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PostSubject: Haretsu-Fuchaku, Mochi [Kumo Genin] Tue 26 Mar 2013, 10:32 pm



Fuchaku, Mochi.

THE INFO.

Name: Fuchaku Mochi [Clinging to Sticky Rice Cake]

Nickname: Mochi

Age: 13

Gender: Female

Appearance:
  • - Mochi has short blonde hair, by a girl's standards, it barely reaches down just beneath her shoulders. Her hair is often clean in appearance compared to the rest of her, with minimal charring. She has two bangs at the front which are tied with pink ribbons. A slightly longer plat hangs down Mochi's back, originating from beneath her hair at the back of her skull.
    - Mochi's headband slightly parts her hair in the middle, preventing it from getting into her eyes during combat or otherwise. If she loses it in combat there is still little issue with her hair, due to the shortness of it at the front.
    - Unlike normal Haretsu members Mochi has purple irises, but this is only due to a pair of contact lenses she's accustomed to wearing. They are coloured purple and sit quite nicely on her eyes, although these also serve quite a useful purpose as she is long sighted. Lucky for her as whenever her contacts go missing she's still quite useful in combat, and she can't read anyway.
    - When she creates the clay used for her explosives Mochi mixes in a colour, not always the same shade or texture but it will never be white. Her favourite is pink, which is not a big surprise, but this has little to no effect on her explosive's colour.
    - Due to her simple role in life there aren't too many tasks she can take, and having no income from her parents means that Mochi doesn't get to buy nice things. Her clothing is never in the best condition, it's always marked with something whether it's explosive charring, or stitches where other damages have occurred.

    - Mochi wears clothing that conveys the fact she works with something volatile, normally a leather worker's apron and some brightly coloured pair of pants, combined with a differently coloured but also bright shirt beneath the apron. She has a thigh high pink sock which she'll wear on either side, the foot this isn't on will have her white sock which sits just beneath the knee.
    - A white arm sleeve with four leather straps will accompany either her left or right arm, it covers the area just beneath her shoulder down to her wrist.
    - Mochi's fingers and palms are stained with grease from the various weaponry and explosives she works on, although there is no residue left as it is simply a permanent stain she acquired over the years. This is most likely unhealthy but Mochi doesn't care about such trivial things, she's never had the desire to look pretty or be attractive.
    - Mochi wears her basic ninja kit on her waist when she has it, typically facing the front as she finds it easier to reach in and grab items there. Her clay kit sits comfortably on the back of her waist and is stretched out, so she can easily get to it with her left and right hands.
    - Due to her stature she weighs very little and isn't as physically strong as others, she's also only four feet and nine inches tall, making her one of the shortest Genin alive.
    - Whenever she is injured by something Mochi keeps emergency band-aids on hand, she'll quickly apply them if she has the opportunity as she doesn't like seeing her own blood, nor does she really like the sight of any blood which is why she loves explosions so much.
    - Typically of a girl her age Mochi doesn't care about mooning people, she's only done it a couple of times but she's not embarrassed to do it. Those who receive one of these attacks will notice a pink love heart on her buttock's left cheek, it goes as follows: "If you're reading this, FUCK OFF, ya pedophile."


Forehead Protector: Mochi's headband is slanted on her skull with the symbol facing upwards and to her left, it can be recognized looking at her from the front or from her left side as well as from above. Those on her right side will see the headband strap but not the symbol accompanying it, as such when hiding her origin from certain people she may look to her left slightly, in order to conceal it.

Personality:
  • - Mochi is easily bored and constantly looks for new ways to entertain herself, being that Kumogakure is a fairly civil village and surrounded by clouds, this can be difficult to accomplish. The types of things she may attempt entertaining herself with can vary, but this usually won't involve attempting to kill anybody. That is to say, she would enjoy killing somebody if allowed.
    - As her appearance would convey, Mochi is not the most educated girl and has spent most of her time focusing on explosives. She has a very basic knowledge of her surroundings and people, those who she doesn't know or has no reason to know are typically unwanted, unless she believes they could be entertaining. Girls with large boobs tend to be Mochi's favourite type of people, as she enjoys gripping women tightly from behind and likes the feel of such things.
    - When she wishes to express anger or annoyance Mochi's voice usually peaks infrequently, it carries a gravelly tone which is usually quite convincing.
    - When impressed or flirting Mochi will use a very civil accent, it's normally unexpected and sounds like a completely different person. This is one of the few occasions where Mochi seems intelligent, especially in conversation.
    - Being an explosives expert and not having much of an education means that Mochi doesn't have very high standards. Her clothes are usually ragged and low quality, she doesn't always brush her teeth or take personal hygiene into consideration, and she's almost always found sleeping in the streets beside other homeless people.

