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PostSubject: Hakai, Rukasu [Kiri Genin] Sat 20 Apr 2013, 12:24 am



Hakai, Rukasu.

THE INFO.

Name: Hakai, Rukasu
Nickname: The Red King
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Appearance:A trait about this person that stands out is his bright red hair, that spikes backward with a long string of hair on each side of his face. Also another trait of his that has people either looking away in fear or envying him is his yellow eyes. He usually has this expression on his face that he is just calm, cool, and quiet. Having a peach tome skin completes his whole look. Having narrow eyes, pointy nose and a big mouth. He has somewhat of a narrow chin. He also has a hexagonal quartz crystal on his left ear lobe, the crystal is silver.

He wears a white t-shirt that he usually puts a black hooded jacket over it. The black jacket is nothing special, however having it on has the word cool written all over it. He rarely zips up the jacket, and on the hood part there is black fur. He never puts the hood on, the fur looks as if it's gently put around his neck. Speaking of his neck he has two necklaces, a small one that goes around his neck but it doesn't go past his collar-bone. The second is a long necklace that goes around his neck, meets up with a silver symbol, like a medical sign or something, and then it parts into two strings. Around his left wrist he has this silver bracelet nothing impressive. Just a blank bracelet that he wears. The jacket is a leather jacket.

He has a scar above his right eye, and this scar happened only because when he was a kid playing with shurikens with his friends, well one kid thought it would be awesome if he aimed it at Rukasu. However since the kid was not skilled at throwing shurikens, he only left a slightly deep scratch on Rukasu's head.

He wears black jeans, a black belt, and he has this little chain that connects to the front of the pants to the back of it. The pants are slim straight. He also wears this black leather boots. Rukasu weighs about 150 pounds and his height is 5 feet and 6 inches tall.  

Forehead Protector: Its on his right jacket sleeve.
Personality: Rukasu is a very serious person when the time comes for a serious time, however most of the time he is a laid back kind of guy. He is the type to start trouble only because it is his blood, his nature to do so. He is one of those people who has the traits into becoming a great leader of many people who share the same ideals as him. Rukasu is not a bad person at all, however he is violent person when it comes down to it. He is a hot-tempered person that usually has a short fuse. He does know how to control most of his anger with smoking, being relaxed, and some of the time keeping to himself. People that observe him say that he is full of trouble and others say that he is mis-understood. Rukasu is just himself, a caring, hot-headed, shinobi that will hurt people if they threaten the people that he cares about the most.

Rukasu smokes cigarettes to keep his blood, anger, and excitement down. He smokes a lot of cigarettes a day, and to him it's just another hobby that he enjoys.  He enjoys laying back on a rock, with his eyes closed, as the sun beams its hot rays against him. Rukasu does talk, his voice is rather deeper than the others that are his same age. This make people think that he is older.

When Rukasu trains, he usually trains alone, due to this because he doesn't want anyone to get hurt while he trains. His training can sometimes get out of hand, and this is why being alone is okay when he trains. If someone were to train with him, that person already knows what Rukasu is capable of being careful more than encourage the rage inside Rukasu. However it is not that bad, but it can get out of hand. What I mean is that Rukasu doesn't mind fighting, he enjoys it, but when there is a fight that he enjoys too much then the shinobi will either black out, or just go all out.  

Rukasu is kind to everyone, however when he has a rival he would just do anything to provoke the rival so the rival will fight back.
 
Clan: N/A
Nindō: "No Blood" "No Bone" "No Ash!" - is a chant that he would do to get himself wild up.
"Protect the ones that you care about the most." - This is something that he will always live by, to protect the people he cares for the most.  

THE NINJA.

