesnt need any handseals, Kiero needs only to focus fire chakra on his lungs and lock on to the target. Once performed, Kiero will open his mouth to shoot arrows made of pure fire that cannot pierce the human body but do some damage due to its nature. He can shoot upto 3 arrows, 1 each second. After that he must rest the jutsu or it may damage his lungs. The direction of the arrows are straight and not guided.

    Katon - Hinotama no Jutsu [ Fireball ]
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: Katon
    Description: A weaker version of the Goukakyuu no Jutsu, it allows the user to shoot a small fireball out of the mouth. While the Goukakyuu no Jutsu takes a large amount of charka to use, this jutsu takes only a small amount, allowing even students to use it several times in a single battle.

    Katon - Katon Tantou [ Fire Daggers ]
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: Katon
    Description: A simple katon jutsu that allows Kiero to create daggers made of pure fire. The daggers can move at extreme speed due to its small size and provide 2nd degree burns when it touches the human skin. The daggers are simply like normal daggers in size.

    Katon - Goukakyuu no Jutsu [ Great Fireball Technique ]
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: Katon
    Description: A primary offensive ninjutsu for any fire user, it requires few hand seals and not much chakra. The user will take a breath and exhale a ball or stream of fire. In the former case, it can be launched in any direction, but its speed is not very impressive. In the latter case, it must be aimed at an opponent on the ground within twenty feet of the user, but is executed much faster.

    Katon - Housenka [Mythical Fire Phoenix]
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: Katon
    Description: The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai.

    Fuuton




    Fuuton - Reppushou [ Gale Wind Palm ]
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: Fuuton
    Description: After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja will send a strong gust of wind towards his target. When acting in conjunction with another thrown weapon, the wind can increase its power and deadliness.

    Fuuton - Shinkou Daitoppa [ Rising Great Breakthrough ]
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: Fuuton
    Description: A jutsu derived from Daitoppa. After performing the require hand seals, the user inhales deeply, mixing the incoming air with Fuuton chakra. The user then exhales a large, slow moving blast of wind. The moment it is expelled from their mouth, the wind falls quickly to the ground due to it being laden with chakra. Never rising above one foot from the ground, it travels everything in front of the opponent. Forming a single seal, the air violent rushes upward. The force of the wind can lift many obstacles including people into the air, though, heavy objects may require more chakra. Many shinobi are not accustomed to fights in mid-air, therefore, leaving them susceptible to other potentially damaging attacks. If combined with some type of explosive, such as a skillfully placed explosive tag within the blast or a pre-formed Katon technique, the wind will ignite in a column of raging fire. This jutsu can be chakra draining for a genin.

    Fuuton - Teinami [ Air Wave ]
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: Fuuton
    Description: The user focuses the wind release within one of their hands, channeling it till the wind vibrates a bit around the forearm in circular motions. With a diagonal slash in front of the user, a invisible wave of Wind cuts through the air in the diagonal line, the wind forming almost as a blade. The wave stretches in 15 meters horizontally and vertically. On contact with foe, it lashes against them harshly, at least blowing them back a bit and leaving a few small cuts. Cannot be Blocked, However Dodged.

    Fuuton - Tei Bakushin [ Air Dash ]
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: Fuuton
    Description: This is a simple manuever that helps aerial taijutsu users. It allows them to boost themselves whatever direction they are facing. This is done by using wind chakra to thrust them along in the air. While this doens't take a large amount of chakra, the forcing of chakra and wind out of your back can be exhausting. So it's highly suggested you uses this only once every few minutes, or you'll physically exhaust your self.

    Fuuton - Fuuton Ya [ Wind Arrow Technique ]
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: Fuuton
    Description: The user molds chakra and breathes in. He or she then blows out and an arrow made of wind, which is then shot from the user’s mouth. Since it is made out of wind the arrow is hard to see. One arrow shot at a time.