    - As a playful and slightly insane person, Mochi enjoys pretending she knows techniques that don't actually exist or she has no idea to pull off. As such she may perform hand signs for techniques just to mess with people, even if these hand signs accidentally line up for a real technique, she cannot perform it unless she knows it. It's not always easy to tell whether she knows what she's doing or not, so it can put opponents on guard.
    - Mochi takes great pleasure in explosions, especially the kind that result from her clan techniques. She also loves creating objects that amplify explosive tags however, and seeks to create an explosive that relies on neither clay or tags.
    - Similar to some Haretsu Mochi is very happy about her mouth hands, but unlike them she's given names to each. This is a trend she follows with a number of things, including coming up with names for her clay bombs as soon as they're created, before saying a very emotional goodbye to them. Also, she refers to her hands as 'Lady Friends' which is all one needs to know about them really.
    - Mochi doesn't always speak plain language, giving plainly named items her own flare by calling the something completely different. She's been known to call knives 'huggies' on several occasions.
    - In her combat state Mochi still doesn't physically seem serious about the situation, but her mind takes over and begins calculating everything very carefully before each action. She may make little of an action she takes, adding playful actions into her unnecessary movements to throw people off.
    - Mochi obeys her superior Ame, regardless of what she requests because Mochi likes her tits. However she also respects them and does not lay hands upon Ame.


Clan: Haretsu

Nindō: "Earth, walls, doors, people, loud children.. They're all just obstacles for my explosives to overcome."


THE NINJA.

Origin: Land of Lightning

Affiliation: Kumogakure

Rank: Genin

Specialties: Main: Ninjutsu - Sub: Weaponry [Mid-Long]

Elemental Affinities: Doton - Suiton

Combat Style: There is nothing much to Mochi's combat style, all she does is throw explosives from afar, and if she really must be closer she'll use C1 at closer ranges. If she's aware of combat approaching she will plant mines in the ground, assuming she has them or something similar such as her Mole Rat technique. Her greatest weakness is naturally close combat, where she can be fought with much less fear of explosives detonating, but this doesn't mean she won't run the risk. Mochi gives more thought to her strategy than most Haretsu do, planning ahead has saved her life in the past and it's an honoured tradition.

Special Characteristics:
Clan Mastery:
 

Perception:
 


THE BACKGROUND.

History:
- Born-4 Years Old: Mochi was born to parents that considered her an asset, they suffered from the same Nindo as she did however and set of a bomb near her location. This caused her some minor damage and would eventually lead to preventing her from maturing completely. She was born in the year of the Ram, which is something she became proud of eventually.
- Five-Six Years Old: After her parents died in a fight with other Shinobi, Mochi was introduced to her uncle which she still thinks was just some weird guy. He told her more about her parents and the bloodline she shared, allowing her to understand her hands. The man taught Mochi to cover her hands during her early life, but she would soon become too proud of them to take such things into consideration.
- Seven-Eight Years Old: Mochi met her first friend at the age of seven, they would grow up together from here on. It was obvious that her friend had a better education and was better funded, their clothing could tell the two apart. This lead to Mochi finding a home in Kumogakure, where she would stay for many years to come. They played together and practiced sparring, but neither was very good at it. Still Mochi was unable to keep up with this mystery friend, being beaten every time. Her friend would be accepted into the Academy at the age of eight, when meeting from thereon Mochi would take lessons from her.

- Nine-Ten Years Old: Mochi learned from her friend quickly, but she wouldn't get into the Academy until at least a year later. Despite her best efforts during those times she was incapable of gaining approval, until one teacher found her. Mochi was covered in charred marks and clearly upset in a corner, her friend went missing the day before and it was distressing for the young girl. Upon meeting Mochi the teacher accepted her as a student, although things didn't go well on her first day and she was expelled. The teacher saw potential in her however and granted her the certificate of Genin status, before going missing herself.
- Eleven-Twelve Years Old: As Mochi turned eleven she met with her friend again, the girl had been away on a very important mission. However, with her back the two could now set off in a team together, taking on missions and performing them with ease. The best days of Mochi's life were spent during this period, performing adequately across the board and satisfying her cravings for combat. She also learned to read mission ranks, but still needed verbal explanation as to how they were performed.
- Thirteen Years Old: As she turned a year older, Mochi set off for the Raikage's office and attempted to apply for an S-Rank mission. She thought it was a suitable idea for her birthday, but was beaten up shortly afterward. She still has the black eye received from their punch. Shortly afterward she met with a girl named Ame, explaining her history took only a few minutes and she was ready to begin anew.