Origin: Kaze no Kuni
Affiliation:Kirigakure no Sato
Rank: Genin C-Rank
Specialties: Ninjutsu, Weaponry [Med/Long]
Elemental Affinities: Katon, Fuuton
Combat Style: Rukasu combat style is up front, straight forward, and to quick to react. He will use weapons if he has any, but for the most part you better learn how to evade or defend because Rukasu will charge at the opponent and strike as quickly as possible. He is the type to keep his opponent on their feet, and if Rukasu has the upper hand then it would be hard for the opponent to get back to the fight. Rukasu will not stop until the opponent gives up. That is what I meant by Mikoto can get out of hand if the fight excites him too much. Let me mention this now, he will not kill, only injure. Due to his nindo he knows that there are others that care for people as well so he know to never kill, unless the person is absolutely evil and cant be forgiven.

His weakness is that when he rushes into battle he doesn't think of a strategy often and he often wing anything that he may have. Usually he would protect others than himself, this is considered as a weakness only because of his personal safety. He will do anything to save the people he cares about. His weakness varies from time to time, but for the most part his anger is one of his critical weakness and strength. His anger will make him do things in battle that would seem very risky and life threatening. On the other side his anger will also help him focus on the opponent for an all out attack. There were times where his anger did hurt the people he cares about, so he tries to control it as often he can.
Special Characteristics:
Enhanced Speed
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Name: [Tier I] Enhanced Speed
Rank: C
Type: Physical
Prerequisites: -
Training: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
Restrictions: Amongst the Speed, Endurance, Strength, and Acrobatics SCs, members may only possess two of them, unless they possess both Weaponry and Taijutsu as their Primary and Secondary Specialties. If one possess Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Primary specialty, with one other specialty, and acquire Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Sub-Specialty, they may possess up to any three of them.
Description: After training relentlessly in cardiovascular and high speed movement, shinobi are able to greatly increase their overall stamina and movement speed. Those talented with this speed are capable of running with speed half a man greater than their peers and even last a bit longer during extraneous activities without becoming exhausted. This boost in speed is usually enough to quickly catch escaping targets or outrun most regular citizens.
One-Handed Seals
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Name: One-Handed Seals
Rank: C
Type: Physical
Prerequisites: -
Training: A 600 word training is required to gain this special characteristic.
Restrictions: This cannot be used as a way to perform two jutsu at the same time.
Description: the ninja discovers a unique talent which allows them to mix chakra by performing seals with only one hand. With an ability such as this the ninja can fight while also performing jutsu, delivering surprise attacks to their enemies. Since those who can perform one-handed seals are naturally good at what their talents, they are even capable of performing hand seals behind themselves, leaving the enemy oblivious to the ninja's next attack.
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Name: Advanced Stealth
Rank: C
Type: Physical
Physical Requirements: N/A
Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
Restriction: -
Description: A skill gained by ninja who have begun to specialize in the art of stealth. The ninja becomes very light and quick on their feet. Their movements no longer create sound and they now gain a natural skill for hiding and camouflage.
THE BACKGROUND.

History: Rukasu was born in the Wind country, in the hot desert, in a small village away from the Sand village. The parents of Rukasu were poor and hated the hot weather most of the time, so they knew that they wanted to move. Since they were not in the sand village it wouldn't count as being a traitor, so they went to Kiri when Rukasu was at the age of eight years old.

.:Academy Arc:.
In Kiri they were able to live for free only because the parents enrolled Rukasu into the academy at the age of ten. Rukasu didn't mind at all, he as consider the popular one due to his red hair, and yellow eyes. Rukasu actually liked all the attention that he was receiving , and the friends that he was making. During the years of the Academy he felt that he should be stronger, but he wasn't satisfied at all, so he trained everyday. He had this jelousy towards the people that were better than him, however over the years of controlling his anger, he ended up not carin about anyone that had better skills. This would only promote him to train harder. He would wake up in the morning eat, and rush out to train. Most of the days his mother or father would have to bring food to him.

One day Rukasu's father watched him trained, and he just smiled as there was something that his father remembered. He walked over to Rukasu and trained him the art of Katon. His father kept a secret that he is the master of Katon for so long. He wanted his son to follow his own path, but he knew that if he taught his son the Katon technique, it would only strengthen his ninja way.