    Fuuton - Hari no Fuuton [ Needles of the Wind ]
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: Fuuton
    Description: The user gathers air with his hands and mixes it with chakra, by doing this he transforms the air into sharp and deadly needles. The needles are almost invisible so it is hard for the enemies to see them. Because the needles are almost invisible they are extremely hard to block, the best action would be to evade them. He can only create an average numbers of needles.

    OTO



    Name: Immobilizing Blast
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: Sound
    Clan: Keepers
    Description: The user will focus Chakra into their lungs and build it up over a long period of time, During the time of the charging the user will not be able to speak or the Chakra will be unleashed. Only so much chakra can be focused into the lungs into it involuntarily is let out of the lungs and will come out of the mouth of the user no matter what is going on. This does not cause anything more then temporary Deafness, Extreme head aches. But it will cause extreme pain to those with sensitive hearing. This is commonly used with Genin of the Keepers.

    Name: Minor Sound Manipulation
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: C
    Range: Medium (Within ten meters)
    Element: Sound
    Clan: Keepers
    Description: The user will perform the needed hand seals, then using his/her bloodline will control the air particles around an object and eliminate the sound by controlling the movement of said particles. This Jutsu is such a low level that it cannot eliminate anymore than the sounds of creaking floors or heavy breathing any louder than those and the Jutsu will be ineffective not doing anything at all to dull the sound.

    Name: Sounds of the Wild
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: Sound
    Clan: Keepers

    Description: The user will perform the needed hand seal, then using his/her bloodline will control the air particles around his/her mouth in a specific way. They will then make soft noises or then manipulate them as they are made and will change the sound into maybe a cat meowing or a dog barking. This is very useful when a guard is suspicious of something and wonders what is around. Genin will not and I repeat will not be able to manipulate the air particles around their mouths well enough to impersonate some ones voice.

    Oto - [ Sound Damage ]
    Type:Ninjutsu [passive after activation]
    Rank:C
    Element:Oto
    Description: Kiero can use this jutsu to any weapon or even his bare fists and feet. This extends the range of his attacks. Even if he misses with the direct hit, the force of sound will still bounce on the enemy and knock him 5 meters away and making him dizzy for a short amount of time. This can be activated just by focusing sound chakra on the weapon or on his body.

    Oto - Himei Zetsubou no Jutsu [ Scream of Despair ]
    Type:Ninjutsu
    Rank:C
    Element:Oto
    Description: The user concentrating chakra into their vocal cords enhancing throat chakra lets out a scream that travels extremely fast in which can be used to deflect projectiles and send opponents flying

    Oto - [Vibration Analysis]
    Type:Ninjutsu
    Rank:C
    Element:Oto
    Description: Focusing their chakra with the dog handseal, Kiero will heighten the sensitivity of the eardrum and inner ear. Following this, with eyes closed to prevent visual disruption, the user can place their hand on the surface beneath their feet, increasing the brain's sensitivity to vibrations. Focusing both sensory sections of the brain the shinobi can pick out vibrations in the area around them, similarly to a snake, analyze them with utmost clarity and discern them from information, enemy or ally.

    Oto - [ Shrill Wind ]
    Type:Ninjutsu
    Rank:C
    Element:Oto
    Description: By focusing air within the lungs, Kiero will form the needed seals, then bring one hand to their mouth. Tightening it to a small narrow tube with their fingers, the user will exhale the air. The air will reach the chakra in the hand, converting to Sound and release a piercing whistle that temporarily deadens the ear of the target or acts as a signal. This can be done very quickly and not spending a lot of time, in short split second.

    Oto - [ Safe and Sound ]
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: C
    Element:Oto
    Description: After preforming the needed handseals the user surrounds their body with a special chakra that allows them to within hold all of their sound waves. This technique makes the user completely silent, unable to be heard by anything. Though the technique makes a target invisible to the ears it still makes them visible to the eyes.