As detailed from Mochi's perspective when meeting Ame for the first time, for a more interesting version of events.:
 

Roleplay Sample:
One of my posts from the last topic I had:
 


THE ARSENAL.

Academy Jutsu:
 

Haretsu Secret Clan Jutsu:
 

Personal Haretsu Secret Clan Jutsu:
 

Universal Suiton Ninjutsu:
 

Universal Doton Ninjutsu:
 

Universal Weaponry:
 

Explosive Weaponry:
 

Equipment:
 


FACE CLAIM.

Character Claim: Tiny Tina
Source: Borderlands 2
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PostSubject: Re: Haretsu-Fuchaku, Mochi [Kumo Genin] Thu 28 Mar 2013, 2:40 pm

Mang I blasted this like piddy-POW, but if 'nyone tries to 'tiggy-tag' dis I'ma be like 'KA-ZAAaanngggg'.
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PostSubject: Re: Haretsu-Fuchaku, Mochi [Kumo Genin] Thu 28 Mar 2013, 9:39 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Haretsu-Fuchaku, Mochi [Kumo Genin] Fri 29 Mar 2013, 12:09 am



  • I'm afraid I must ask you to rewrite your history a bit, as we do not allow first person narratives. And also there's insufficient information. I want more information about her birth and upbringing, and also I want to know if she can't read how on earth she managed to graduate?

  • Quote :
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    Measure the explosives of the staff according to the explosive tags guide. (I put it in the spoiler below) Also make sure the same is applied for the tag balls.

    Also you would have to activate the explosive tags instead of just hitting on the staff.

    Spoiler:
     

  • You can only start with one kit.

  • Also edit the title of your char app, removing the 'Done' from it.
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PostSubject: Re: Haretsu-Fuchaku, Mochi [Kumo Genin] Fri 29 Mar 2013, 5:12 am

I've made the edits, but before I edit the Narrative of my history:

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I'm afraid I must ask you to rewrite your history a bit, as we do not allow first person narratives. And also there's insufficient information. I want more information about her birth and upbringing, and also I want to know if she can't read how on earth she managed to graduate?

~ Why not? As far as I've heard it's far more interesting to read than normal, and nobody else said it was wrong, there's just no rule against it. o.O

~ She explained how; her friend would re-tell her learnings to her after each class and when Mochi entered the Academy she messed up, but still passed as her knowledge of the Academy teachings was sufficient.
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PostSubject: Re: Haretsu-Fuchaku, Mochi [Kumo Genin] Fri 29 Mar 2013, 6:01 am

- I realize it doesn't specify in the character template, but we do have a rather strict "third person only" view on this site. It does say in the rules

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THREADS:
All posts must be done in third person

And while I realize this might be viewed only as for normal posts and not creation, then it still expands over to here. It has already been denied on other applications, so fair is fair.

- mmmm I suppose it could slide, but I would expect the teachers at the academy to test that a bit more. However, if this is important to your character plot, then I can let it slide.
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PostSubject: Re: Haretsu-Fuchaku, Mochi [Kumo Genin] Fri 29 Mar 2013, 6:03 am

MsMoney wrote:
- I realize it doesn't specify in the character template, but we do have a rather strict "third person only" view on this site. It does say in the rules

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THREADS:
All posts must be done in third person

And while I realize this might be viewed only as for normal posts and not creation, then it still expands over to here. It has already been denied on other applications, so fair is fair.

- mmmm I suppose it could slide, but I would expect the teachers at the academy to test that a bit more. However, if this is important to your character plot, then I can let it slide.

It is quite important for her development, and especially the style of role playing which will revolve around her inability to read. I appreciate it. <3

Edit: I finished fixing the history, but I didn't remove the other version as I know a few people who've enjoyed reading it.
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PostSubject: Re: Haretsu-Fuchaku, Mochi [Kumo Genin] Fri 29 Mar 2013, 4:18 pm

(2/2) approved.

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PostSubject: Re: Haretsu-Fuchaku, Mochi [Kumo Genin] Sun 16 Jun 2013, 5:14 pm

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