.:Genin Arc:.
For many years Rukasu had trained in many technique and different skills that helped him along the way in becoming a fine shinobi. After the Academy he became a genin, and throughout all the training he put himself in, he was able to make time to do the genin missions. There was one incident that changed his life, when he was on this mission with his team of three, the mission was for only them three as the sensei was doing another mission. In this mission of spying on the enemy, went all wrong as they were ambushed, and they had to fight there way out of the ambush. The mission was C-Rank, but it ended up as an A-Rank mission. Due to the ambush Rukasu ended up losing one of his team mates, and this changed his life, almost destroying his mind, however his anger grew more and more. From that day he swore to everyone that he will protect everyone and anyone that he is with. His will of fire was to protect, so being by that ninja way he trains almost every day in order he doesn't have to witness another team mate dying in his arms.

.:Present Arc:.
Now Rukasu is training to become a chunin, as he wants to become someone who can protect the people he cares about. His parents are still supporting everything that he doesn't and they always help him in any way that they can.
Roleplay Sample:
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It was weird as the shinobi, looked at Kiba and Kiba looked at him, they had to start training. As the skies were still blue and the wind was more calm. The training will start as the two looked at each other.

"Well now. Somehow you manage to use jutsus right? Then let me see how you do it harder. This task requires your full focus. I'll teach you a trick that higher shinobi's will know." He said as Rukasu really didn't know how he learn how to use a jutsu. The day Kiba was trying to teach him chakra control, he kinda left a little early. Which didn't do Rukasu any good, he didn't get to learn one basic move, but he had gotten to learn more complex moves.

"Watch carefully, all shinobi's have to do this." He said as he then walk upwards and was sticking to the bark of the tree and as if he was walking normally as well. Rukasu being amazed as he didn't know if he could do that or not. "Sounds like you might have all day to do this. I will let you have at it then. Do about say, 150 times and take a break as I'll double it and you know that means. You get to do 300 times. Your break time will be 10 minutes each. Got that? Now then. I'll be back. I have some business to take care off." He said as he started walking off.

"Wait!" Rukasu said but right when he could say it Kiba was gone. The insane shinobi triggered an angered vessel in his mind at Kiba for always leaving during training, it would pain him that someone like him would even care at all, but he left a clone and leaving a clone will basically give him the details later. Looking at the clone as he was more gruesome than ever. "I don't know how to control my chakra." Rukasu as he felt embarrassed to even tell someone who as the clone was expecting to laugh or something.

So Rukasu looked up at the high tree that was about four stories high. After seeing Kiba doing, Rukasu thought that if someone on his level could do it, well so can he...Taking out his katana, he started using his little knowledge he knew about Chakra, and focus more and more as he started running towards the tree, as he ran up like two steps, slashed the tree as he fell to the ground.

"Concentrate!" The clone demanded.

"Shut up, you stupid Clone." Rukasu said as he knew he was right but this training seemed hopeless because he couldn't do it. So he kept on trying and trying, focusing on his chakra not knowing where to put it but hopefully concentrating enough so he can run up the tree.

It was starting to get more and more hopeless as the clone was still laughing at Rukasu because he only got three more steps up the tree after the first two that he already did." You have to concentrate your chakra towards your feet, you scumbag." The clone said as Rukasu was getting more and more angry at the clone than on concentrating on his training.

About an hour goes by, he is still training, running up the tree as if a dog or something of the sort chasing behind him. After the five marks on the tree he had managed to go up five more marks. Rukasu was at least one-quarter up the tree. The shinobi kept on falling as he felt like he couldn't do it, but he had faith to guide him, and make him more and more focus on what he had to do, and not his surroundings.

Once Rukasu Finished his 150 tries he took a break, as he was sitting down he felt as if someone was coming but who, Rukasu didn't know but he did had a bad feeling about this someone approaching, Rukasu couldn't see him but he felt him coming somehow. Rukasu waited to see if someone would show, who would it be?
THE ARSENAL.