Name: Wooden Katana
Quantity: 1
Rank: D
Appearance:


A usual Katana made of wood, thus making it a practical weapon. It has the appearance of a katana (obvious) . Other than that it doesnt really have anything special in appearance.
Special Abilities/Characteristics: N/A
Origin: Its a wooden katana made himself using a sturdy wood named " Nara " which although doesnt have any special characteristics possess enough sturdiness to land decent blows to the body. And since practicing is part of Kiero's daily life he decided to create a training katana, which is sometimes used also in battles.

Name: Bow
Quantity: 1
Rank: D
Appearance:

A normal looking bow, with a long body and made with the same wood Kiero used with his wooden katana.

Special Abilities/Characteristics: N/A
Origin: In an attempt to train with ranged weapons Kiero made a wooden bow from the same wood he used in creating his wooden katana. It is rather unusual for a samurai on training to carry a bow on his back.


Name: Quiver
Quantity: 1 (Can carry upto 50 arrows)
Rank: D
Appearance:

A normal looking quiver, made out of horse skins. It has a strap that allows Kiero to firmly carry it in battle.

Special Abilities/Characteristics: N/A
Origin: In an attempt to train with ranged weapons Kiero made a wooden bow from the same wood he used in creating his wooden katana. He made this quiver in order to carry his arrows upon his back.


Name: Katana (Sealed in a scroll)
Quantity: 1
Rank: D
Appearance:

A katana with a usual sharp looking end. It has nothing really special with its appearance except its handle which is engraved with gold.

Special Abilities/Characteristics: N/A
Origin: A katana given by one of Kiero's master in order to extend his knowledge about Kenjutsu. It has been known to be special to Kiero as he rarely uses the katana and most of the time is sealed in a scroll.


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PostSubject: Re: Kaitou, Kiero [Kiri Genin] Fri 09 Apr 2010, 3:14 pm

Background Information

    History:



    Child Arc:

    Kiero was born to a couple in the Kirigakure, the couple were a clan member of who resides in Otogakure. They migrated to Kirigakure for fear of the new Otogakure, that their son would be used as a weapon like everybody else in Otogakure. So they decided to raise their son in Kirigakure. Seen potential by the teachers in the academy, Kiero trained at a very young age with the guidance of the Mizukage himself. He was trained by the ways of the Samurai by his father. His experiences was able to capture many fighting style, just like a recorded video. Much of a apprentice of the Mizukage, he was trained to fight chuunin's everyday that were his sparring. Although he didn't beat all of them at least Kiero managed to fight bravely. Kiero was prioritized by the teachers as the Mizukage requested. He grew up a good man with honor and integrity. The Mizukage taught him all the things that he should do to become a great ninja like him.


    Genin Arc:

    As a genin, Kiero and his team accomplished many things that other teams didn't managed to get. Kiero's kekkai genkai is a great help in their various missions. In times of danger it saves the whole team. They're team was famous on kirigakuregakure for their teamwork and various team techniques. Kiero was a lot stronger than before and he already focused on a dream, being the next Mizukage. His experiences honed his skills and ability, their missions are quite hard for a genin team, as their missions was often B-Rank missions. With the Mizukage's guidance, Kiero trained in the ways of a ninja in the side of good. The Mizukage greatly helped in building the good character of Kiero, but not just him everyone that Kiero knew contributed on what he is today and in the future. Many envy Kiero and many hate him, not only for his powers but his looks, although Kiero doesnt mind this. Every moment that passes , Kiero grew stronger and stronger than before although he wasn't power hunger. Suddenly the Mizukage stepped down from his position and a new Mizukage arose to power. While Kiero was designated into another genin team.

    Role-Play Sample:

    This is the quality of my post if I have time to post [ not in a hurry] but if I'm in a hurry lets just say you could cut this post in 2 which makes it around 250.