Academy Jutsu:
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Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Genjutsu
Range: N/A
Medium: Optical
Element: N/A
Description: This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc. They are simply optical illusions used to momentarily fool others.
Chakra Cost: 1CP per 5 clones

Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another object or person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured. The user does not gain the properties of their transformation (ie. horse like strength), and may only transform into something ranging between 1/2 of their regular size, to 2x their regular size. Thus one cannot transform into large creatures.
Chakra Cost: 1

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 10 meters
Element: N/A
Description: After performing a tiger seal, this technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead.  The object that the user switches with must be preset somewhere else in the thread, meaning that the object must have received specific mention previously in the thread.
Chakra Cost: 2

Name: Explosive Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand.
Chakra Cost: 1 (per 3 explosive notes)

Name: Kai • Release
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them, although it consumes half the chakra cost of the Genjutsu.
Chakra Cost: Cost of Genjutsu + 2CP

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu • Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to free themselves should they be tied up. It is extremely basic.  Using their physical training, the user will twist and contort their body to loosen their bindings, effectively relieving themselves of the tightness of their bindings and slipping through the restraints. This technique can only be used if the user is of equal or higher rank than their captor.
Chakra Cost: 1

Name: Chozou no Jutsu • Storage Technique
Rank: E
Type: Fuuinjutsu, Supplementary
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: A simple jutsu that allows a ninja to seal or unseal any item, mostly weapons, from scrolls or from their body. After forming the necessary handsigns, the ninja will seal the item into a scroll etc. Scrolls can also be used as ammunition for other weapons or have other seals inside of them, which expands the number of potential tricks a shinobi can use. The items themselves are unaffected by time. Ninjutsu can also be stored in scrolls, to be released when the scroll is opened, but require another person to cast said Ninjutsu; else it cannot be sealed.
Chakra Cost: 1 to seal; 1 to unseal.

Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: D
Type: N/A
Range: N/A
Element: NA
Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique.
Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)

Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: D
Type: N/A
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall.
Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
Ninjutsu - Katon:
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Name: Yōso no Renshū - Element Practice
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m)
Element: Variable
Description: The most simplistic of techniques, it is precisely what is says on the tin; practicing elemental manipulation. The technique serves no purpose in battle, but simply serves to give one practice with their respective elements, and more importantly, using elemental chakra. Those with an affinity with fire focus on the raging ferocity of the flame, generating small flames along their fingers and palms, shifting them back and forth from hand to hand. Those with an affinity for wind focus on the free-flowing, easy-going but erratic nature of wind, coaxing the air into tiny whirlwinds in the palms of their hands, spinning leaves like tops. Those with an affinity for lightning focus their minds on the wild, erratic, spastic and unpredictable nature of lightning, tracing small sparks in electrical patterns from hand to hand. Those with an affinity for earth focus on the resilient, unyielding nature of stone, taking small rocks and pebbles and slowly shaping them in their hands. Those with an affinity for water focus on the flowing, flexible nature of water, gathering a small trickle and coaxing it into intricate patterns with their fingers.
Chakra Cost: 1 per post [Made by Mors Atra]

Name: Endan - Fireball
Rank: D-A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m – 10m)
Element: Katon (Fire)
Description: Katon • Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After doing the necessary hand seals, the ninja draws chakra to their lungs before swiftly exhaling it, allowing them to blow a jet of fire from their mouth. Depending on the rank at which it is performed, Endan ranges in size and heat. Starting at a moderate level of heat and a reach of up to 3m, at D rank, and increasing in temperature to an intense heat and up to a 10m reach, when performed at A rank.
Chakra Cost: D: 4 (1 per post), C: 5 (2 per post), B: 12 (3 per post), A: 23 (5 per post)

Name: Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Katon (Fire)
Description: Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.
Chakra Cost: 5 (2 per post)

Name: Housenka no Jutsu - Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Katon (Fire)
Description: Katon • Housenka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai.
Chakra Cost: 5

Name: Ryuuka no Jutsu - Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: Katon (Fire)
Description: The user breathes fire along a cord or any other type of long object, which rushes forward in straight line catching the enemy on fire. The flames are meant to target, and assault the enemy's upper body just like a projectile weapon.
Chakra Cost: 5

Name: Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu - Mist Waltz Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range:  Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: Katon (Fire)
Description: After performing the necessary hand seals, the user is able to create and blow a flammable gas from their lungs. Once it comes in contact with fire or sparks, the gas ignites into a large fireball.
Chakra Cost: 8
Fuuton Jutsu:
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Name: Daitoppa - Great Breakthrough
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: Fuuton (Wind)
Description: This is a relatively simple technique that creates a sudden gust of wind, but its scale varies greatly depending on the user. If used by a superior shinobi, it has enough destructive power to knock down a large tree. The wind from the squall can blow away all things in the user's line of sight. A variation of the technique involves a smaller blast of wind which gets ignited with flame.
Chakra Cost: 9

Name: Kami Oroshi - Godly Wind from the Mountains
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: Fuuton (Wind)
Description: The user will generate a whirling vortex of wind which he or she can send snaking towards his or her target. This wind can be used to help cause an explosive blaze when used with certain fire and earth techniques.
Chakra Cost: 7 (2 per post)
Kirigakure Secific Techniques:
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Name: Kirigakure no Jutsu - Hidden Mist Technique
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0 - 5m), Med (5 - 10m)
Element: -
Village: Kirigakure
Description: This jutsu is developed and trained within Kirigakure as a village specific jutsu. After forming the needed hand seal, the user will place their hand over their head and cause a large amount of mist to gather. This mist is extremely difficult to see through from someone not of Kirigakure, who are used to looking through heavy mists, and are more able to do combat while within said mist. The jutsu involves kneading chakra into the mist, allowing the user to create extremely thick or thin levels of mist. Those with doujutsu or chakra sensing techniques are also able to see through this thick mist but without any aid, then you'll be blind within the mist. A C-Rank Fuuton Jutsu can dispel the mists.
Chakra Cost: 4 (2CP)

Name: Ninpou; Kiri Suramu - Mist Slam
Rank: C
Type: Weaponry
Element: --
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m~10m), Far (10m+)
Village: Kirigakure
Description: This jutsu is developed and trained within Kirigakure as a village specific jutsu. This jutsu requires no hand seals. After activation, the user will rush towards the target and make a giant swing with massive power in order to try and cleave them in half. This swing will be powerful enough to crush rock, depending on the size and momentum of the sword. Instead of using hand seals, the user will gather chakra within their arms before use.
Chakra Cost: 6
Weaponry Jutsu:
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Name: Youji - Toothpick
Rank: E
Type: Weaponry
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: N/A
Description: Though the toothpick looks like it might be a quirk of user’s, it actually functions as a weapon in battle. Similar to a senbon, the user can spit the toothpick at his/her opponents to injure them. He/she can also spit it at incoming projectiles to knock them away.
Chakra Cost: 1

Name: Ayatsuito no Jutsu - String Reeling Technique
Rank: D
Type: Weaponry
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: Ayatsuito no Jutsu is a technique utilizing wire. This string can be used in rappeling, or as a method to tie down and restrict the movement of an opponent. The properties of the wire also allows the user to guide fire down it with any number of Katon Jutsu.
Chakra Cost: 4

Name: Kage Senbon no Jutsu - Shadow Senbon Technique
Rank: D
Type: Weaponry
Range:  Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 1om)
Element: N/A
Description: This technique seems to be a variation of the Shadow Shuriken Technique, replacing shuriken with senbon. The user throws at the same time a senbon with a distracting item attached to it, and another one without it, so that the opponent will only react to the more obvious projectile and won´t notice the other senbon. However, if the opponent recognises the trick behind it, this technique is easy to evade.
Chakra Cost: 3