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PostSubject: Re: Kaitou, Kiero [Kiri Genin] Fri 09 Apr 2010, 3:17 pm

DONE! NEEDS APPROVAL!
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PostSubject: Re: Kaitou, Kiero [Kiri Genin] Fri 09 Apr 2010, 10:35 pm

Sound Element is an extension of wind, so you would need Wind, otherwise you basically get 3 elements that have nothing to do with Sound.

Has your clan been approved?

Raiton Assaiki [ Thunder Crusher ]: For a C rank move, a ft diameter is too big, thats more of A-S size diameter.

Lightning Kunai: Is it the size of a normal kunai?

Fire Daggers: How big are they?

Fire Arrows: How many arrows can be fired?
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PostSubject: Re: Kaitou, Kiero [Kiri Genin] Sat 10 Apr 2010, 11:37 am

UPDATED:

Added some Oto Jutsus.

Removed Raiton, replaced with Fuuton.

Clan posted in the clan section: LINK

Fire Daggers and Fire Arrows fixed and explained.

Added Main and Sub for Weaponary.
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PostSubject: Re: Kaitou, Kiero [Kiri Genin] Sun 11 Apr 2010, 1:00 pm

BUMP! and Done needs Checking.
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PostSubject: Re: Kaitou, Kiero [Kiri Genin] Sun 11 Apr 2010, 11:12 pm

Your clan still needs to be approved.

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Strength, Speed, Agility:

Even with his average body mass, his strength is still somewhat above average, strength that only a man with huge muscles can do. Probably is the result of his extensive training. A proportionate of his strength is his speed and agility. With a not so large weight, he is able move very fast and at the same time change direction using his agility. His speed includes the ability to move from one place to another as if his displacing himself. And due to his abnormal strength, Kiero is able to parry with a guy bigger than him without having such troubles. Because of his agility, he is able to evade attacks more proficiently and easier than others.
-Not all three. How much more does he have?

Fire Arrow: Does it only shoot forward or is it guided?

Fire Daggers: "The daggers can move at extreme speed" why?
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PostSubject: Re: Kaitou, Kiero [Kiri Genin] Mon 12 Apr 2010, 12:31 pm

Removed Agility, and explained how much.

Editted and explained Fire Daggers and Arrows.
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PostSubject: Re: Kaitou, Kiero [Kiri Genin] Fri 16 Apr 2010, 4:01 pm

Uhm Bump?
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PostSubject: Re: Kaitou, Kiero [Kiri Genin] Sat 17 Apr 2010, 1:16 am

UPDATE= Clan Already Approved
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PostSubject: Re: Kaitou, Kiero [Kiri Genin] Sat 17 Apr 2010, 3:39 am

REM wrote:

Chakra Molding/Manipulation:

Kiero has somewhat better Chakra Manipulation than an average Genin. Which allows him to manipulate chakra through his weapon just for an example.

To manipulate chakra through a weapon, the weapon would have to be 'B' ranked. Seeing as your a genin, you wouldn't even be able to wield a 'B' ranked weapon. I suggest either taking this out and adding it should you be promoted in the future, or simply stating now that you will be able to once you're at least Chuunin.

REM wrote:

Katon - Katon Ya [ Fire Arrows ]
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Katon
Description: A very simple Katon jutsu of Kiero. The jutsu doesnt need any handseals, Kiero needs only to focus fire chakra on his lungs and lock on to the target. Once performed, Kiero will open his mouth to shoot arrows made of pure fire that can pierce the human body. He can shoot upto 3 arrows, 1 each second. After that he must rest the jutsu or it may damage his lungs. The direction of the arrows are straight and not guided.

To pierce the human body would be higher than 'C' rank. Tone it down.
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PostSubject: Re: Kaitou, Kiero [Kiri Genin] Sat 17 Apr 2010, 5:07 pm

Done and Done Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Kaitou, Kiero [Kiri Genin] Sun 18 Apr 2010, 4:13 pm

Approved.
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PostSubject: Re: Kaitou, Kiero [Kiri Genin] Fri 02 Jul 2010, 7:19 am

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