Name: Hitei Mushou - Flying Nail Mist Pierce
Rank: C
Type: Weaponry
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element:
Description: After forming the needed handseal, the user will emit a flying mist of small nails from his or her mouth. These small nails can travel towards his or her opponent at quite a distance and are capable of dealing minor puncture wounds.
Chakra Cost: 7

Name: Kyūsoku Shotto - Rapid Shot
Rank: C
Type: Weaponry
Range: Mid-range (5M-10M)
Description: Focusing on speed rather than power, the user rapid-fires arrows one after another, up to three arrows in quick succession. Because the user is aiming to fire more arrows faster, some power and accuracy is sacrificed in order to maintain the pace.
Chakra Cost: 6 CP [Made by Mors Atra]
Basic Genin Kit:
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Name: Genin Kit
Rank: C
Quantity: 1
Contents: 6 Kunai [6], 10 Shuriken [5], 9 Senbon [3], 10 Makibishi [2], 4 Exploding Notes [4], 3 Exploding Pouches [1], 3 Smoke Pellets [1], 12m String [4], 1 Windmill Shuriken [5], 1 File & Scissor [1].
Scrolls:
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Name: Small Scroll
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Quantity: 3
Description: Scrolls are an important asset to any ninja's arsenal, whether they are used for sealing, summoning or simple communication, scrolls have always found their home within a ninja's pouch or pocket. When stood, a small scroll will measure up to fifteen centimetres in height, with the scroll length itself reaching fifty centimetres.
Contents: Nodachi [1 Scroll - 10 slots], Chain Whip [1 Scroll - 10 Slots], 4 Tomahawks [1 Scroll - 10 Slots]

Name: Medium Scroll
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Quantity: 1
Description: Scrolls are an important asset to any ninja's arsenal, whether they are used for sealing, summoning or simple communication, scrolls have always found their home within a ninja's pouch or pocket. When stood, a medium scroll will measure up to thirty centimetres in height, with the scroll length itself reaching one metre.
Contents: 4 Fuuma Shuriken [1 Scroll - 10 Slots], 2 Spears [10 Slots]
Weapons:
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Name: Nodachi
Rank: C
Type: Medium Range - Greatsword
Quantity: 1
Description: Known as a 'Field sword', the Nodachi is a large sword which can be wielded with either one or two hands. It is basically a larger version of a katana. Compared to the katana, the Nodachi is more difficult to wield due to its size and weight, but - like any weapon - could be extremely deadly if the warrior wielding it was skilled. The length of the nodachi's hilt varied between twelve to thirteen inches (30 to 33 centimeters). Its cutting capability and range exceeded that of a katana, due to its weight and size. Nodachi's length can reach the 1.50 meters.
Area: In Scroll

Name: Chain Whip
Rank: C
Type: Medium Range - Chain
Quantity: 1
Description: A chain whip consists of several metal rods, which are joined end-to-end by rings to form a flexible chain. Generally, the whip has a handle at one end and a metal dart, used for slashing or piercing an opponent, at the other. A cloth flag is often attached at or near the dart end of the whip, and a second flag may cover the whip's handle, helping it stabilize.
Area: In Scroll

Name: Short bow
Rank: D
Type: Long Range - Bow
Quantity: 1
Description: A shortbow has a stave portion of about five feet in length and was the first of such launchers to be developed. Its lightweight frame relatively small size makes it a compact and agile weapon to use. It has the ability to fire approximately 120m with effective accuracy.
Area: On Back

Name: Plain Quiver
Rank: E
Type: Long-Range
Quantity: 1 Quiver, 30 arrows
Description: Made of leather that's been died bluer. Two and a half feet long, contains 30 33-inch long iron tipped arrows.
Area: On Back

Name: Fuuma Shuriken
Rank: D
Type: Long Range - Projectile
Quantity: 4
Description: Named after the famous clan, the Fuuma Shuriken is a large, four-bladed shuriken possessing pre-eminent sharpness and lethality. Its four blades can be collapsed for easy storage, leading to its nickname, the 'Shadow Windmill'. In its folded state, all four arms of the shuriken are folded together. When fully unfolded, the large shuriken can be thrown through the air causing great damage.
Area: In Scroll

Name: Spear
Rank: D
Type: Medium Range - Polearm
Quantity: 2
Description: A spear is a pole weapon consisting of a shaft, usually of wood, with a pointed head. The head may be simply the sharpened end of the shaft itself, as is the case with bamboo spears, or it may be made of a more durable material fastened to the shaft.
Area: In Scroll

Name: Tomahawk
Rank: D
Type: Medium Range - Hatchet
Quantity: 4
Description: The tomahawk is a relatively small axe. Its blade is crafted out of lightweight stone. The tomahawk due to its size is able to be wielded with great ease and can be stored quickly. This weapon is versatile in the fact that can be fashioned as a ranged throwing weapon, or for quick close-quarter strikes.
Area: In Scroll
FACE CLAIM.

Character Claim: Sting Eucliffe, Fairy Tail
Source: Google Search Sting Eucliffe, Fairy Tail
Image URL: Sting Eucliffe, Fairy Tail


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PostSubject: Re: Hakai, Rukasu [Kiri Genin] Sun 21 Apr 2013, 10:57 am

I finished my new character, My old character is locked up, and I didn't wanted to go back to that... So this will be my new character...
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PostSubject: Re: Hakai, Rukasu [Kiri Genin] Sun 21 Apr 2013, 2:00 pm

  • You mention nothing of your character's height.

  • Rukasu wrote:
    I say he is hot-tempered, and others say that he is mis-understood.

    Remove any first person language, it is not allowed.

  • Your Combat Style is a little short. I'd like it to be at least 250 words. It currently stands at 151 words. You mention nothing of your character's weakness(es), so try to mention those.

  • Your history is a little short. Try padding it out a little more, maybe by separating it into arcs.

  • As a Weaponry user, you may start with 4 scrolls. You currently have 3. Not compulsory, but I'm just letting you know.

  • Your Medium scroll has no contents?




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PostSubject: Re: Hakai, Rukasu [Kiri Genin] Mon 22 Apr 2013, 12:48 am

Hello Aaron, or to whomever will check this next, I fixed/added to everything you wanted me to fixed/add.
Thank you please check.
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PostSubject: Re: Hakai, Rukasu [Kiri Genin] Mon 22 Apr 2013, 1:25 am

Approved
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PostSubject: Re: Hakai, Rukasu [Kiri Genin] Mon 22 Apr 2013, 6:36 am

Just to inform whoever is going to approve my char next, that I simply changed a few jutsus around because I am headed to Kiri, Thank you and I hope this wasn't a big problem. Oh btw I put every in quotes that were in spoilers so that you can see...
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PostSubject: Re: Hakai, Rukasu [Kiri Genin] Mon 22 Apr 2013, 9:02 pm

Approved 2/2
Don't forget to make an account here

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PostSubject: Re: Hakai, Rukasu [Kiri Genin] Thu 02 Jan 2014, 7:15 pm

Archived due to inactivity.
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PostSubject: Re: Hakai, Rukasu [Kiri Genin] Thu 23 Jan 2014, 7:57 am

Unarchived due to user request.
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PostSubject: Re: Hakai, Rukasu [Kiri Genin] Fri 24 Jan 2014, 7:30 am

I looked over my Character and I know that I don't want to make any changes so please approve.
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PostSubject: Re: Hakai, Rukasu [Kiri Genin] Fri 24 Jan 2014, 11:37 am

Approved again.
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PostSubject: Re: Hakai, Rukasu [Kiri Genin] Sat 08 Feb 2014, 4:12 pm

Archived - due to character death.
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